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In Union the fight with Guyver Zoanoid will not be covered in great detail. Only talked of, Union takes place 4 years after the Dragon Lord event / maybe X-Day. To put my re-write plan in current order it would be: 1. Time War - Story 2. (Major rewrite nearing completion - working on part 5 at the mo) 2. Union - Story 1. (Major rewrite - might become a 2 parter) 3. Revenge - Story 3. (not so major rewrite, mainly removal of scripted look and tidying up plot lines, adding more to the Alkanphel - Jason talk). 4. Warrior Guyver - Character story 1 and 2. 5. Resuce - Story 4 - (Major rewrite - Total removal of Chronos and Europe from the story, events around Guyver XT9 and Zygote postponed - story will focus only on the Grakken and ACTF USA). 6. All Things Change - Story 5 -(A lot of this story will stay the same - a lot will be added into it though, from Rescue and from other character building parts. The last part of the story though will get a major rewrite as events happen very differently. Two characters in this story line get to have their time, namely the Gigantics will have a much more solid roll along with the Mercs, Jasons "death" will allow for more time for them to get more story) 7. The Assassin Guyver 2 stories, basic tidy up so that it matchs up now with the above, events with Isis and histroy are the main focus here) 8. Meetings - Story 6 (Very minor rewrite needed, so at most a rewread and tidy up the parts with Krullnar). 9. Seven Days - Story 7 (tidy up for the above to be taken into account). After all that you'll notice one story is left out, Story 0 is missing. The reason being I want to see the last bit of events around Guyver II F play out in the offical story and see who she is truly with before I really use the character other than talking of her in passing. Guyot though will die in an alternative version of the current battle happening in the offical Guyver books at the mo. Bare in mind obviously events will happen very differently, as Agito won't be arriving to battle Sho with his new Gigantic, instead... well I let you guys work that out. Suffice to say, Story 0's rewrite will be a very major event. It will happen after the above is complete and after story 8 and maybe even 9. But the plan so far is to go back to Mutronics (the first Guyver Movie) and start from there and lead up until the point where Guyot dies. If you where to look at the story as a whole, the first few parts focus on Sean, the second on Sho / Agito. Union takes place after that set 2/3/4 years after allowing time for Chronos to recover and rebuild it's leadership.

Technically yes, but bare in mind Chronicles runs on it's own story line basically and will continue as a kind of alternative take on the story, my rewrite won't effect it and vice versa. For me this will be the 3rd re-write of it as the orgianal was basically just to remove the scripted look with some slight modifications. This coming rewrite will take a much more total look at the story and add in what I feel should be there (will continue this point after your below comment). Yes, basically that is part of what I mean above. The re-write before from me wasn't total enough to fix this. Sean should be a much better fighter. The sheer amount of Zoanoids he faces would be enough for him to be a more skillful fighter. Also by the time of Union he has faced and defeated a more powerful Acient Zoalord and has also though barely defeated a powerful Guyver Zoanoid. You don't do that even with extreame luck without some decent level of skill and knowing how to use the pressure cannon. The Proto Zoalord he faces will be a traditonal Imakarum style one too, insuring he gets a very decent battle.

The Gen created basic ones will not be "boosted", but there are different power levels between them at a Master.

Having to tidy up your brothers mess for a lifetime (and in a Zoalords case a VERY LONG life time)?

all Things will in fact get some major changes to it. on the level of Time War and what's planned for Rescue

Because Master Zoalords like Enforcers are a pain in the ass to make. This is part of the jelous nature in Revee v Korn that made him a good idea for the GuyverZoalord.

the Guyver Zoalord is basically off a Zoalord that would be equal in raw power terms tothe old estimates of a Gigantic Guyver (basically twice that of a normal Guyver).

that would be correct, though I'd probably do the first part of the Assassin fiction betore 5 and then the second part after it. Though I don't see them being huge work, the lore behind the Gen needs to be put into those two stories and corrected, the rest of it though won't see much if any change.

Depends which one you are after, but they are sold out quite often.

Yes it should flow a lot better than the previous verion of the story, problem is it will take a lot more work to do correctly in the re-write. But it's one of those things that simply put is worth it. I'm looking forward to doing Union next, there will be a whole new sebplot to the story and a Proto Zoalord bad guy for Sean to face off against. No more weekling Guyver US depending on help from G1 in this story, he'll have an edge like any Guyver should have after years of use.

This is where "Most Powerful" doesn't exactly mean "most survivable". The Gigantic by far is more powerful than a Warrior Guyver, but what saves the Warrior Guyver survivablity and a system designed to turn gravity based attacks back on the attacker using their power against them. IF it was not for that Warrior Guyver would have died and wouldn't have had the firepower to kill the Guyver Zoalord (bare in mind, in reality the Guyver Zoalord was tricketed into killing himself more than anything else). As McAvoy said, basically he'd have died at roughly the same point Warrior Guyver would have in the first bit of part 5, only he'd have not returned from the dead as the control medal lacks it's own independant shild and escape system.

Clear your cache or just hit refresh a lot

Good one ZT, Jedi Guyver did leave that rather open to guess what exactly he's asking. If you're looking at it from a "Character" point of view I wouldn't considery Battle Guyver a very complete character when looking at how Cori has being used in the story. She has had her time, but hasn't being used to her fullest. On the other hand her Unit the Battle Unit has had some good story that the host isn't aware of (anyone in the current story in fact). So overall the 2 of them together, to make an interesting character in Battle Guyver. Her story isn't anyway completed yet but she'll be a much more complete character after the rewrite. The Unit itself though, is probably one of the best thought out of the test Units that make up the Warrior Guyver project. Meaning it's not too overly powerful and yet is capable of taking one hell of a beating. Female Warrior Guyver then I would consider for both Unit and Host probably to date my most complete character, which goes to show experince helps a lot and giving a whole story (Stange Days) to helps with character development. Me personally, obviously I'd go for Jason, much like Matt would go for Max, your first character always tends to be your fave in every regard. Then I'd follow that with Isis and Ira Pike.

Yes, Agito is a little crazy! But crazy like a fox.

I'll continue to use this topic now for Part 5 updates. I've read and re-read part 5 before even trying to do anything with it over the last few days. Overall I'm happy with the action parts of the story that are still there from years ago. So far all I've done for the first two pages is just correct text and formatting so it's like the later fics (7 Days). Saying that there are some major changes due for this story. 1st as per part 4 Guyver US never goes back to HQW after being in Area 51, he's in Europe with a team of the 131'st and 5th Armoured along with Galen and Solom. So that story will play out through Part 5 (though it will not end until we're into the Revenge story). Needless to say, they are all stranded in Europe, so are cut off from help (I'm sticking with traditon here, so they are also cut off from help by the Gigantic unless Sho discovers a way to teleport which he hasn't in the manga). Max (aka GuyverC) will fill in where Guyver US is now not there in the story giving him a larger part before the Revenge story.

Thanks guys

Hey all, FYI part 4 has now being put up on the site.

FYI it will be going up this weekend. Finished it this morning on the train into work . I'll give it a review over the weekend to make sure it works right with the past 3 parts and maybe add some more little bits to it. But nothing that should prevent it being put up later in the weekend (won't be tonight as I'm going to see Thor!).

I'm on page 37 of 40 in the rewrite of Part 4. Basically that means "soon" I'll be putting up the next part of the re-wrote Time War Part 4 (formally part 1). At a rough guess I'd say we're looking at the weekend after next (so not Good Friday weekend which is tomorrow) for the next part to be published. This weekend I "should" if no one in the family blows up their computer get time to put in the part from Guyver Out Of Control and add in Cyber Guyver. Once that is done, and I finish the rewrite proper I'll give the story a redraft after reading the whole story again from the new part 1 till the end of part 4 (anyway I need to do that so I know what I'm doing for Part 5 and what plots need to end there). Anyway, important thing to note... the site will not be closing any time soon Weltall2

This is exactly why the fan-fiction needs re-writing. Yes some of the power levels have indeed changed, not just Gigantic Guyver's. Zeus and Kron both are more powerful than previously and would be close on an overall raiting to 80% to 85% off off Dreadnought in the rewrite. A Gigantic will splat a Bio-Titan with relitive ease now compared to before one on one. But a Bio-Titan has being designed with the Gignatic in mind as much as it was desgined to take on a Warrior Guyver's firepower. In groups of 5 or more Bio-Titans combined firepower will make life hard for a Gigantic Guyver. Gigantic Guyver would have to get them into small groups and kill off 1 or 2 at a time or risk using his Giga-smasher and hopefully killing them at the expense of maybe losing his armour has it recharges. Zeus will have a lot more story before Dreadnought shows up in the re-write. in fact the whole Dreadnought angle will happen differently this time completely, Zeus will be the main power character on the good side along with Zeugma for most of All Things Change, Dreadnought (as in "the Real" Warrior Guyver) only appears towards its end and will not be there minus the Dreadnought armour for a who is the real WG plot, the real story is Lorcan (see what Faye said in 7 days) and what happens with the Mercs before the Grakken and Chronos attack. Psi-Guyver will stil be the most powerful ACTF Guyver for awhile and will have more of a story struggling with the idea and the loss of her brother and not knowing if he's out there somewhere or some psycho. All This bringing things back on topic is linked to Time War and the events it kicks off. Speaking of which, I'm now at the part where Galen joins the story properly and is talking with the other characters in the story. I'm over 3/4's the way done looking at the page count. I woudln't get too excited just yet as the re-write itself of part 4 needs one of it's sections re-wrote (the Female Guyver 2 vs Guyver 1 story in the alternative reality and Cyber Guyvers first intro to the story needs to be redone still, though that shoudln't take too long it requires me to do it at home and watch the vid a few times of Guyver Out of Control).

All of them can be read as is. If you're on about stories that have being re-wrote. Time War parts 1 to 3 are the new parts of the re-wrote story, part 4's preview is at the start of this and is still being rewrote. 7 Days Part 7 was wrote taking into account what would be re-wrote and has the correct power levels for the Gigantic Guyver for example.

It was cute... but overall crappy battle. Things will be more interesting when they are hunted down by Chronos!

Ok the story continues to be re-wrote. It's a little slower than planned because I've had to change events a little but is working out well. I'm at the moment at the point where Solom has awoken and explained who he is and his relationship with Jason's Unit. Galen won't this time have a meaningless fight with Warrior Guyver's shielding. At the moment I can't give and estimate on when the fiction will be done but I'm well over the halfway mark and I'd say there is about 1/3 of the story left to go. Looking ahead Time War 5 though will grow a lot compared to what is was before as it has to wrap up events of the last 4 parts of the story as well as what it did in the past.

Vincent will be interesting lets put it that way. He'll be the last Disciple Zoalord made and will have a lot of build up to the event. To what exactly I'll not say just yet but the ideas I have for him are good enough working ideas based off what Juggernought has already posted. the character will be shown before he's even zoa-fromed so his growth will happen from there. He's also going to be mixed into the Netasha story line. As for the rest I'm going to be doing a review at some point in the next fornight (basically when Time War Part 4 is finished) and will review go gets what Unit and how it works best for the story. The only certainty now is that Azaar's character gets the Stellar Unit. But there are still other dormant Units I haven't assigned a host to yet and will work that out then.

Yes, though I wouldn't go too crazy just yet. Remember the re-write will be changing Union a lot to give it more story (though what happened in the past will still happen, though the Grakken event is a lot differnt though and I don't want to spoil it). Your character though will be in Union, not so much so in Time War and Revenge but will be in Resuce. Note: I've a simple rule for this: 1. The story needs to be cannonly correct. In otherwords it doesn't mess up time lines, events or story of what I have wrote other others in the fan-fictions have wrote. 2. It's good reading and not... what did TheGuyversWill call it once s "Fan Masterbation" story. Basically meaning you don't decide to have Dreadnought, Zeus and so on all standing beside your character and bowing at the awesumness of your character for defeating Alkanphel etc... Basically it needs to be a story worth reading. The simple judge of this would be the readers on the messageboard and of course me. Much like Vengence best thing to do is simply post it and I just copy and paste it up into the offical site. Note timeline wise if you write about your character now he's no Guver yet and you don't really have a clue how it happened exactly or what I plan for the Unit.... So give yourself time.