April 17, 200718 yr Wow, Alexandria's really turning into a psychopath...Hanging eye balls on her ceiling after playing with them and imagining the people that once owned them? A trussed up human slave with his tongue ripped out for nought but her pleasure... Not to mention her littel problem of beyond nail biting down to the very flesh of her nuckles..It seems she doesn't really feel much pain if it has happened on numerous occasions, and i don't think that much can even compare to Anubis' level of punishment. Flayed and uses his daughters body parts?! I'm very interested in seeing exactly what her turn out is going to be in upcoming stories. But over all this is a wonderful, delightfully indepth view of things to come. Ha, seems Zagam is starting to take a shine to Ereshkigal and she has her twisted thoughts on him as well. Very interesting fact that Zagam has already been scouting out other dimensions...i wonder what he did while he was in those other areas. But i must say allen, the way you had those children dying and Yaksha and Ereshkigal playing games with that one kid, man, just reading it i envisioned what it could be like....its like watching an amped up Saw III. Overall, simply and utterly captivating. Another great piece to add to your collection.
April 17, 200718 yr Interesting in the deaths of the W'Kars. Dues is killed by short circuit by Grend with Malice's unit. Warrior Ninja was also short circuited by Baphomet somehow with one of his attacks. Necro W'Kar's unit was removed by Zagam. The big question is where is Temporal W'Kar? I was wondering how Dues would play in this, since I suspected that Zagam would have a far harder time with Dues than anyone else. What is Shendal doing? I wonder if she is making a new unit for herself. Where is Grend's 7th W'Kar Reproduction thta merged with the W'Kar Element.
April 17, 200718 yr Interesting in the deaths of the W'Kars. Dues is killed by short circuit by Grend with Malice's unit. Warrior Ninja was also short circuited by Baphomet somehow with one of his attacks. Necro W'Kar's unit was removed by Zagam. The big question is where is Temporal W'Kar?I was wondering how Dues would play in this, since I suspected that Zagam would have a far harder time with Dues than anyone else. What is Shendal doing? I wonder if she is making a new unit for herself. Where is Grend's 7th W'Kar Reproduction thta merged with the W'Kar Element. Really, my 'big question' is; what did the Matrix do with Yaksha and Alexandria at the end of Diametric? I mean, I kind of expected it to at least be mentioned somewhere.
April 17, 200718 yr Author You guys can't really expect me to touch base with 'Everything' in one story, can you?
April 18, 200718 yr You guys can't really expect me to touch base with 'Everything' in one story, can you? That would be illogical, but I had figured something as monumental as that ending would have been a key piece that would have been mentioned from the get go.
April 18, 200718 yr Author But yes, don't worry, I will touch base on that in an upcoming fic. It may not be the very next one, nor may it be in GWOTG, but I will touch base with it.
April 18, 200718 yr I don't think I qualify as Deific, but I thank you none the less. But you are a God when it comes to cranking out a riveting fan fic. I'm drooling to read the next one and find out the next parts. One of the most riveting parts was with Alexandria and those eyes, very creepy. I do have a question though. Sarah O' Conner? A parallel version of a possible sister of Jason's?
April 18, 200718 yr Author If I were a woman, I'd blush. But seeing as I am not I won't. However, thank you for the comments. Always good to know I'm doing well. As far as Sarah goes, the infamous 'No Comment ' Must be applied. But all will be told in time. I have already started on the next one along with Angel's fic.
April 19, 200718 yr Read it, loved it Great to see you havn't lost your touch Allen by all means feel free to give us more fan fic
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