I really enjoyed the second part. Though I wonder what made Sho prior to Chapter 7 become what he is now? Also, is this like the older ones right after Book 15?

Lastly, what is the difference from the old datafiles and the new ones? I mean why not just update the old ones as new information is presented?

Glad you enjoyed the fic McAvoy

The fic diverges from the Manga after book 16 and by the time Sho meets up with Sean is about a year later. So yes they are a bit older.

As for the Data Files, the problem is Chronicles is nearly a complete retake on the Story, so we have to do a complete retake on the Data Files.

Especially since new data on the Guyver and most significantly the Gigantic require a re-adjustment to the power scales that would require more than minor changes to the original data files.

Additionally the older Data Files are still valid for the original fic version so they will remain as an archive so readers can references them for those fics.

good read, really liked the fight with the grakken. Its also nice change for Sho to keep the gigantic secret from the ACTF

I really enjoyed reading this new chapter in the story and the way that you introduced the Grakken. It seems to be more detailed than the previous stories that have been done.

Thanks for the feedback. I know it's been a long wait getting it out. But I hope it was worth it.

Beginning work on Chapter Three, and hopeful of a shorter turn-around for it. ( You keep your darn law to yourself Murphy!)

Yah, it was way cool I really enjoyed the fact that you get to see the garkken's actually taking cori not just a breif note about it. Also that there is more to the story before jason gets the warrior unit.

I enjoyed the how a standard guyvers abilities were portrayed making it seem a lot more powerful than the orginal fan fic had always made it. I also like how the developement of all the characters was way more indepth this time around, espaially Sean and Stephen.

Cool, but since we're starting over on the board, does anyone have any comments about part 1 as well?

Do the two parts go well together?

The only issue I have is that they end with a time. I think since they're two (or three or four parters) that they should have the normal "To be Continued..." in the end.

Though I am curious on how Chronicles will be written once the other characters from the other fanfics come into play.

Interesting question, ain't it?

The only issue I have is that they end with a time.

You don't say

So... you're saying that there might be added stuff later on to both fanfics?

Interesting differences between the original and the new, I like the fact that we discover grakken finding the mountain hideout, where as in the original it was just mentioned. in my opinion the new fanfics good, but i hope that dosent mean you'll stop doing the old ones, I still enjoy reading them.

So... you're saying that there might be added stuff later on to both fanfics?

No but you are missing something

So... you're saying that there might be added stuff later on to both fanfics?

No but you are missing something

Could it be that there is almost 12 hours of time that is missing from part 1 to part 2?

Or

Is it that your counting down to something? One other question though. Is the time in days hours minutes or hours minutes and seconds?

Hmm, getting warmer

Sorry, but we're basically waiting to see if anyone is going to figure this one out on their own.

Maybe it has to do with something about the other fanfics perhaps? Like maybe the introduction of Guyver C?

It's interesting that Primitive Guyver appeared so early compared to the older one, though.

If its not what McAvoy says I'll say its when Jason bonds with the warrior unit, or the start of that mission.

Though I hope that We see more of Twilight guyver's story, even if the writer dosent do WG fics anymore, I liked that unit.

X-day.

X-day.

X-Day has already happened long in the fics.

Also, I believe the Warrior Guyver appears in Part 3. No, both parts have missing parts with times but no story.

maybe you guys should user spoiler alerts?

after all this is discussion for chronicles part 2, not future chapters.

not all of us have been with warriorguyver from the beginning.

I haven't been with Warrior Guyver from the beginning. I started reading when Kron first appeared and then a little later Zues. In fact the most current fic out was All Things Part 3 at the time.

I have no clue what's going on with the site beyond speculation. Besides it's rather obvious that Warrior Guyver will appear soon or later.

yeah, i wasn't referring specifically to you dude, I ws more concerned about things like 'jason is warriorguyver' and things like that.

I have only started readoing since the chronicles started and so for me, that part is kinda ruined now.

there are other things being said as well, not just that. that was just one part that stood out.

Well, man c'mon it's pretty obvious who is the Warrior Guyver, if you read any of the stories or the Datafiles by even a little, it's like saying Vader is Luke's father.