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Zeugma is broke up as follows Zeug - Ma, think closest would be Zoo-g Ma would the easist way to describe it. G'Kor, would be basically like G Kor, but it wouldn't be like Gee Kor, it should be more shorter sounding for G, if this makes sense would be kinda like Gic-kor.

hey Largo, give me some examples and I'll help you out.

Progress update. Part 3 is coming along better than expected. There are 4 more sections roughly left to finish before I end that part. The first is a re-write of the Kron / Zeugma V Guyver Zoalord battle (aka Guyver Zoalord wins in 5 seconds of fighting because he gloated a little). 2Nd can't say as it's a new part to this story in the re-write. 3rd Rewrite of the defeat of the different projects. This is mostly done, only Solom's is left, which will end as it did before the re-write. 4th The ending of Part 3 basically. This will go into a little between the power struggle of Draven and G'Kor. All of those 4 remaining sections of the story are at various stages of completion. It's looking very likely that the story will be done in the next fourtnight or so. Note it's no where near as being as Part 2, at a rough guess it''ll be about 1/3 the size.

Glad you liked that Zoaknight. See that was what was hard to get pre-write. The Guyver Zoalord must have had help from someone to happen within the at the time Creator group. It was left to soem very obsure hints that developed much later that this was the case. Data files being the main base of that. In the re-write I've allowed myself to turn the Creators I'd named into another race. That gave me A LOt more room to manuver. You see the results in Time War it simply works better. The Creators are left alone, the Uranus are still away from Earth and the Federation are simply not in the story. It allows me to do a lot more scope to plan the story. It also meant I could make G'Kor the bastard he was meant to be from much eariler on! In the re-write of All Things no Gen forces will still not come to Zeugma's aid. Update time: The fix is moving along for Time War part 3. It's about 5.5K words long now. It doesn't look like it's going to be a very long part of the story. I guess I'm about only going to be at about 8.5 top words when its done (about 2 / 3 weeks away if things go to plan for the update to be on the site). At that point I'll be able to get to actually use Jason in the story!!! Sean will need to be a little more glumey and cranky due to Cori on the missing lists. Aceaer Martin will be in the story and things will pretty much go as they did before. Though Solom and Galen will be stranded on Earth. They will be the new side story of Time War 4 and 5. By the time WG is coming back to the present Solom will be dead (not much of a spoiler as he died in the orginal story, just at a later point in the story).

I'd aggree there, all Revenge needs is a little added detail on a few parts. the flow of the story itself though is grand. but in saying that, REvenge really needs to be done around the same time as the WG 2 story, they are heavily linked. Thinking about it WG2 story needs to be done before Revenge so the character works better and when duped by Agito it makes sense. Edit: Actually I think this has anwered my own question of what to do next. For the story to make sense, I've to do Union next so the relationships are there properly for G1, G US, WG and G3. Basically that shapes evertyhing from there out and explains events like 7 Days 7 where Agito is seen joining forces with ACTF.

I'm not going to give much away but just need to clarify something. Even before the rewrite Dreadnought isn't a "perfect" example of a Matrix bound Warrior Guyver. Remember it was blasted by Alkanphel, when damaged it looked for the most simular damaged Gen tech to bond with. This will be given a greater explaination much later in the fiction, basically in the story after 7 Days when we've exectively a living MAtrix. But just thought you guys should factor that in with your guesses to what Natasha might become. WG + WG Control Sphere + damaged matrix = Dreadnought. WG-N + WG COntrol SPhere + Damaged Matrix + Crystalite infection = Rival female like Dreadnought (don't read too much into that, she's go a name for the new mode but not saying it here and or how different she is to Dreadnought).

Sho for the very same reason. I'd like to see Agito properly lose just to see how the character would react to it (if he's left alive to do so). Also so Sho could wipe the smug look off his face.

At the moment I'm debating with myself to what story will be re-wrote next. The one I'm most looking forward to personally is All Things Change. The title says it all it's due to be changed a decent bit but will still overall be the same story. After fleshing out Zeugma and Kron's characters a decent bit in Time War it'll be interesting now to give them their more modren storyline. All Things Change as it is fails to do that, mainly because it was trying to do too much bringing in what where new characters with big back story... simply put it didn't work. Also the Mercs, different people have asked that they are not killed off basically as they are introduced. I aggree with that, so the only logical way for it to work, is they simply leave ACTF, and don't go up to the most powerful enemy's they have and piss them off right away. Makes no sense at all that they would go against ACTF and Chronos. So they will have a different story (not saying what it is, only that it will be different and will continue on after 7 Days). Warrior Guyver 5 will be happening differently to what happened in the present story. Simply put the character will know he's not Jason and is a lot more of a bastard about it (read 7 Days p 7 and what happened to Faye). Soo you can see I am looking forward to All Things change being made into something better that matches up more to the style of Mettings, Strange Worlds and 7 Days (stories with decent planning). But heres the thing, I can't really just jump from Time War to All Things. So the question is what story will I rewrite next. Overall I'm looking at Union. It's not that I'm not looking forward to it. The main things will be the start of the story will be Guyver US and ACTF V Washington based zoanoids, Cori being kidnapped, Agito's icey relationship with Sho, a short part on what happened to Zeus Thunterbolt before Union, Guyver US being a capable fighter before he meets G1 and Alkanphel's plan working won't be just a foot note at the end of the story. So overall there is some nice things to write about here, things that help with the build up to Time War and so on. Then there is the option of going right into Revenge... The story is cool, there is nothing I want to remove only want to add more detail to it and change the way it is wrote from a script. I'll give more weight to to the meeting of Alkanphel and Jason. But overall out of all the old stories this requires the least actual change and nothing being removed. Then there is Rescue, this basically will be a new story... simply put not what I'm aiming to do until Union, Time War, Revenge and the WG2 story are complete first. So question is what one is next?

Not likely. He's more obsessed with having the Test Units kill each other and how they can tell him more about his fathers project than anything else. Doing the above simply removes one of his test Subjects and gives him nothing for it. As for Natasha no comment

Guyver zoanoid, Guyver Zerabubuse, Black Darzerb, Warrior Guyver Thancrus, Warrior Guyver Vamore. Together all 5 will be very nasty. That's not including the likes of Tonnin at the command of Imakarum. I think Chronos is in safe hands at the moment.

There is also a Warrior Guyver Thancrus.

Only a few subtle things will change for Martin. First off the Grakken does not escape in Galen's old ship (it would be locked out of that). That ship will have a new story side story that gets more important after 7 Days. The Grakken (which btw is will be the eldest one on Earth so the leader) will also be in Resuce as the main so called "bad guy" and will instead escape in a Grakken light ship. Cyber Guyver will pretty much have the same story as before, though will have more history before coming into the main time line, this though will be based in the world of FG2 where she is defeated by Sho. That is where his story will be first told before he uses the GZ event to go back in time. G US will again have the same story, though taking the view that he learned all his powers back when he fought the Zoalord Fulton Balcus and Guyver Zoanoid (who really kicked the ****e out of him until Cori landed a lucky bullet to the c-medal). So he's a lot more kick ass in this re-write. This time it's an Enzyme 3 not a Zerabubuse that gives him a real fight that he needs G1 to help with. Cori isn't belived dead, she's simply kidnapped by the Unknown red 4 armed alien Guyvers.

Monday update time. Those of you who read this: viewtopic.php?f=29&t=4454 That is basically now the basis of what I'm writing at the moment. Though it's being given a lot more story and having parts removed that no longer work. I'm also adding in events for the places new in Time War 1 and 2 (e.g. the Floating City) so that it now ties in with the two parts before it. There'll be come more good moments after the point Kron and Zeugma fall and before WG gets involved to beet up the story. Overall though I'm sticking to the plan to end that part of the story at the point just befrore Jason and modren time starts being wrote about. Hopefully we'll have a Feb/March update with it.

Iamkarum's enchancements are more subtle than what happens to the other Zoalords. Again it's the main reason for them which is to stop the Gen doing what they did to Tonnin and the zoa-froms in Europe.

Yeah things will be a bit confusing until the re-writes are finished. more so events between Time War and Meetings. Revenge will just get more detail, nothing much at all set to change. But Rescue and All Things both are subject to huge change. Union then will also be changed, but more so to match up with the offical story... So yeah sorry but things will get a little more confusing but will make a hell of a lot more sense when we're done and the re-writes are finished.

in the re-write he's basically a result of the Guyver books themselves. So no upgrades fic wise other than some enchancements to ensure the Gen can't control him.

Yeah, no one will want to get his in way... not anyone sensable anyway. Given his power set too mountains would not stop him either.

Solufein isn't a Master Zoalord. He's a Lost number and while powerful he's still a normal Zoalord of sorts. Technically he could kill Zeugma with his abilties and in a way there he and Damian Kane are simular (though Kane lacks any of Solufien's higher powers other than the abilty to put the fear of god into people and have them rip their own limbs off). in the old story Kron was baiscally a 2nd in command. Through in the re-write it won't be Kron that remodels modren Chronos. It was a process already started (the proto Zoalords are simply now of age and things are ready, but no one expected Solom's attack in Europe that forces chronos to move things forward before the Gen arrive in any type of force) that he simply takes over while Imakarum is re-processed and Alknaphel sleeps. Kron is now more the consultant used by Alkanphel to do what is needed for Chronos. As Juggernaught said Kron is mainly focused on maintaining Chronos. He's no leadership abitions only cares about doing the wishes of Alkanphel. Imakarum and Valkus are the other other two Zoalords he lets order him to do something. But on average they don't. Too the other twelve, more so the ex rogues they view Kron as an extention of Imakarum. Yet another vicious lap dog of Alkanphel. NOTE: Offical story will impact the fic here: I personally think Appollon in the offical story is in fact Imakarum. And since his re-activation by Alkanphel (Who used the powers of the Alk that it had built up for 6 months) he is far more powerful than before. And more so in the offical story is basically an imbodiement of Alknaphel. The reason he's taking Zoa-Crystals is because he is using them to re-charge Alkanphel and that's why Alk has awoken sooner when Valkus arrived. NOW that did not happen in the fan-fic due to different events. But basically Imakarum is increadbily powerful this time. You're talking close to Alkanphel himself. I think the Apollon amour is basically a suit left behind for Alkanphel, most likely for use in space. NOTE: Again this is my own personal theory, but what I re-write will be done to support this theory though not overly done in case it blows up and it turns out Apollon is an advent warrior of some kind (if it was, why has it not gone after Guyvers? Surely they would be a bigger threat).

This is one og those things you really can't just stick X on and say "Black Guyver Dazarb" should on paper now me near equal to the Guyver Zoalord. First off McAvoy would be very correct in saying what does apply to this character is different to all the other Unit's in the fan-fic bar Sho's and Agito's old Units. These are Unit's of another member of the Federation who didn't limit them. Different events conspired against wouldbe hosts to bring down their downfall in the GWOTG. The Black Unit is a simple Unit that is basically double a normal Unit but Black in Colour. There is nothing more special about it and nothing limiting it like a Gen produced Unit (our one modifed by their tech). So in writing about this character I focused on the strenghts of a Darzerb. I t's a VERY though with a skin that can survive being burned, and high power laser blasts that just annoy the host. That was before it was Guyver enchanced. Making most laser and heat based weapons against this new super being useless. The hyper zzoanoid is capable of matching strenght with a Guyver enchanced human. So factor two, the character is beyond strong. Simple umatched and if he punches you, you will not have a face left = W'Kar learned this one. This fire breath = do NOT stand in the way. W'Kar again learned this one fast. Didn't quite realise this, but yes Black Darzerb will sooner or later learn if someone is playing a distance game with him he can use the naturally accuring heat in his body to overly enchance his lasers. So no one would want to be shot by that either. But there the only abilities of his as a zoanoid that would be hugely great. His mega-smasher would be about the only other ability that would be awesum. Black Darzerb's problem is mobility. There is nothing about the hyper-zoanoid that screams "I'm fast". Quite the otherside the Darzerb in the comics had no problem being attacked... and then eaten by Aptom. Yes he was tricked but overall hes a fatty. As Zombieland put it the zoanoid needs to pratice running. He doesn't have the abilty to teleport either nor would have really advanced energy shielding systems. So overall is this very powerful character but is he unbeatable no. Basically think about what is not enchanced that would be needed against the "good" characters. What would be open to attack and you'll see in the end means W'Kar and Dreadnought can beat him alone. But they sure has hell will not want to match this character's strenghts. Well maybe W'Kar would as he's a nutter

You read Time War didn't you? Simply put there is more than one WG ship. One for each of the 3 parts of the WG project. So yes, there is the possibility of 2 other Gigantics being made. Not to say that there will. But a possibilty yes.

That ios something I won't answer now. But I'll let you guys debate it! (I already know what my answer would be, but am reserving it for the following: a: possibly a debate with James... aka the brain to confirm what I'm thinking. b: Would give away a possible future plot.)

I'm just disagreeing with one thing here. The fight between Guyver 1 and Guyver 2 wasn't a stamina fight. Guyver 2 had far greater stamina being at the time more experince combat operative. A trained operative of Chronos ready to become a hyperzoanoid. What was his downfall was the dodgy Control medal. If not for that the offical story would be very different. Aside from that continue as this is interesting to read who you'd guys think would be the victor and why.

There are no plans I can think off hand that have being trown out that I'd publish. the only thing I'd say which would be guessable by reading Time War p2 is a changed to the Prototype WG's. At one time there would be WG Hydra, WG Stealh, and WG Steller. But when working on Time War I just couldn't see a reason to why there would be a Hydra unit. So chose not to introduce it and most likely it'll not be coming into the fic. SImply put there isn't much if anyhing it could do that the normal WG couldn't. Though this basically gives the option for the Gen to customise the Control medal to a needed task. Also note to the likes of McAvoy who likes to say the WGC is unique. Umm what makes you say that? His control medal would be basically the same as Jason's unit. Only his unit would have a different ability set. Basically he'd be simular to Jason's in that it's not a common intended model. Overall nothing much has changed in droping Hydra, it just made more sense to keep it too the 3 main prototype units in Time War (and as said before there is always a chance if needed we can always bring one in a future date). As I normally post more detail at a later date if the fic rases questions, in the future as more story gets finished I'll normally give more insight when asked.

Thanks guys, I'm glad you liked it and the direction the story is going. It's actually turned out for me a better place than I orignally thought to start the re-write. Getting to write the story of Kron and Zeugma set in the past gave the chance to give real insight into those characters. Rather than telling their history it was nice to actually write it, rather than introducing them as new characters in the later story lines and trying to fit them into a story that didn't support them or up until then hint at their existance. It was also a great chance to use Solufein and show just what impact he had at the time on the likes of Kron and Reeve and vice versa. That for example was an unexpected bonus for a character who Allen invented I helped with back before I stopped writing (for awhile). We'd so many good ideas but the story just didn't support it, as Time War was asked to support a greater cast and story it just wasn't up to it. Which is why if you read Allen's fic now as it is, then the flash backs of my fic and then Matt's you'd be forgiven for thinking "what the..... do these guys even read each others stories properly?". That is why in the re-write I basically picked what Allen wrote as Solufien's memory and wrote in events (and still have to write some more) that support it. Matt's story is another, the question as to why the Proto Unit was discovered outside a Relic was answered in Time War Part 2 that was just published. Fulton Balcus has being brought into the fiction, had a bit of story and left in a place where he can recover in time for events to take place in the live action movie. A story I'm going to give a fan-fic retrelling too at a later date when I've got some new stories out. It along with the second movie and events from the comics will be tbrought together in the finished Story 0. At the moment the only thing holding me back from finishing off the base ideas to what would make that story is Guyver II F. I want to see what happens with the character and see what way she turns. Will she side with the Rogues against the Guyvers? It's important to factor into the fan-fic the right way even though time line wise by the time she's in Japan Agito is in full retreat in the fan-fic with Zeus Thunderbolt in ruins. The only question now for me is what way will Guyver II F turn? It's not something to worry about in Time War as in will have no impact. In fact it will have little impact for awhile as the fan-fic doesn't focus on Japan a lot. But by the time I get to that stage we should know. On update news I got into Time War part 3 and the story is moving along again.