Thoughts on 7 Days of Hell Part 7

[guyverfanatic]

Wow... where to start. It was an epic and badass story and I can't wait to read more!

Epic:

Balls to the wall fighting and everyone duking it out.

Sedah kick ass.

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Faye being fooled by Lorcan into having sex with him. Unsurprising since faye has feelings for Jason.

Black Guyver Darzerb! Damn! Powerful enough to burn off W'kar's armor

Faye's praetorian unit gives her the ability to read minds and learn any language. Damn useful if I say so myself.

Eliminator bowing before Imakarum

Guyver US becoming Warrior Guyver US!

Sho getting a praetorian unit!

???:

The General answers to Primitive Guyver as "Eminence." Does this mean he is running things from behind the scenes? It certainly seems to be.

WTF?!

Matrix shard bonding with dead teenager Eve Michaels?! A matrix shard now turned human with it's own free will?! Now things are getting interesting.

Want to know more of:

Who exactly this Dark Being is and how he/she factors into everything...

Edited June 11, 2010 by Guest

[Sully]

Glad you liked it :

On further good news James contacted me last night, he's really busy at the mo with RL. But has not forgotten us or vanished!!!

Anyway basically for you guys it means there will be a future edit to that story from Zeo1234, a.k.a. !mr battle!" who will spice up and hopefully add a lot more to the battles making this by far the largest part of any story done on the site and probably the most detailed.

[guyverfanatic]

Glad you liked it :

On further good news James contacted me last night, he's really busy at the mo with RL. But has not forgotten us or vanished!!!

Anyway basically for you guys it means there will be a future edit to that story from Zeo1234, a.k.a. !mr battle!" who will spice up and hopefully add a lot more to the battles making this by far the largest part of any story done on the site and probably the most detailed.

Awesome!

That little detail at the very end caught me by surprise. It was one heck of a story and look forward to all developments.

Will Warrior Guyver US, Guardian 2 (Sho), and Sedah get a datafile?

Will Guardian datafile be edited to show that she can read minds and learn languages almost instantly?

I also think that the Gravity Ram attack should added to all the gigantic datafiles.

from Wikipedia

Gravity Ram (重力衝角), by extending the chest spike and channeling energy into it, activating Barrier shield and powering up all three gravity orbs, the Gigantic accelerates using the thrusters on his back. This has the same effect as seen caused by evil Aptoms high-frequency spear, which means the surrounding area is totally obliterated without any visible trace as though atomized.

[Sully]

Bere in mind after the rewrites the Gigantic's and in line for some major work, in both the story and the data files.

The plan is to completely update everything on the next update that will be a major one. All data files will be checked and updated if needed. All fictions as well so that things work (more so in concerning the use of the Gigantic and Also Zeus and Kron).

As you can see in the last battle in 7 Days 7 the Gigantics are as they were meant to be. Gigantic Guyver breaking Zarfel's jaw knocking him into a Thrancus cutting his arm off. In the past the way the power levels where done that simply wouldn't of happened.

There will be new art to support the 7 Days 7 new characters too and the new Gigantic Guyver.

As you can guess the next story when it started on after 7 days has a lot of plot to work from.

Will Warrior Guyver US, Guardian 2 (Sho), and Sedah get a datafile?

Will Guardian datafile be edited to show that she can read minds and learn languages almost instantly?

Simple answer yes, but will take time.

At the moment this all depends on work load. But even down to the file structure the WG-Fic section of the site will completely change on this update. At the moment I'm thinking of doing that next so we can start rebuilding and updating the site from there. At the moment I'm thinking of ways to either do this gradually where we'll have a load of mini updates where things like Character stories as they are done get moved into the new site. But this type of stuff can't be done by myself as James for exmaple does the data files, so before I convert them to the new site format we need to chat and get a design not only we both like but something that will work out for the different sections of the data files.

[guyverfanatic]

Awesome news to hear. Can't wait to see everything.

[Juggernought]

YES!!! I KNEW IT!!! SEAN GETS A WARRIOR UNIT....even though it wasn't the one i envisioned...still the outcome is awesome just the same.

I must say even though the unedited battles were extremely good....i quite liked the build up to them and a lot of the background story that took place. In some ways it answered some past questions and also brought up a boat load of new topics to discuss.

The one thing i saw was when Dreadnought finally teleported the dormant warrior unit from Pluto...did anyone see him do it?? And if not, i wonder if he would then keep the unit with the ACTF after seeing what the were planning for the zoalord controller..

And the fact that Alkanphel could in fact now be much stronger or deadlier now that he's undergone some change brought about by that strange remover. It could be possible now he's able to remove warrior units with it now...if sooo, ACTF will have some new worries when he wakes and is extremely pissed about what has gone down will he was sucking his thumbs and curled up with a blankee in his cocoon. Plus, he'd now have direct control over the chronos warrior units and could remove them at any time and replace their hosts!...possibilities are endless i think.

But i must say Sully you outdid yourself now...You should relax a bit, have some beers...bask in the glory of the newest edition to your epic Warrior Guyver series...

And then blow our minds again and leave us on the floor drooling and twitching in amazement at what you got planned in the future.

:

[xtro guyver]

this was a pleasure to read Bri and well worth the wait. 7 days is finally over and with a great finish with plenty to look forward to in the future

[largo]

I know this might sound a little odd but will there be ship data files eventually.

[Destroyer Guyver]

Good things come to those who wait, I really enjoyed reading this Sully you've outdone yourself.

[McAvoy]

Here are my notes on this impressive story.

1. The Gigantics are very powerful indeed now. The fact that they can take on Zarfel is proof of this. On the other hand, my guess is that with the new shifts in power levels, Kron is about as powerful as Zarfel, which means so is Zeus.

2. Guardian 2's unique mutation has Gigantic-like pods which means to me that he will specialize in shielding as opposed to the tendril whips Faye has.

3. Warrior Guyver US... well we knew this for a while. I wonder though, he should look like Warrior Guyver 2.

4. Black Guyver Darzerb is going to be extremely powerful. Most likely the most physically strongest being. The Black Guyver unit is 2x for the most part with only stndard Guyver speed. A while guess here, but I am guessing perhaps 60x, maybe 80x? His durability would either match or exceed Guyver Powered Zerebubuse.

5. Guyver Zoanoid is far more powerful now. Described as a powerhouse.

6. Warrior Guyver 4 has arm beams?

7. Two Mk. II Warrior Guyver units. Who will get the last one?

8. Chronos has another dormant Warrior Guyver Type 2 unit besides the one that was merged with the Thancrus. I wodner who or what will get it.

9. I wonder what Chronos will do with the Black Guyver Relic they teleported to the Ark?

10. A Creator fleet is being commanded by an Enforcer Kavzar which is unique that it's a female. First time ever we have heard a non-Aceaer being female. She is also unique that she takes no orders except from the Council itself. I wonder if all the Enforcer Kavzars have some sort of freedom.

11. The modern Grakkens are apparently sleaker and I wonder what abilities or refinements they have over their older versions. The Grakken Queen has a unique unit that allows her to command other Grakkens. Probably a test unit, maybe to see if Guyvers can truly be controlled.

12. So far, we have three units of each Warrior Guyver type.

a.) Guardian - First Mk. II Warrior unit.

b.) Guardian 2/Sho - Second Mk. II Warrior unit. Captured by Faye

c.) Dreadnought has third one. Captured by F-WG

a.) Warrior Guyver Vamore - First Warrior Type 1

b.) Warrior Natasha - Second but damaged Type 1

c.) Dreadnought had the third damaged one, but given to ACTF.

a.)Warrior Guyver Thancrus - First Type 2

b.)Warrior Guyver US - Second Type 2

c.)Chronos has the third one, captured by Guyver 2.

One top of that. three dorman standard Guyver units as well. One already activated on a US ACTF solider going to be lead by WG2.

[Weltall2]

I am glad many of the theories McAvoy, largo, Guyverfanatic, and myself put forth over the years proved correct.

Carter being a treacherous lying jackass for one. The other one Agito cheating death or making it seem that way. I mean how cleaver to slip away from battle after it seemed likely he met his end. Who knows how much he smuggled out of that relic before the rest of the crew made it there.

Something doesn't sit well with me though. The time line has been changed to just twenty thousand years since the time war, instead of millions of years. I find it easier to believe creator tech being buried by the earth for hundreds of thousands of years going unfounded for so long. However a meer 20,000 years I find harder to believe, yes even with glacial movements. I mean in my head something like that doesn't mesh. Though we will see how this change is explained.

[Sully]

Here are my notes on this impressive story.

1. The Gigantics are very powerful indeed now. The fact that they can take on Zarfel is proof of this. On the other hand, my guess is that with the new shifts in power levels, Kron is about as powerful as Zarfel, which means so is Zeus.

2. Guardian 2's unique mutation has Gigantic-like pods which means to me that he will specialize in shielding as opposed to the tendril whips Faye has.

3. Warrior Guyver US... well we knew this for a while. I wonder though, he should look like Warrior Guyver 2.

All pretty much correct, as for WG2 his art is done too.

4. Black Guyver Darzerb is going to be extremely powerful. Most likely the most physically strongest being. The Black Guyver unit is 2x for the most part with only stndard Guyver speed. A while guess here, but I am guessing perhaps 60x, maybe 80x? His durability would either match or exceed Guyver Powered Zerebubuse.

5. Guyver Zoanoid is far more powerful now. Described as a powerhouse.

Yup, Guyver Zoanoid seemed out of character being only twice as strong as a human Guyver. With the idea and that of the fact later I'll be doing my own "comic power level" version of the 2 movies, Guyver Zoanoid now is the power house he's meant to be. Meaning when you guys read the rewrote Revenge, expect him to be a lot more evil.

6. Warrior Guyver 4 has arm beams?.

Hmmm didn't think I done that. If I need will be corrected in the Edit.

7. Two Mk. II Warrior Guyver units. Who will get the last one?

No Comment

8. Chronos has another dormant Warrior Guyver Type 2 unit besides the one that was merged with the Thancrus. I wodner who or what will get it.

incorrect. Of the 3 Units. WG4 teleported one away, Thancrus was knocked into one after Zarfel was power Punched into Guvyer 2 and finally Gignatic Guyver captured the other. Sooo ACTF has a dormant unit sitting in a chamber.

9. I wonder what Chronos will do with the Black Guyver Relic they teleported to the Ark?

No Comment (Oh I'm loven this!)

10. A Creator fleet is being commanded by an Enforcer Kavzar which is unique that it's a female. First time ever we have heard a non-Aceaer being female. She is also unique that she takes no orders except from the Council itself. I wonder if all the Enforcer Kavzars have some sort of freedom.

No Comment (Oh I'm loven this, really!)

11. The modern Grakkens are apparently sleaker and I wonder what abilities or refinements they have over their older versions. The Grakken Queen has a unique unit that allows her to command other Grakkens. Probably a test unit, maybe to see if Guyvers can truly be controlled.

Somewhat correct.They are more interesting though than they used to be which is the important and hardest part to get right in 7 d 7.

12. So far, we have three units of each Warrior Guyver type.

a.) Guardian - First Mk. II Warrior unit.

b.) Guardian 2/Sho - Second Mk. II Warrior unit. Captured by Faye

c.) Dreadnought has third one. Captured by F-WG

a.) Warrior Guyver Vamore - First Warrior Type 1

b.) Warrior Natasha - Second but damaged Type 1

c.) Dreadnought had the third damaged one, but given to ACTF.

a.)Warrior Guyver Thancrus - First Type 2

b.)Warrior Guyver US - Second Type 2

c.)Chronos has the third one, captured by Guyver 2.

One top of that. three dorman standard Guyver units as well. One already activated on a US ACTF solider going to be lead by WG2.

As said before, you'd a few of those wrong. Basically Chronos has all the Units they are ever going to activate. Any remainding ones are with ACTF. There is a part now I realised I've left out of the Dreadnought epiloge. Zeus' teleported to the ACTF HQ with the missing dormant Black Unit. Soooooo lets see ACTF has the following still dormant Units:

1. WG Unit (same as WG's).

2. WG Unit (Same as WG2)

3. WG Unit (Same as Sho and Faye's)

4. Black Unit.

5. 2x Standard Guyver Units (Sho and Seans former units).

I am glad many of the theories McAvoy, largo, Guyverfanatic, and myself put forth over the years proved correct.

Carter being a treacherous lying jackass for one. The other one Agito cheating death or making it seem that way. I mean how cleaver to slip away from battle after it seemed likely he met his end. Who knows how much he smuggled out of that relic before the rest of the crew made it there.

Something doesn't sit well with me though. The time line has been changed to just twenty thousand years since the time war, instead of millions of years. I find it easier to believe creator tech being buried by the earth for hundreds of thousands of years going unfounded for so long. However a meer 20,000 years I find harder to believe, yes even with glacial movements. I mean in my head something like that doesn't mesh. Though we will see how this change is explained.

I'm glad you and the rest of the guys liked it. You guys won't be waiting "years" for the next. I've already began writing the new part to Time War. Don't expect just a basic rewrite with the start of that.

The time line change reflects things in the comics. Though saying that the Gen even that will be detailed in Time War will show that what happened to the ships left behind then where not the result of Glacial movements. Basically the Relics hid underground during the battle with GZ. They stayed hid and remain that way tens of thosands of of years later. So this would be before recorded history of man but recent enough. E.g. in 7 days 7 it refers to the end of the war between the Gen and Grakken. It was 1,000 odd years ago.

[guyverfanatic]

I always thought that the millions of years was a bit too long since humans only came to be some 10-15 thousand years ago or something like that.

[Sully]

I always thought that the millions of years was a bit too long since humans only came to be some 10-15 thousand years ago or something like that.

thats if you....... hmm lets leave modren human creation beliefs out of this. Sufice to say, in the comics it's a big question mark. I wanted to bring the fan-fic closer to modren recorded history as I feel it's more interesting. E.G. The Seraph has many interesting possibilites considering she's being hanging around Earth through all of modren recorded history.

[McAvoy]

McAvoy wrote:

6. Warrior Guyver 4 has arm beams?.

Hmmm didn't think I done that. If I need will be corrected in the Edit.

Yeah he was using them during the battle for the Warrior Guyver units towards the end. He was using them against Guyver 2.

Real Life, Human have been around for around 200,000 years. At about 30,000 years Neanderthals went extinct and about 10,000 years we developed civilization.

So technically, the Creators did not create humans. It happened on it's own. They may have modified them.

[Spartan Warlord]

Excellent!!....loved the story...i only wish the week had more days in it!!!...

Out of the hundreds of manga iv read this is easily in my top 3 favourites even if unofficial...i would gladly had paid to read not only this but alll the stories on the site...very well done!!

: :apt: :mura:

[McAvoy]

Well I just remembered something.

Sully, you solved a little issue with the Exceed. With Sho now a Warrior Guyver, he can't go Exceed. With the other two Gigantics (or three if you count Gigantic Zero) you could day only Sho had that ability/potential.

But it does still leave Dreadnought though. Unless there is a specific reason he can't do it.

[Sully]

Well I just remembered something.

Sully, you solved a little issue with the Exceed. With Sho now a Warrior Guyver, he can't go Exceed. With the other two Gigantics (or three if you count Gigantic Zero) you could day only Sho had that ability/potential.

That was in fact the deciding factor in why I did what I did. Also if you think about it, why would Sho show the new hosts how?

But it does still leave Dreadnought though. Unless there is a specific reason he can't do it.

He can't go "Exceed", he's efectively and Zeus too Exceed all the time in a controlled manner. Hense their power levels.

[McAvoy]

That's what I figured. I remember because for a long time you wanted to keep Sho a normal Guyver. I believe in one of the emails you liked the power structure. So I wondered why you suddenly wanted to give Sho a Warrior Guyver unit.

Anyway I noticed something on a second re-reading of the story. Seraph is a Enforcer Kavzar type, but she has wings, four of them. So does Angel and Sedah. Both of them are about Enforcer Kavzar levels. Interesting.

Tonnin being a prototype Mini Me version of an Enforcer Kavzar isn't suprising. Many figured that one out.

Also, W'Kar's idea to give the Grakken a Black unit while technically sound. May not be such a good idea in the long run. If you figure that the Grakken have more or less standard units, a Black Guyver unit could possibly double their base power. So while they would never trul be able to stand up to a Enforcer Kavzar they could possibly stand up to a Commander Kavzar. Which means a Aceaer and Kavzar would become almost like cannon fodder. So the Creators would end up having to develop a easier to produce Commander Kavzar and maybe rid themselves all together the Aceaer and Basic Kavzar eventually. Which in turn would make the Creators that much stronger.

And who know, they could incorporate those improvements into the Enforcer Kavzars. Making them more numerous or more powerful?

[largo]

Also, W'Kar's idea to give the Grakken a Black unit while technically sound. May not be such a good idea in the long run. If you figure that the Grakken have more or less standard units, a Black Guyver unit could possibly double their base power. So while they would never trul be able to stand up to a Enforcer Kavzar they could possibly stand up to a Commander Kavzar. Which means a Aceaer and Kavzar would become almost like cannon fodder. So the Creators would end up having to develop a easier to produce Commander Kavzar and maybe rid themselves all together the Aceaer and Basic Kavzar eventually. Which in turn would make the Creators that much stronger.

And who know, they could incorporate those improvements into the Enforcer Kavzars. Making them more numerous or more powerful?

Wasn't that the idea behind angel and sedah's units as being an easier method of of creating kavzars?

[McAvoy]

I don't know. Actually I think it's a different model of Kavzar. The fact that Angel and Sedah's units are not supposed to be on Earth also tells us something.

I am curious on what is so familiar about Angel to W'Kar. I think it has something to do with the host and not the unit.

[guyverfanatic]

I don't know. Actually I think it's a different model of Kavzar. The fact that Angel and Sedah's units are not supposed to be on Earth also tells us something.

I am curious on what is so familiar about Angel to W'Kar. I think it has something to do with the host and not the unit.

That's a good question, I don't think he could have ran into anything similar in his own universe...

[largo]

Well I could be wrong but I think thats what the Commander Kavzar said as the cocoon formed around sedah?

[Zoaknight]

Sully, you TOTALLY outdid yourself with the last part of 7 days! I loved every bit of it, there were a few typos here and there but otherwise the story was just EPIC!

For starters, I loved how ya brought into the fold so many new characters both good and bad, from the new batch of guyver zoanoids to Sho recieving a Warrior Guyver Mark II unit (which I assume makes him even more powerful than he was as a Gigantic? He have all the same abilities as Guardian?). Also, may I ask what makes a Black Guyver unit different from a standard unit G? Does it have any special features like the warrior and nova units or is it just stronger than normal and always black in color?

Also, I found it VERY interesting that the test units created by Krullnar and Draven all have limiters placed inside them to prevent the creation of something as powerful or more so than the Guyver Zoalord Reeve (which perfectly explains why Arcanfel never removed his current unit for a complete one because he knew or suspected the Gen had imposed such limitations on the abilities of the newer generation guyver units).

I'm totally psyched to see what shall happen next, I mean, we know Carter and Primitive Guyver are planning something bad that Dreadnought and the other guyvers won't like, and I'm gonna be on the edge of my seat until Arcanfel, Kron, and Natasha emerge from their cocoons so we can see what awesome new forms and power levels they'll achieve :mura:

long story short, two thumbs WAY up for the final part of Seven Days of Hell : :apt: :mura:

P.S. sorry for asking so many questions all at once, but if Sho's battle with Dragonlord Khan is now canon with the fanfiction, does this mean we'll be seeing new Zoalord characters stepping up to replace some of the Elite Zoalords who fell fighting the Gigantics? Except Purg'stall of course since he was revived.

[guyverfanatic]

Sully, you TOTALLY outdid yourself with the last part of 7 days! I loved every bit of it, there were a few typos here and there but otherwise the story was just EPIC!

For starters, I loved how ya brought into the fold so many new characters both good and bad, from the new batch of guyver zoanoids to Sho recieving a Warrior Guyver Mark II unit (which I assume makes him even more powerful than he was as a Gigantic? He have all the same abilities as Guardian?). Also, may I ask what makes a Black Guyver unit different from a standard unit G? Does it have any special features like the warrior and nova units or is it just stronger than normal and always black in color?

Also, I found it VERY interesting that the test units created by Krullnar and Draven all have limiters placed inside them to prevent the creation of something as powerful or more so than the Guyver Zoalord Reeve (which perfectly explains why Arcanfel never removed his current unit for a complete one because he knew or suspected the Gen had imposed such limitations on the abilities of the newer generation guyver units).

I'm totally psyched to see what shall happen next, I mean, we know Carter and Primitive Guyver are planning something bad that Dreadnought and the other guyvers won't like, and I'm gonna be on the edge of my seat until Arcanfel, Kron, and Natasha emerge from their cocoons so we can see what awesome new forms and power levels they'll achieve :mura:

long story short, two thumbs WAY up for the final part of Seven Days of Hell : :apt: :mura:

P.S. sorry for asking so many questions all at once, but if Sho's battle with Dragonlord Khan is now canon with the fanfiction, does this mean we'll be seeing new Zoalord characters stepping up to replace some of the Elite Zoalords who fell fighting the Gigantics? Except Purg'stall of course since he was revived.

Show will more or less have the same abilities as Faye, except if you noticed, his mutation was having gigantic like pods on his shoulders much like when he was a gigantic guyver. I dunno if he is more powerful, but I would think that the gigantic guyver's hyper smashers are more powerful because they are 100x that of a normal guyver.

See McAvoy's post in the Guyver Darzerb thread, to see the stats on a Black Guyver unit.