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Being honst that is just a bonus. What I'm mainly looking for a good character.What the person beleives are (now while some people might not say they have them, the fact is they do, even someone who doesn't beleive in God still has some belief in them in whatever it is they think responsible for their existance.. even if it's poof 4billion years later the right conditions lead to mankind and eventually me... that's still a belief even if you just happen to follow science!), what is your characters moral compass, who is responsible for it? Does the character have family, are they still alive? Have some of them joined Chronos or if the character is in Chronos do they have relitives on the other side in ACTF? All these types of things need to be considered.

Design wise both are up for grabs. But bare in mind it's power level would be equal to the orginal Warrior Guyver / Warrior Guyver 2 / Warrior GuyverC. But it's abilities are for Space battle. So for example off hand it's unlikely to have sound based weapons and more range than a normal Warrior Guyver. Apart from that go for it. Forgot to add, for me another deciding factor is how complete this character is and how well he fits in the story. This post wont be decided in a week / month but I would like to put the human host / zoa form host of the story into the re-write so the characer can develop in the rewrite (so basically the human part needs to be done before Time War is complete as the character whoever she / he is will be in the Union storyline). Also if you think you're the next Matt and want to draw the character and go all out and colour etc that ok too.

I rarely do this as I like to give surprises myself, but I've being thinking about this Unit. At the moment as he's a decent bit off there story behind this character (called by the fan that came up with him Dark Star Guyver) hasn't really being given a huge amount of story. So I'm basically going to give you guys a chance to develop your own character that will use this unit and will be then brought into the fan-fiction. The moral compass that you give the character will basically decide how this character will go with future events. There is a few conditions that will bind your characters history. He'll come from one of 3 camps friends list. Basically (and this is giving away a little bit of the story) only a Warrior Guyver will be able to find this lost ship. That means that the character created has to be form the following groups or have friends with them or a decent connection. 1) ACTF. One of their new Warrior Guyvers or Warrior Guyver 2 / 3 can access the ship the retrieve the Unit. 2) Jason and his group of freinds. 3) Chronos. They have Warrior Guyvers too. So there you go. This will basically be decided by me. But I'll basically go with what the fandom decides. Have fun guys... though bare in mind this story won't happen until the re-write is finish and will be the next story after Story 9.

This site won't ever be going that inactive again unless we finish the story and simply stop.. Yup there was a period when not much was posted or done and I completely lost interest in the story. Thanks to Takaya re-capturing my interest in making a good proper not overpowered story I'm back basically. the site has being getting constant updates for over a year now though still needs a lot of work. As you can see Matt's back being active... Allen is lucking somewhere and James is around somewhere. The re-write thats hit my storys are a lot more extensive than I orginally planned (though Time War needed it so for me it works fine). Don't worry guys I an't going anywhere this time. Story wise I'm at the point Solom has recovered in modren times. It'll be a nice meet between Jason and him. Thanks for the support guys!

Update time. I'm over the half way mark (I think, depends on how much I add). I've done some more character development giving names to people who'll appear later in All Things Change when the story goes back to Area 51. Allison (that was her name) is now more of a character and will not be simply forgotten about in later stories. In thinking about this, once the rewrites get more complete I'll be making a character bio page that will give more information about the characters in use in the story, but while I think this is a good idea it's something that I'll not be doing just yet, most likely I'll look to doing this once Union, Time War, Revenge and Rescue are completed. Overall I like how the story is going, I need to revisit it before I post it as there are parts that need more detail. But the story reads better and makes more sense. Martin and the Grakken are defeated a little more easily than before but in the end Time War was never really about either of them. In saying that the lead up to it is longer than before so it evens out a bit. I'm getting close to the part Warrior Guyver redrosts Solom, so once that happens we get to the good stuff. Can't really give an ETA as of yet but it's coming along which is the important thing.

Pervs! Anyway lets get this topic back on track. Time line wise when the fiction catches up with the Out Of Control anime the story line is at the point where Female Guyver 2 and Guyver 1 are fighting. When I get back to it I'll probably re-write it again to show the battle from Cyber Guyver's view point and explain why he's looking for backup. His story will basically lead to Revenge as it did before.

I'll be leaving that part out

Time for a bit of an update. The story is moving along slowly but surely. Some more of the plot is due to change so events make more sense. I'm actually not going to preview these new changes so you guys get a few surprises so there will be some new story in there. I've wrote a preview to the Female Guyver 2's story which basically is a short part from memory of the Guyver out of Control final battle between her and Sho. Sufice to say it sucks but will get better when I actually sit down and watch it. But it's something I'll leave towards the end. Cyber Guyver will have a slightly eariler start in the story because of this and will detail him saving the Female Guyver 2 from destruction. I'm actually rewriting some parts of the stroy finally and not simply deleting it and replacing it. The end results should be good but you guys still have a decent wait for it to be done. Overall about 1/3 to 1/2 done on this one.

Nicely done Matt.

The re-write does have a large number of changes to it. But it's mostly to add detail, the only characters who will have their time in the fiction changed enough that they go on a new path altogether is the Guyver Mercs. They never fight Chronos after splitting from ACTF (well at least not yet) in All Things change part 4. They will have their own story line efectively as it's clear the Gen have plans for them and it's not them sitting on their backsides doing nothing. Netasha's path will not change majorly at all. She might get more story, show more than has happened to her in both the past and present stories. But yes her partner will die and Aptom will still be the cause. Rescue will be a very different story to what it was before as it'll be purely a Grakken and ACTF story. Any other events will be moved into All Things cHange part 1 and that then worked into a proper story. But overall what happened to a character before will still happen to characters in the re-write. Just the timing of it will be changed. Aptom might still get his new form in the fan-fiction, but it will have to follow a logical reason.

There's another factor you've to consider. If the control medal was damaged, you'd also have to damage all 4 cores and stop them working to truely kill it. If any of the cores was working, as shown before the WG would simply for into a power down mode. Wrost case the Unit would have put the host in a dormant state and stay hidden in the Boost Dimenson until such time it was fully repaired. this Unit is designed for war. Extreame survivability is what gives this unit its edge. But it's not unkillable, Elminiator has shown that.

Netasha already servered Chronos "fanatically", she was a lost number who actively worked on their projects. She never "had" too but wanted too. There's no place yet really to show it but this character never needed her lover to die to want stay in Chronos.

That might not happen this time. Zoa-crystal being the cause (didn't know that back then that Takaya would write in that a Zoalord can't be absorbed by Aptom). The likelyhood of the weekness being there then for the new generation of the Zoalords doesn't make sense.

Aptom will be Omega blast version

Ok time to update this to what the plan is at the moment. Finishing Time War This is what I'm currently working on. At the moment I have chose to completely rewrite what is now part four's beginning. Reason being the old fic didn't flow well logically. I've get to get to a point where this matches up with the old version of the story. But I imagine it will at the point Warrior Guyver actually goes back in time. I do see a lot more needed to be added as the world detailed in Parts 1, 2 and 3 needs to carry forward when Warrior Guyver goes back in time. As before this is a central story line story. Litrally every story after it refers back to it in some way. That's the reason it's getting a lot of work put into it. Union of the Guyvers This is the next story I'll be re-writing. It's basically going to get a whole new beginning and a new "villan" on the Chronos side. the first half of the story will focus purely on ACTf and Guyver US. The point where the present version starts should be now the mid way of the story, where the Japanese Guyvers learn of what happened in the USA. Warrior Guyver 2 The WG2 character story will be the 3rd story to be rewrote before I go to work on Revenge. Reason being in being so different to the main time line fan-fiction it futhers the story and explains why Warrior Guyver 2 gives Guyver 3 the Gigantic.

I've said this before on the board to so no spoiler here. Look at Agito in the WG2 universe. Key events have happened differently in the WG2 universe for him so that he's basically a litle "nicer". He never made zoa-forms. Zeus Thunderbolt never got the Libertus. I'll let you go from there in guess work, but events like that mean the WG2 universe in the re-write will have more explaination and Guyver story behind it.

Yup, once the re-write is done and the fic is moving forward again and Takaya has finished is current major arc then I'll go back to it.

Yes, but even with the lack of a Gigantic the Libtertus should have made a huge fight of it. there's no real story to it, no sense of lost. No how did Agito escape etc. In short there's some good story to give. Basically yup, the Gigantic in the fan-fic now in the re-write is basically the same as the comics. Meaning Warrior Guyver isn't the most powerful around.

Yes, basically Chronos has being fighting Guyvers for 4 years+ by the time of the fan-fiction. They've lost heavily, Zoalords almost killed (in Prug'stalls case he was technically dead for awhile and brought back to life), defeated cut in half... Chronos wouldn't have gone through that and recovered without developing and planning for more combat against the Guyvers. The main difference here to the offical story though is that Alkanphel knows the events that lead up to the paradox. This has twisted the timeline of the offical story and even for Alkanphel unexpected events have happened. After the Dragon Lord event it marked a turning point in the story. Agito's defeat at the same time in Arizona mean what we see now happening in the current offical story won't happen the same way in the fan-fiction. Sho won't be dragged out of hiding into a battle by Agito and Zeus Thunderbolt (quite the opposit as Agito is forced to come to him for help, speanding instead the last 6 months perfecting the Shizu clone). Apollon doesn't happen, what happened to Prug'stall and Khan is answered around this point. Basically the battle as I see it in that fan-fiction would be Guyver 3 and Gigantic Guyver v Rogue Zoalords, Guyot and Valcuria v Chronos. And even then it's more complex than that. So out of this story where in the fan-fiction it's clear of one result, the Rogues lose, Guyot dies and Valcuria escapes. Chronos has learned a lot and becomes stronger, by the time of Union Chronos has all the 12 Zoalords back in power. They didn't do that by losing, and they didn't do that by having those defeated before keeping their old weeknesses that lead to their defeat.

Not exactly power boost. Zoalords are bacially made more harder to kill and more anti-Guyver. Basically what happened to Imakarum minus the giant space ship giving him Alkanphel levesl of energy. Zoalords like Prug'stall get more regen abilites, so if a hole was blasted through his chest again, he'd get back up and laugh.

Yes but this goes down to story writing and is the point worth the pop at the end when you read "I killed your Family Jason" from Alkanphel. To me it's not because it doesn't allow you to show what is happening in Chronos fully, who is aware of the plot and what is they are after. In the end as this is a rewrite, it's not worth the pop as simply put you all know what happens. This time for the story to actually work and give you guys something new, the story will also show the side of Chronos and who setup events so that Warrior Guyver happened.

The lastest Guyver chapter is up at Japan Ledgend. Spoilers! More Guyot and Valcuria, looks like Guyot is as scheming as ever! It's reveaed he's simular now to a Proto-zoalord and his crystal has a undisclosed end of life date! Guyot also has a small army of zoanoids with him too. Chronos isn't handling the idea of two Gigantics well, looks like a Zoalord is going to join in on the battle (the muppet! Good chance he'll be killed off later).

Even so, a few hours without Warrior Guyver and Guyver US would be very costly at this stage, even pre-rewrite there is clearly open warfare between ACTF and Chronos. Chronos hasn't used Zoalords against them, but everything else is being thrown at them. In the old version Warrior Guyver was more powerful than most Zoalords (as he was twice the power level of a Gigantic), which actually makes him pre-rewrite more powerful than Alkanphel (that's before All Things Change and he becomes Dreadnought, we then adjusted things so that Alknaphel was his "true power level" to match Dreadnought). The way the story was wrote back then, it really didn't show the side of Chronos properly to explain, Alkanphel actually wanted the Warrior Guyver to happen (for his own, and everyone elses survival). But even so he is smart enough to know that Chronos not to give resistance wouldn't be correct way to go. in the re-write the Warrior Guyver is more powerful than a Guyver, but he's less than half that of a Gigantic. Meaning most Zoalords are capable of killing him. In the old version of Revenge we see what happened when Chronos "takes the gloves off", Guyver US quickly is captured by Zoalords. But the build up is lessoned by the fact it's never mentioned of talked of much apart from the very end of Union where Imakarum talks with Alkanphel. This time will be a little different.

Moved this topic to the science lab area.

his powers stay the same, the main correction is in that of the Gagantic Guyver, Kron and Agito's Zeus armour.