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The Aceaer is a common armour, basically the Unit-A of the Gen troops. It's a common massed produced armour and should never be confused with a Guyver unit. Humanity only has use of these because the Gen want them to have use of it. Remember the Gen are willing to let people die to test their theory. they are also willing to treat humanity as a computer, storing backups of Guyver conciousness and restoring their favorite hosts whenever they want. Simply put they are not bound by the same moral standards that humanity has. What that basically means is for their army, which is HUGE, untold billions of their troops are out there. Only the ones that survive make it to be a Kavzar, and that amour insures that the week don't survive. These aren't Guyver's, look at the Black Aceaer Unit in the Assassin Guyver story, what happened to it when the host took too much damage and was in danger of being in Chronos hands?

When you see a Giant Gigantic Exceed foot and a little Gigantic Dark in the same picture who has used his most powerful attack that didn't even phase it.... you have to wonder is Gigantic Dark f*cked!

Update time, not sure if I'll get the story complete by mid June but it shouldn't take much longer than that. The reason being I've added something new to the story character wise, not saying whom but it will be interesting. You'll see in the story so far I'm moving things a long little faster than before, e.g. at the start of Time War the only Chronos areas left in the USA are Texas and Arizona. The main reason I'm moving along some of these events so that it gives more time to later stories (More so All Things Change) so that events moved into time happen with a better flow (e.g. the aftermath of the fall of Europe in revenge thanks to the Gen). Havin Max in the story eariler also gives the story a chance to flow better as events that just didn't sound right around his fight with Cyber Guyver and FG2 are simply totally removed. in line with what we would expect from Max, he'll go a little more all out than Guyver US did against them so the fight will flow a little more differently than before (though will still end the same way with Cyber Guyver being damaged and needed to repair off a Green Armour). Aceaer Marine will also be a litle more realistic this time and interesting, as you'll have read in part 2, the Aceaer isn't a Guyver and is capable of taking impact based damage to the host. IT's not as quick healing that damage as a Guyver so internal damge to the host has a much higher cost than to a Guyver (e.g. All things Change were the host takes hit that kills him that wouldn't kill a Guyver). Looking at the rewrite things are flowing well and I'm really happy with the result, anyway back to work.

Yup, would be a good guess.

That would be more a question for James. But yes, they all need editing (More so the Creators section) but for me I'll only begin to work on it after the stories re-writes are complete (along with improvements to the site layout).

As it's being awhile, time for an update on how the re-write is going. If you look at Time War part 5 (or part 2 as it's known on the site) I'm currently at the point where Warrior Guyver speaks with the now Guyver Faye. So I'm about over half way through the story. Now I plan to add 2 or 3 new bits to the story to round it off with the new stuff that has being added to Time War. But I don't see them being all too huge. Not at a point where I can guess when it will be finished but I'm making good progress through the story.

All things needs things like more story on the Mercs, their Units (that's almost a complete part in itself). Zeugma is another major character and so on including Cori and her story to become the Battle Guyver. Then there is the Grakken and Chronos storyline and so on.... All Things needs a lot of work to fit in correctly and work as a nice story. IT introduces a lot of characters and Changes (hense the name). The Mercs story as pointed out by you guys and myself simply sucks... they get paid to kill themselves? Who in their right mind would attack Chronos after what Alknaphel does to Warrior Guyver? Nope Baxter has a plan, and it's not to go head strong against Chronos and gettings wiped out by Kron and Alkanphel. Zeus is another major event of All Things that wasn't "cool" enough... so simply put I think All Things Change could do with the level or work I put into time War. I've updated the list at the start of this topic too so show the current plan.

In Union the fight with Guyver Zoanoid will not be covered in great detail. Only talked of, Union takes place 4 years after the Dragon Lord event / maybe X-Day. To put my re-write plan in current order it would be: 1. Time War - Story 2. (Major rewrite nearing completion - working on part 5 at the mo) 2. Union - Story 1. (Major rewrite - might become a 2 parter) 3. Revenge - Story 3. (not so major rewrite, mainly removal of scripted look and tidying up plot lines, adding more to the Alkanphel - Jason talk). 4. Warrior Guyver - Character story 1 and 2. 5. Resuce - Story 4 - (Major rewrite - Total removal of Chronos and Europe from the story, events around Guyver XT9 and Zygote postponed - story will focus only on the Grakken and ACTF USA). 6. All Things Change - Story 5 -(A lot of this story will stay the same - a lot will be added into it though, from Rescue and from other character building parts. The last part of the story though will get a major rewrite as events happen very differently. Two characters in this story line get to have their time, namely the Gigantics will have a much more solid roll along with the Mercs, Jasons "death" will allow for more time for them to get more story) 7. The Assassin Guyver 2 stories, basic tidy up so that it matchs up now with the above, events with Isis and histroy are the main focus here) 8. Meetings - Story 6 (Very minor rewrite needed, so at most a rewread and tidy up the parts with Krullnar). 9. Seven Days - Story 7 (tidy up for the above to be taken into account). After all that you'll notice one story is left out, Story 0 is missing. The reason being I want to see the last bit of events around Guyver II F play out in the offical story and see who she is truly with before I really use the character other than talking of her in passing. Guyot though will die in an alternative version of the current battle happening in the offical Guyver books at the mo. Bare in mind obviously events will happen very differently, as Agito won't be arriving to battle Sho with his new Gigantic, instead... well I let you guys work that out. Suffice to say, Story 0's rewrite will be a very major event. It will happen after the above is complete and after story 8 and maybe even 9. But the plan so far is to go back to Mutronics (the first Guyver Movie) and start from there and lead up until the point where Guyot dies. If you where to look at the story as a whole, the first few parts focus on Sean, the second on Sho / Agito. Union takes place after that set 2/3/4 years after allowing time for Chronos to recover and rebuild it's leadership.

Technically yes, but bare in mind Chronicles runs on it's own story line basically and will continue as a kind of alternative take on the story, my rewrite won't effect it and vice versa. For me this will be the 3rd re-write of it as the orgianal was basically just to remove the scripted look with some slight modifications. This coming rewrite will take a much more total look at the story and add in what I feel should be there (will continue this point after your below comment). Yes, basically that is part of what I mean above. The re-write before from me wasn't total enough to fix this. Sean should be a much better fighter. The sheer amount of Zoanoids he faces would be enough for him to be a more skillful fighter. Also by the time of Union he has faced and defeated a more powerful Acient Zoalord and has also though barely defeated a powerful Guyver Zoanoid. You don't do that even with extreame luck without some decent level of skill and knowing how to use the pressure cannon. The Proto Zoalord he faces will be a traditonal Imakarum style one too, insuring he gets a very decent battle.

The Gen created basic ones will not be "boosted", but there are different power levels between them at a Master.

Having to tidy up your brothers mess for a lifetime (and in a Zoalords case a VERY LONG life time)?

all Things will in fact get some major changes to it. on the level of Time War and what's planned for Rescue

Because Master Zoalords like Enforcers are a pain in the ass to make. This is part of the jelous nature in Revee v Korn that made him a good idea for the GuyverZoalord.

the Guyver Zoalord is basically off a Zoalord that would be equal in raw power terms tothe old estimates of a Gigantic Guyver (basically twice that of a normal Guyver).

that would be correct, though I'd probably do the first part of the Assassin fiction betore 5 and then the second part after it. Though I don't see them being huge work, the lore behind the Gen needs to be put into those two stories and corrected, the rest of it though won't see much if any change.

Depends which one you are after, but they are sold out quite often.

Yes it should flow a lot better than the previous verion of the story, problem is it will take a lot more work to do correctly in the re-write. But it's one of those things that simply put is worth it. I'm looking forward to doing Union next, there will be a whole new sebplot to the story and a Proto Zoalord bad guy for Sean to face off against. No more weekling Guyver US depending on help from G1 in this story, he'll have an edge like any Guyver should have after years of use.

This is where "Most Powerful" doesn't exactly mean "most survivable". The Gigantic by far is more powerful than a Warrior Guyver, but what saves the Warrior Guyver survivablity and a system designed to turn gravity based attacks back on the attacker using their power against them. IF it was not for that Warrior Guyver would have died and wouldn't have had the firepower to kill the Guyver Zoalord (bare in mind, in reality the Guyver Zoalord was tricketed into killing himself more than anything else). As McAvoy said, basically he'd have died at roughly the same point Warrior Guyver would have in the first bit of part 5, only he'd have not returned from the dead as the control medal lacks it's own independant shild and escape system.

Clear your cache or just hit refresh a lot

Good one ZT, Jedi Guyver did leave that rather open to guess what exactly he's asking. If you're looking at it from a "Character" point of view I wouldn't considery Battle Guyver a very complete character when looking at how Cori has being used in the story. She has had her time, but hasn't being used to her fullest. On the other hand her Unit the Battle Unit has had some good story that the host isn't aware of (anyone in the current story in fact). So overall the 2 of them together, to make an interesting character in Battle Guyver. Her story isn't anyway completed yet but she'll be a much more complete character after the rewrite. The Unit itself though, is probably one of the best thought out of the test Units that make up the Warrior Guyver project. Meaning it's not too overly powerful and yet is capable of taking one hell of a beating. Female Warrior Guyver then I would consider for both Unit and Host probably to date my most complete character, which goes to show experince helps a lot and giving a whole story (Stange Days) to helps with character development. Me personally, obviously I'd go for Jason, much like Matt would go for Max, your first character always tends to be your fave in every regard. Then I'd follow that with Isis and Ira Pike.

Yes, Agito is a little crazy! But crazy like a fox.

I'll continue to use this topic now for Part 5 updates. I've read and re-read part 5 before even trying to do anything with it over the last few days. Overall I'm happy with the action parts of the story that are still there from years ago. So far all I've done for the first two pages is just correct text and formatting so it's like the later fics (7 Days). Saying that there are some major changes due for this story. 1st as per part 4 Guyver US never goes back to HQW after being in Area 51, he's in Europe with a team of the 131'st and 5th Armoured along with Galen and Solom. So that story will play out through Part 5 (though it will not end until we're into the Revenge story). Needless to say, they are all stranded in Europe, so are cut off from help (I'm sticking with traditon here, so they are also cut off from help by the Gigantic unless Sho discovers a way to teleport which he hasn't in the manga). Max (aka GuyverC) will fill in where Guyver US is now not there in the story giving him a larger part before the Revenge story.

Thanks guys

Hey all, FYI part 4 has now being put up on the site.

FYI it will be going up this weekend. Finished it this morning on the train into work . I'll give it a review over the weekend to make sure it works right with the past 3 parts and maybe add some more little bits to it. But nothing that should prevent it being put up later in the weekend (won't be tonight as I'm going to see Thor!).