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This is it really. With the rewite I'd to consider this above all. It's why I'm highly considering rewriting Mutronic someday to basically do my version of what the movie would be and should be like. You can keep the basic plot point but when it comes down to it you simply think "what would Takaya REALLY would have done?" Simply puyt, keep the basic plot but imagine it if things where the proper power level. Guyver Zoanoid would ahve dominated the fight (which he did in the past), he most likely would have played with Guyver US and the end would be the same. The already damaged Control Medal receiving a bullet would give Guyver US the opening needed to win.

The last fight with Chronso has taken a lot longer than I expected thanks to work. But I'm finally making head way. One of the major things that pretty much gave me writers block the last fortnight was Taylor Smith. I just wouldn't have him become a Proto Zoalord Murakami clone! So I've done some investing in time in the character design and given this Apprentice Zoalord some real nasty. I'm not going to go into it here to keep the surprise but he'll be fun to use. This will be a character I would like to also post a fic of with some fan-art so it's got me back in a creative grove. This weekend should see be working on the site rediesgn, I'm not sure if it will be stuff I'll upload as I'm working yet but I'm chaning web programs and upgrading as I go. Hopefully it'll make those 10,000 odd HTML pages of links a little easy to manage!

Yeah there are a lot of things to consider like this with the rewrite. The Guyver Zoanoid wasn't exactly used well. This time around he will be the early power house of Chronos, a being stronger than that of a Gigantic Guyver. But like all characters there are checks and balances. Guyver Zoanoid is very strong, but his mega-smasher would be only around twice that of a normal Guyver to rivaling that of a Warrior Guyver. His vibrational blades on the other hand would be the same as a normal Guyver meaning he wouldn't want to get in a sword fight with Warrior Guyver. The Warrior Guyver has ulmited stamina, Guyver Zoanoid does not. But how long would Warrior Guyver be able to stand against him in the first place? Warrior Guyver isn't going to be boosted fan-fic wise, he will stay where he is. Bare in mind this verison of the story it is Gigantic Guyver and the Gigantic Dark by this stage that are the major threats from the "good guys". Warrior Guyver and Warrior Guyver 2 by the time Revenge is done basically have two major foes to fear while the Zoalords are being reprocessed and Alkanphel sleets, namely the Guyver Zoanoid and Kron. They also have their own issues and stories to follow as before, though this time Guyver Zoanoid won't be such a non character.

Very nicely wrote! I like it.

The rewrite is coming along, I'm now at the last fight with Chronos for this part of the story. After that will be the new introduction of the Grakken. I've yet to decide how to do this exactly or at what point. The only thing that is certain is this time Guyver US isn't thinking she's dead, he knows she's being kidnapped (as you guys saw in that Time War story). How this is to be done though is the question, the only thing for certain is there will be a lot more than just one Grakken. BAsically once the above part is done that will finish off Part 1 of the story and lead into Part 2 which will focus more on Guyver 3 than Guyver 1.

Explains a lot Hate moving, finished the last one in Aug last year after finally buying a house. I an't moving ever again!

It's no in the Manga, only the 2nd Live Action movie, even then it was only mentioned I think once. Here is a preview of what's going into Union Part 1 in regards to this group.

Hells yeah! Common Dark Armed Dragon! Booya! ...What? Oh right. Happy... New... Yar!...? Right. NOT a pirate. Keep forgetting that. Where have you being hiding????

you should ask that Canadian slacking writer and artist that shows up from time to time and writes the WGC fic that question

I believe that's a Yu-Gi-Oh! reference... You live!!!!

You're not alone is set backs, don't worry about it and when it's ready it's ready.

Wut?

Welcome back guys Don't know what it was about the end of of 2011 but it's being manic busy for me too! New company to work for soon as well. This is very worth noting. The Rewrite hasn't hit this yet, but the Tempus Group isn't going to be your standard Chronos group at all. I don't want to give away too much, but it will be connected to the creation Guyver 2F control medal in the rewrite and the recovery of the Guyver 2's and Guyver Zoanoid's control medal. Guyot set the group up after the events in Chronos LA to continue to the work of Fulton Balcus who had Natasha working on the Unit that Guyver US now uses and trying to figure out how to disable the Gen system that stopped the unit from merging with the Zoalord. I don't want to give away much other than that as they will be a part of the rewrite to give a new sub story within Union and Revenge. But simply put if it was not for them, the fan-fiction wouldn't be what it is.

Being a long while since I'd a chance to do some update on what's happening. Last December and the end of November wasn't a good time for fic writing, basically my job kicked into over drive and I spent a lot of time driving for 5 hours to a site in Northern Ireland... GREAT Milage and money, sucky for fic writing. But in the end job comes first (money is what puts this site up after all)! Things are settling down, hopefully more so over the next month or so meaning I can get back to my fic writing ways. First week back on the train, and back to writing, after some beinging pains of "What the hell was I writing last month?" I've finally wrote more than 1 line this morning and have basically got to the point where Guyver US's story and that of Guyver 1 meets. I'm sure I said this once before, but I'm sooooo looking forward to this story being wrote as it's hard to do. intro stories are hard to make right, more so if you've a huge cast. It deffo isn't fun to have a character you like writing about in Jason and you can't use ANY of his Warrior Unit stuff yet never mind the Dreadnought armour. All in all it's good though as I get to show the meaner side of Jason, the one that still wants vengance! I'm still not close to the point I can easily guess when this part of Union will end, I'd say I'm about half way with the story at 15K words. Part 2 of Union should be more fun to write, less intro and more of a Focus on the build up towards and in Chronos Island. Hope you all had a nice X-Mas and year years!

Soil - Halo in a away while the song reminds me of both Sho and Agito from different sides. More so Sho.

and hello 2012 Happy new year all and the best luck!

Ok, I now actually own this It';s a tiket magazine that was given with the orginal movie when it showed in Japan. it is basically a short comic explaining the danger of a Guyver Zoalord (the main possible bad guy of the first movie). It also comes with a mini cd that explains the same in Japanese and has sound effects of the movie in it with a Japanese guy explaining what is happening.

Time for an another update. Union of the Guyvers will be a two part story when the rewrite is done. The first part is basically a setup for the whole fan-fiction and will introduce the main players and explain what is currently happening. At the moment the main character I've yet to focus on is Agito and what remains of Zeus Thunderbolt. After that I want to include a new part to the story, and build on Guyver US and his part in this new section. This will then lead to the end of Part 1, which will end with the Grakken. This is about half way now and I've cut out most of the old story that simply doesn't fit the above. It's taking longer than I thought as while I'm writing new stuff in, fixing old stuff to match what we now know i've also to keep in mind the current fan-fiction and where I want it to go. Overall it seems to be working well.

This is the big question about the character. she isn't just eye candy, Guyot knows something about her and what she's after. But as for what, only Takaya knows and he's not revealed it yet. Even her connection to Risker isn't exactly confirmed. Only that she calls herself Guyver II F, a name she could have taken simply for the fact it was built from Guyver 2's unit. From reading it, you simply wouldn't know fully yet what it means. Your theory could be sound but we'll see in up coming chapters. I'm guessing she has a lot more fights left, and it's not going to be against just Chronos. The January chapter shows her taking out a Grislda's weapons (the blades on her head) and basically disabling a Zoalord. For a standard Guyver simply put, she's on par with Guyver 3 for being simply leathal.

It's drawn by one of their artists. They sell a large version of it on their site for 20 USD

Hello guyverthatkills, You're best off uploading it to an image hosting site. http://imageshack.us/ is handy, it'll give you code once you've uploaded the picture. Simply use that in your post and that will link the picture to it. Regards, Brian

I've got to say, that is a nice cover! I'm with you there, will buy it for the cover alone.

Update time. I'm about 14K words into the new start of Union. I'm at the point Gigantic Guyver and Guyver US will meet (though it's not happened just yet), but it's not going to be the same as before at all. The big change to before (this isn't giving away much) is Sho will be around to help ACTF get established in the wider USA. He (and later Agito and co) will spend more time with the Sean, Cori and Jason before they go on their mission for the War Relic. The main reason for this change is to basically build up trust and the relationships between this characters and to give Agito and chance to be.... well Agito. It will also give a chance to build up the Chronos storyline and what happened to the six fallen Zoalords. Then the part where the Grakken attack, I actually want it to make sense. Like Time War they will be an unknown, part of the build up to Time War and then towards Rescue. I'm not sure yet if this will turn Union into a 2 parter or not. I'll decide that the closer I get to 4K words. No ETA as of yet, the story simply isn't at that stage yet, when I get closer to the point of what I'm writing can link into what I wrote in the past that will get easier to judge. Anyway hope you all had a fun Halloween, and are looking forward to the holidays!

Good start, I actually like the idea that after 7 Days Chronos would strike back and take over again Chronos LA.

Very nice work!