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I'm on page 37 of 40 in the rewrite of Part 4. Basically that means "soon" I'll be putting up the next part of the re-wrote Time War Part 4 (formally part 1). At a rough guess I'd say we're looking at the weekend after next (so not Good Friday weekend which is tomorrow) for the next part to be published. This weekend I "should" if no one in the family blows up their computer get time to put in the part from Guyver Out Of Control and add in Cyber Guyver. Once that is done, and I finish the rewrite proper I'll give the story a redraft after reading the whole story again from the new part 1 till the end of part 4 (anyway I need to do that so I know what I'm doing for Part 5 and what plots need to end there). Anyway, important thing to note... the site will not be closing any time soon Weltall2

This is exactly why the fan-fiction needs re-writing. Yes some of the power levels have indeed changed, not just Gigantic Guyver's. Zeus and Kron both are more powerful than previously and would be close on an overall raiting to 80% to 85% off off Dreadnought in the rewrite. A Gigantic will splat a Bio-Titan with relitive ease now compared to before one on one. But a Bio-Titan has being designed with the Gignatic in mind as much as it was desgined to take on a Warrior Guyver's firepower. In groups of 5 or more Bio-Titans combined firepower will make life hard for a Gigantic Guyver. Gigantic Guyver would have to get them into small groups and kill off 1 or 2 at a time or risk using his Giga-smasher and hopefully killing them at the expense of maybe losing his armour has it recharges. Zeus will have a lot more story before Dreadnought shows up in the re-write. in fact the whole Dreadnought angle will happen differently this time completely, Zeus will be the main power character on the good side along with Zeugma for most of All Things Change, Dreadnought (as in "the Real" Warrior Guyver) only appears towards its end and will not be there minus the Dreadnought armour for a who is the real WG plot, the real story is Lorcan (see what Faye said in 7 days) and what happens with the Mercs before the Grakken and Chronos attack. Psi-Guyver will stil be the most powerful ACTF Guyver for awhile and will have more of a story struggling with the idea and the loss of her brother and not knowing if he's out there somewhere or some psycho. All This bringing things back on topic is linked to Time War and the events it kicks off. Speaking of which, I'm now at the part where Galen joins the story properly and is talking with the other characters in the story. I'm over 3/4's the way done looking at the page count. I woudln't get too excited just yet as the re-write itself of part 4 needs one of it's sections re-wrote (the Female Guyver 2 vs Guyver 1 story in the alternative reality and Cyber Guyvers first intro to the story needs to be redone still, though that shoudln't take too long it requires me to do it at home and watch the vid a few times of Guyver Out of Control).

All of them can be read as is. If you're on about stories that have being re-wrote. Time War parts 1 to 3 are the new parts of the re-wrote story, part 4's preview is at the start of this and is still being rewrote. 7 Days Part 7 was wrote taking into account what would be re-wrote and has the correct power levels for the Gigantic Guyver for example.

It was cute... but overall crappy battle. Things will be more interesting when they are hunted down by Chronos!

Ok the story continues to be re-wrote. It's a little slower than planned because I've had to change events a little but is working out well. I'm at the moment at the point where Solom has awoken and explained who he is and his relationship with Jason's Unit. Galen won't this time have a meaningless fight with Warrior Guyver's shielding. At the moment I can't give and estimate on when the fiction will be done but I'm well over the halfway mark and I'd say there is about 1/3 of the story left to go. Looking ahead Time War 5 though will grow a lot compared to what is was before as it has to wrap up events of the last 4 parts of the story as well as what it did in the past.

Vincent will be interesting lets put it that way. He'll be the last Disciple Zoalord made and will have a lot of build up to the event. To what exactly I'll not say just yet but the ideas I have for him are good enough working ideas based off what Juggernought has already posted. the character will be shown before he's even zoa-fromed so his growth will happen from there. He's also going to be mixed into the Netasha story line. As for the rest I'm going to be doing a review at some point in the next fornight (basically when Time War Part 4 is finished) and will review go gets what Unit and how it works best for the story. The only certainty now is that Azaar's character gets the Stellar Unit. But there are still other dormant Units I haven't assigned a host to yet and will work that out then.

Yes, though I wouldn't go too crazy just yet. Remember the re-write will be changing Union a lot to give it more story (though what happened in the past will still happen, though the Grakken event is a lot differnt though and I don't want to spoil it). Your character though will be in Union, not so much so in Time War and Revenge but will be in Resuce. Note: I've a simple rule for this: 1. The story needs to be cannonly correct. In otherwords it doesn't mess up time lines, events or story of what I have wrote other others in the fan-fictions have wrote. 2. It's good reading and not... what did TheGuyversWill call it once s "Fan Masterbation" story. Basically meaning you don't decide to have Dreadnought, Zeus and so on all standing beside your character and bowing at the awesumness of your character for defeating Alkanphel etc... Basically it needs to be a story worth reading. The simple judge of this would be the readers on the messageboard and of course me. Much like Vengence best thing to do is simply post it and I just copy and paste it up into the offical site. Note timeline wise if you write about your character now he's no Guver yet and you don't really have a clue how it happened exactly or what I plan for the Unit.... So give yourself time.

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I was about to say "Sorry but we're limited to the Units of 7 Days and this Relic's Single Unit and there are no means for them to modify the Unit..." but then I realised there is also the Stealth Unit WG Unit.... Ummm... The game is back on I'd say. So the question is between Dorian / Yuri and Zeus Thunderbolts character between who gets the P5 like Jasons Unit or gets the WG Shadow Unit and also there is still the Black Unit. Note to anyone thinking "OMG the Black Unit is the booby prize!". The Black Unit will probably have the most story as everyone and their Uncle will want it after story 10 once they realise it's the only Unit free of the Gen Limiatation device that is more powerful than a standard Unit. Making it VERY sought after.

Yup it is not going to be easy, there has being some very good work put into their characters. I'd like to thank them all for that. Has you said there is only 1 Stellar WG though so the choice won't be easy. IF though the still want their character in the fan-fiction that is there choice and yes the story can fit them in if they would like. Though they aren't all going to be the WG doesn't mean they'd not have an interesting story none the less. But again that is up to the writer, not me. This character is great, I can take the short story Vengeance wrote as is and put it in the character section right away (If the site was updated properly so that Character stories were not all from me). Simply put he's what I'd imagine a human zoa-form killing machince to be in ACTF, a good killer who uses his combat skills efectively to take out does in the way of the mission. You can tell from reading it why Carter would want this man using the Unit, it simply would make him an even better killer. BUT, is he the best person for a basically a firepower Unit? I'd say he'd addapt to it pretty dam well but at times Yuri gets up close an personal. Being honest here I'll not be making him the Steller Warrior Guyver. But he'll be using the Prototype 5 Unit (that is the same as Jason's old Unit) if Vengance is up for that? This character I also like alot. Destroyer Guyver has put in a lot of work. But sorry again I don't see him being the Stellar Warrior Guyver. What I do see him though as is the holder of the Black Unit and in a twist chosen by Agito to be that said host. While I know you wanted him to have more of a relationship with Jenny or Zeugma I don't see this happening for two reasons: Jenny -> She didn't say in the ACTF HQ much. When ever she wanted down time and at night before 7 Days she would stay in the house Jason is in now (their parents). Zeugma -> She was surrounded a most times since her revival by various different high level people. Simply put he'd not get the chance to really know her before she decided to join Jason. The time between her awakening and Jason's return is only a matter of weeks. She would have spent more time training with the Guyvers so that they are better capable of facing Alknaphel one day. Personally I see him working well in the story but more so as someone being manipulated by and also trying to manimpulate Agito. This character will be the Stellar Warrior Guyver. I enjoyed reading his back history and how he knows Cori and Sean and ACTF in it's early days. The character needs a little more edge to him for Carter to decide on him getting the Unit. So I'd give him more feild experince and have him working for a special opps team linked with Dr Drake. The overall reason this character wins is because of a simple event. There is a ruined Grakken fleet in Orbit around Earth. He's one of the few people that has both combat experince and through working for Dr Drake experince in developing and working on weapon systems. As such he's got more of a chance being out there alone in Outerspace being actually able to find something useful. Alas no Guyver Unit for Vincent. But I did enjoy reading about this character and would like to further his story. How do you feel about him being an more early character in the fan-fiction and him becoming the 12th Disciple Zoalord? Thanks guys for putting in the effort. I really enjoyed seeing you guys being something creative to the story. This compition is over.

Thing is Weltall2 in a story you don't balance things out in the favour of or make things even with the "good" and "bad" sides. Even more so if you do not want the story to end sooner rather than later. There are other factors at play for you to figure out. It's not for me to spoil the story because you're worried about power levels (of indvidual characters or size of one sides army).

Azaar and Vengance sorry but I've not had enough time to read your posts fully but will reply later. Yes mater, above average intelligence is fine. Just lets not have a supermind here that can without a Guyver unit in his Blue armour (never mind V2) can somehow magically kill Bio-Titan's. Those things are killer's, nothing really short of a Guyver can take one on without backup. It wouldn't take much to be conscripted into ACTF. Leading any type of anti-Chronos force would be enough. ACTF at the point of Union is in bad need of raw manpower. Being a supermind wouldn't be needed at all. Now if you mean ACTF BEFORE X-Day that's a different matter. But you'd need to go into a lot more detail as to why. Being Anti-Chronos before X-Day would need a lot of story, more so to explain how the character even knew of them and survived.

Okay wait a minute. I thought Natasha wasn't going to be a Uber powerful character? I though she doesn't have a Gigantic armor? Are we headed down DBZish territory? Who said Gigantic armour? I said Control sphere. I wouldn't call Elminator a Gigantic and he has a control sphere in his shoulders. Umm what isn't allowed? At the very most she'd equal Dreadnought (hense a Gigantic Exceed in power level) which would put them both in equal terms to what Takaya himself has done. But I get your point. There is a very tight control on power levels, more so in my story. The only exception is Black Darzerb who out side the Guyver Zoalord breaks the mold. But he's a very rare exception, more so because most Unit's in the fan-fiction are Gen made and with them come a restriction. Think about it though, I tend to plan things out. There is a reason there is a powerful character in the story. You've only seen the start of it in 7 days. The story on the Unit the Grakken captured is not finished yet. But again think about it, if this Unit goes into a Gen made (though Grakken captured) Unit reproduction system, what do you think will happen? The 3rd Black Unit is in ACTF hands. The question is will anyone figure out that this Unit has the potential to make another VERY powerful Zoa-form Guyver?That's one of the danagers in the story. Every story needs them, but that's not to say the character or Unit will have a long life span to even become this danger.

Read my edits above. You're getting too focused on powers, not enough story.

Tip - Forget hand to hand weapons, he won't have them. the idea for him is you're already dead before you can get to him. Tip 2 - Don't worry about powers, read the edit to my post above about your character long long before he became a Guyver. I want how that character fits into tha fan-fic. How you'd fit him into story 1 (Union), 3 (Revenge), 4 (Resuce) and 5 (All Things). What would be the realistic roll your character could provide and basically how would you maximise cameo time if he's simply just saying "HI".

Vibrational swords work by sonics. The swords vibration causes a sound barrier of sorts around the blade that disrupts the object in front of it. The sword itself never makes contact with the object it cuts. It's cut before it even gets there. But without air the weapon is useless. Hense why in the OVA when Guyver 1's sword clashes with Thancrus' we get that bad sound effect...

Guys too much focus on flashy powers not enough character basically. Remember he's a Warrior Unit. That already comes with some restraints on his powers and more so power levels. But from what I've read you've not focused enough on that he's designed for space battles, but you guys then go and use sonic weapons.... guys vacum of space = sonic weapons are useless... So he'd not have them. Remember Star wars, Starteck etc are all fantasy... there wouldn't be any cool sound effects if that was real as... sound can't travel in the vacum of space as there is no air. In fact given the raw size of space battles and the unlikely hood of that battle being close this character would be almost purely ranged. E.G. The Prug'stall of the Warrior Units. Super smart sounds great in theory... But then you've to plan out what the supersmart character will do. Which isn't easy. Remember I'll have to write this character into my story from what you guys base this character on. Just simply saying this man is a great marksman and a natural killer would make him more writeable without having to think of genious senarios for him to play out to show that he's supersmart. It also gives him an ability that puts him into the story, a marksman could even support Guyver US with his high powered rifle at a distance. Also even Dreadnought would have trouble with 10 bio-titans.... Even more so together and as shown to Zeus a lot more so if Drano is evnvoled. A human in armour getting a Bio-Titan body count would be rarey than me winning the Euro millions jackpot twice. From this point on, forget about powers, the Unit etc. Just focus on the host. How your character would fit into the story. The character will be in Story 1, possible story 4, and then story 5 and wrote into 7 Days when it gets it's updated. So how would you think your character would fit into those stories. What would your character contribution be? Is it just a cameo, is he joking with friends in the canteen? Is he a Merc fighting in Brazil? Etc etc.

i wouldn't get too cought up with powers... I'm looking for character, not powers though thats good in an overall package don't make the mistake of just focusing on that.

Yup, this guy is simple raw power. No messing no fussing raw power. Basically think of him as the Hulk of the Guyver stories only, this one has complete control over himself and won't be shouting "Guyver Darzerb smash!". As said before in simple power terms this being is the most powerful creature alive in the fan-fiction at this moment in time. But that's not to say he is the best or unbeatable. Just don't be on the receiving end of one of his punches!

Being honst that is just a bonus. What I'm mainly looking for a good character.What the person beleives are (now while some people might not say they have them, the fact is they do, even someone who doesn't beleive in God still has some belief in them in whatever it is they think responsible for their existance.. even if it's poof 4billion years later the right conditions lead to mankind and eventually me... that's still a belief even if you just happen to follow science!), what is your characters moral compass, who is responsible for it? Does the character have family, are they still alive? Have some of them joined Chronos or if the character is in Chronos do they have relitives on the other side in ACTF? All these types of things need to be considered.

Design wise both are up for grabs. But bare in mind it's power level would be equal to the orginal Warrior Guyver / Warrior Guyver 2 / Warrior GuyverC. But it's abilities are for Space battle. So for example off hand it's unlikely to have sound based weapons and more range than a normal Warrior Guyver. Apart from that go for it. Forgot to add, for me another deciding factor is how complete this character is and how well he fits in the story. This post wont be decided in a week / month but I would like to put the human host / zoa form host of the story into the re-write so the characer can develop in the rewrite (so basically the human part needs to be done before Time War is complete as the character whoever she / he is will be in the Union storyline). Also if you think you're the next Matt and want to draw the character and go all out and colour etc that ok too.

I rarely do this as I like to give surprises myself, but I've being thinking about this Unit. At the moment as he's a decent bit off there story behind this character (called by the fan that came up with him Dark Star Guyver) hasn't really being given a huge amount of story. So I'm basically going to give you guys a chance to develop your own character that will use this unit and will be then brought into the fan-fiction. The moral compass that you give the character will basically decide how this character will go with future events. There is a few conditions that will bind your characters history. He'll come from one of 3 camps friends list. Basically (and this is giving away a little bit of the story) only a Warrior Guyver will be able to find this lost ship. That means that the character created has to be form the following groups or have friends with them or a decent connection. 1) ACTF. One of their new Warrior Guyvers or Warrior Guyver 2 / 3 can access the ship the retrieve the Unit. 2) Jason and his group of freinds. 3) Chronos. They have Warrior Guyvers too. So there you go. This will basically be decided by me. But I'll basically go with what the fandom decides. Have fun guys... though bare in mind this story won't happen until the re-write is finish and will be the next story after Story 9.

This site won't ever be going that inactive again unless we finish the story and simply stop.. Yup there was a period when not much was posted or done and I completely lost interest in the story. Thanks to Takaya re-capturing my interest in making a good proper not overpowered story I'm back basically. the site has being getting constant updates for over a year now though still needs a lot of work. As you can see Matt's back being active... Allen is lucking somewhere and James is around somewhere. The re-write thats hit my storys are a lot more extensive than I orginally planned (though Time War needed it so for me it works fine). Don't worry guys I an't going anywhere this time. Story wise I'm at the point Solom has recovered in modren times. It'll be a nice meet between Jason and him. Thanks for the support guys!

Update time. I'm over the half way mark (I think, depends on how much I add). I've done some more character development giving names to people who'll appear later in All Things Change when the story goes back to Area 51. Allison (that was her name) is now more of a character and will not be simply forgotten about in later stories. In thinking about this, once the rewrites get more complete I'll be making a character bio page that will give more information about the characters in use in the story, but while I think this is a good idea it's something that I'll not be doing just yet, most likely I'll look to doing this once Union, Time War, Revenge and Rescue are completed. Overall I like how the story is going, I need to revisit it before I post it as there are parts that need more detail. But the story reads better and makes more sense. Martin and the Grakken are defeated a little more easily than before but in the end Time War was never really about either of them. In saying that the lead up to it is longer than before so it evens out a bit. I'm getting close to the part Warrior Guyver redrosts Solom, so once that happens we get to the good stuff. Can't really give an ETA as of yet but it's coming along which is the important thing.

Pervs! Anyway lets get this topic back on track. Time line wise when the fiction catches up with the Out Of Control anime the story line is at the point where Female Guyver 2 and Guyver 1 are fighting. When I get back to it I'll probably re-write it again to show the battle from Cyber Guyver's view point and explain why he's looking for backup. His story will basically lead to Revenge as it did before.