Sully

Great chapter, I like how this is being setup and simply can't wait for next months chapter to see how they react when they realise just who exactly is in that bed

signed

I already own them all... Never felt right to call myself a Guyver fan and not have the books! (But I'm probably a little extreme buying the laser disc of the Out of Control movie and player just to watch it without any VHS age problems.)

To be fair, it's 13 UK pounds per year basically (which just about covers the book and simply proves you own a copy, it's not like this book would be found in your local book store and with ebay or Amazon.co.jp they charge more than this just in shipping from Japan! And they don't give you a translation to go with it that you can actually read.). You'd spend more on a single night out with the misses or getting a decent Chinese takeaway! While yes you've an issue getting money to Ryuki, you can use Western Union Money transfers, they deal in cash and all Ryuki needs to do is go to a local agent to pick it up. And Edit: Forgot to add paid for Vol 30 from G.A.

Cool, something Guyver related to look at this weekend while I work on the site!

The four year point is between "in the beginning" and "Union". ACTF spends 4 years underground building and developing the Red Armours and getting into a position that they can take D.C. from Chronos. The start of the actual fight against Chronos is at: 6am the 4th of July 2010. By which time Dr Drake has already in the finial stages of developing the Blue Armour. The Union story ends September 2010. Between September 2010 and October 2010 ACTF has expanded making huge gains. Mostly it's thanks to Chronos still not putting up huge resorces to stop them. With Gigantic Guyver, Guyver 3, Guyver US and Warrior Guyver along with Aptom sufice to say normal zoanoids and hyper-zoanoids do not stand a chance. That along with a heavily armoured and well supplied army helps capitlise on these gains. Fighting also happens in Canada during these events (as depicted in Matt's first story). A few days before Warrior Guyvers mission to Area 52 the Japanese group go back to Japan to get the Segawa parents out of Japan. Tetsuro, Mitzuki and Shizu are still in the USA during the events of Time War. No problem.

Cool, hopefully you'll be done time for the March updates One thing for you guys to note and this is a little bit of a spoiler and so anyone who wants to save the surprise element do NOT read after this: in a change to the orignal story, with the Rewrite of Union of the Guyvers Tetsuro, Mizuki and Shizu find homes in D.C. close by the ACTF base. Tetsuro will start working with Dr Drake and will work on the development of the Green Armours and helped with the Blue prototypes. In Time War their is a reason why the Japanese Guyvers and Aptom were not around to help Warrior Guyver and Guyver US. This again isn't much of a spoiler to say what they were up to. They were getting the Segawa Parents out of Japan. The above will involve some miner edits to Time War parts 4 and 5 when I've finished Union. So from this point of the story on Sho, Agito and Aptom used the DC base as their primary base of operation story wise. Note this does not mean they don't appear in other fictions, like the WGC and Nova storie as they did before. Just that they are no longer based in Japan. The reason being is if you take some events of the actual Guyver Comic. A Key plot was Sho and co joining Agito in the USA with Zeus Thunderbolt. It never happened though due to events in the Comic. With the next rebuild of the WG.com in March I'll be making it easier to access the old version of the site which will always contain the pre-rewrite stories. So Matt's and Andre's and my orginal stories based on our limited knowings of the Guyver world will be there to stay.

Being awhile since I updated this. Writing away at the moment and am working on the last bit of the story on this re-write. Should hopefully be done by the next 2 or 3 weeks. I'm doing a lot less re-writing now as the fucus is on a completely new battle inside Chronos Island. Got to say it's a little more fun this time around to write and Revenge and the Warrior Guyver 2 story is something I'm really looking forward too getting to grips too again and further go into detail on how the orginal books and the fan-fiction link. Time War will also get some really slight modifcation to the storyline based around the start of part 4. Not much or a spoiler here but it will involve the line about the Japanese Guyvers. I've not forgotten the new story I'm working on too, it's progressing nicely though is no where near an eta. At the moment I've not fully decided on how I want it to end. But I'd also like to bring in some of todays modren world into the story and realsiticly show how men in power even in the WG universe get away with drenn that normal people would get locked up for!!! I've also booked a week off in March around my birthday. As a friends stag night is a week or so after it... My birthday will be a sober afair so instead this site will be getting a lot of needed work done as I finally have found time!!!! (I've also quit playing World of Warcraft for over a month now.. so that's no longer distracting me). So between now and some time mid March the WG part of the site will be getting a massie face lift and new fiction maybe even new art and a finished data files. I'll be doing this update in sections. The WG Fic site will also get yet another face-lift because mainly the last one didn't take into account I now know how to make a menu system. I'll also be looking up web design info on how best to get a gallery funtion into the site that I like so pictures are better displayed and broswing easier. Hopefully it'll be the start of a good year for the site in 2013.

Wait, what'd I miss? Aptom merged as an armour around Guyver 1 which gave Guyver 1 access to Aptom's cloaking.

What's worse is that he rarely if at any time interacted with his "alternative" universe self or family. I also find it odd that the Warrior Guyver 2 would willingly accept not speaking with his family in one line and that he literally didn't argue with himself about it or feel lonely. I know he's a military man and on the surface he's say "sir, yes sir" but somewhere deep down he won't like the idea.

It would be very impressive!

That was great!!!

It's something I've realised is important more and more. A term I've heard before on this is "Lore Metal". For a reader to engage with a character it needs some sort of lore metal and story behind it. To me any Guyver shouldn't die without this, so when the character goes you feel something for the loss. Someone should be upset that X character died. The characters that character used to intereact with miss him/her etc. This can't happen for all characters ofc, but in the end the fan-fiction becomes weak if Guyvers are viewed as something easily made and disposable. It's something with the Grakken and Gen you can't contain, but for the human races it's something I want to maintain and build on. A good example of this is Battle Star Galatica, if any of you followed the show will know (to anyone reading this for the first time and just getting into the new show consider this your spoiler warning) the Cylon race of human hybrids were efectively immortal with bodies store in regeneration pods ready to contain their minds if they dies in Regeneration ships. The story though got a lot more interesting, when Death was introduced to the race and that technology taken away from them. Now I'm not saying I'll do that to the Grakken or to the Gen, they have a different future ahead of them to what happened to the Cylons. But for humanity and I'm going off point here a bit, it's best that Guyver Unit's are kept rare.That when one dies it really is a loss.

There would be one thing that would have me very leary about writing in a "Shizu harem". It is the possbility that Shizu is Agito's step sister. Agito's family ties and that of Shizu's are a little too grey to write into that much detail. While there is a possibilty of Agito having an army of Guyver 3 I personally don't want to do that as it reduces the impact of what Shizu the clone is. She was hard to produce and with a limited amount of orginal not modified human DNA a once off (that's my excuse anyway ) I'm still working on part 2. It's not coming together easily as there are a larger number of character involves to make it flow more easily in reading terms. I've also to think a little bit more logically and have the story flow in a way that is not natural and give reasons for it. Here's the best example: The Japanese Guyvers: Sho and Agito do not have much of a reason to stay in Japan. Here's the thing we know: 1) Sho and co planned to move the USA before Aigto's Gigantic Dark betrayal. To make matters worse for the idea of them sticking to Japan in the fan-fic after Union you've the fact that EVEN after all Agito has done, Sho not only forgives Agito but gives him the remains of his dead friends so Agito can bury them in the USA. 2) Agito's hostility in Union to the ACTF. Why would be bother with it? Japan has less free forces that Japan and Agito would still have ZT members hidden somewhere he could trust or better yet move to the USA where he could get in with a new resistance movement. It doesn't make sense for Agito not to be in with the ACTF and hide from them as much as he did in the Fan-Fic. So basically I've to be better in my story writing to correctly explain why events happen so that the Japanese Guyvers are in Japan during Time War. There is a valid reason, I'm not going into it much right now Basically ye guys should get the idea, what I wrote then doesn't correctly match what I know now, so I've to plan out if I can change it, write it out or just go with it and hope no one notices.

thanks It's turning out to be, as it's nice place to go to after working on part 2 of Union. It's nice not having to think "will this match what is already wrote" and just flow with the story and work on characters that never had any real development and giving them some character. My plan orginally was for this story to have no fighting in it whatever, but I realised that too would be boring to write and more so read. So there will be action as you can guess form the opening, just for a change it'll not be Dreadnought (can't use the same character all the time, otherwise he turns into Optimus Prime in the transformers, and nothing can happen without him!).

Yes indeed she is

Not much free time at the moment, I've being getting a new kitchen installed in the house along with a LOAD of other house builds... Got a new back door to the house where one of the back windows used to be and were the old backdooor used to be is now bricked up! So sufice so safe RL is keeping me busy.... Anyway. I've not forgotten the webesite and will be adding a new section to the soon to be renamed "Hosted Websites" section of WG.com. Guyver 4 Anime page which was deleted a few months back with Geo Cities removing their free website section will be joining the WG.com. First through I've to do a LOT of converting of website copies I made a few years back after the last Geo Cities wobble. You might wonder "Why would you bother doing that Brian???" Simple answer is I loved the Guyver 4 Anime page 15 odd years ago (my god that makes me feel old!) and if not for it I'd have never thought to have made the Warrior Guyver fan-fiction. The idea of writing a fan-fiction of my own which has a Guyver 4 charater of my own based on Isis from Anita's fan-fiction being around and the orginal fiction dispearing into the delete bin of the internet didn't sit well with me. SOO I made a very big archive back then. The problem is getting it all to work together on this website and removing the horrid averts from the HTML code of the website. While it might be distracting as I've my own WG-Fic site still to finish, I'm working on both as it's just something I have to do. Not sure on an ETA as the next 3 weeks are ****e for time, but simply put WG.com is not forgotten!!! I also need to once again update the messageboard... Who... meh hate doing this as it's one of those times you really hate if it goes wrong. Need to remember to do full backups before I start!

It's not that it's a Type 1 unit either vs the Type 2. I'm not going to give it away yet as it will be a developing story, but there is a reason why Jason as a host is different to most other WG hosts. I'll give you a clue ---> Faye.

Not all hosts, there is a reason why Jason is and Stephen is not.

Worth pointing out the Op's point though, this isn't a normal unit, it's a Warrior Unit.

Depends on who or what exactly appeared in the DC universe. Lets say for arguement sakes we go all powerful, Dreadnought was the one to appear there. Or to have REAL fun Zagam. You're talking mainly the high end heroes who would have a chance. You're talking extream fire power, regeneration, etc. Dreadnought though would probably not attack anyone unless attacked. Zagam on the other hand would be pure death.

What I'm about to write here ties into also why I've not updated the site the last weekend. For the next few weeks I'll be focused on working on Character profiles for the site. The reason being is while yes, it's a bit of a pain in the ass and doesn't progress the actual story much it makes it a lot easier to write in the future and help the story some much needed character development of lesser characters. If you look at Illusion of choice's preview you see how the story gets better with a developed character that has back story giving you his point of view. It helps you understand the character more and it gets more fun to read when you see what will happen to other characters later based on his choices. it also helps keep track of a mammoth cast, today for example I was looking at my Merc cast and wondering... "hmm Marian Selfridge, what type of woman is she..." I realised it's a completely blank slate at the moment. The character has never had any real development ideas in the past either. Her only story was an emotional wreak after the death of her husband (that event has since being erased story wise thanks to the re-write). So there's the one thing this character has, she loves her husband. That is it. The problem is when you develop characters is keeping track of them all, so that is what I want out of the character profiles section. To be able to develop and keep track of the the characters in the story. It's good for me the writer, it's good for you the reader and its good for those slackers... aka fellow fan-fiction writers that sometimes... rarely write up some stuff. The above is the character profile of Alfrid Drano. Basically all future profiles will be somewhat like that.

thats not the only thing I've being writing.....

Naa this is far better Matt!