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I'm not 6k words into this part in total now. I've got Krullnar established now as his own character with his own views and basically all the setup of what I've needed to do is done. I'm now getting to the good stuff. The Nova Project and the Warrior Projects will be as talked of before in full rival mode. Guyver Supreme continues to be a torn in the side of anyone making a test Unit (more so for a certain young Gen). all of this will then lead towards Reeve becoming the Guyver Zoalord. So this is the stuff I'm looking forward getting done. the story won't go into detail about every Unit you can think of, but will answer the question of what happened to all 5 Prototype Units (the 5th being WG himself) and why they where found where they were found in the present day story line.

I can't say yet if Time War will answer this in more detail and later stories. Seraph has being introduced in a strange way, you've seen her first in 7 Days long before you should have seen the Seraph's beinging, but the question really is it the same person? What happened in Time War and why is there a human Enforcer at all? If it is a human Enforcer? Both where at one point normal Gen. It's not much to give away but Supreme is the Supreme Test in part 2. What you saw in part 1 even towards the end of it was still the very beinging of the Gen project on Earth. There is a lot of time that will be covered in Part 2. Remember by the time Time War part 1 ended you hadn't even seen the first Prototype WG Unit yet, nor even the first Battle Guyver. Nor had the Nova projects or WG projects clashed yet (all this being hinted at in other stories). So there is a lot yet to be mentioned. Part 1 was marely the setup to a lot of things. No Comment I changed that in part 1, as I wrote the story it made a lot more sense for the Gen to need humanity and need it for a reason. Krullnar appearing before they appeared on Earth made no sense, more so as he's not Uranus, who could be argued could have made humanity on another world with ease. The Gen only had one means of getting their Project going. The ship they "borrowed" that had details on where Earth was once located and the Unit that was Guyver 0. Remember they needed to find Alkanphel before they could create their own master Zoalord Zeugma, and she was made last. Krullnar had to fit into all the above, it made a lot more sense for him to be actually born on Earth. That too wouldn't have happened without his parents feeling they where in a safe place to do so. Krullanr as said above time line wise was born around the time of the Guyver Supreme's first battle. There is a lot more story to come which will explain why he is where he is in the modren fictions storyline. No Comment No Comment That should give ye something to look forward to in part 2 :

Simular to as they are now, they are not meant for persanal reading like a jurnal or a dairy but for general use to warn those who might hae to fight along side or against these foes. I wouldn't put the above list as a "these guys really would be writing this" list. It was just an example of who "could" be writing them. The data files appear in the story from time to time for example Kron loves reading them.

Yes. Basicaly you could say the Data Files would be made by an active character or characters in the fan-fic. Chronos = Valkus Gen = Krullnar ACTF = Dr Drake and so on, the Uranus lack an active role in the fan-fic so basically anything of theirs would most likely be refered by the Gen data files.

There will only be a Gen Data files section after the rewrite and big update is done. As for the Uranus they don't get one as they don't have an active role in the fan-fiction other than what they did in the past. That might change if Takaya ever brought them into the comics.

Update time on how Time War part 2 is going. The story is getting to the point where it is beinging to write itself. The first seeds in the events that lead up to the Guyver Zoalord have being planted. Strangely it's an event you've all read about before though it will be expanded on in Time War P2. I won't give you more details than that so you've some surprieses to read but basically the event of the Guyver Zoalord should be more epic when it happens, and a lot more personal and bitter. Word count wise I'm in about 2,500 words with a total of 4K words if you include the old intro. Though the old intro will be so heavily edited most likely when part 2 catches up with it and with what has changed in the new parts if it will suvive has is, is very unlikely and large parts of it will be edited out.

I've moved your last two posts here as the questions were not about the Time War story and more general update questions. Yes, the data files will be updated. 2 Already have being updated, namely the Gignaitc general data file which is really nicely done and the Warrior Guyver one. Both though will not be updated until the super update to the site is done. This will include art, data files and the edited stories. Basically once the big rewrite stories are done (Union, Time War, Recue and All Things Change) the rest won't take as long as I've a lot less work to do on those. Then I'll be able to give James a helping hand in getting the rest of the stuff completed. Also do some of the light editing needed to get the Nova Guyver story up to scratch in terms of it's Gigantic use and explaning just how did the twins get their Units being human etc.

Just a little bit of warning. Not all stories will be has heavily reworked as Time War. Time War badly needed it compared to what is in it, and what was based from it. Assassin will mostly just get light editing so it matches up with Time War. This would also be the same for Warrior Guyver 2's character story. When you guys read that, you'll see that not all stories will be reworked to a scale that Time War is being. Some like Faye's character story won't be changed at all.

I'm glad you guys like it. I can tell you when this will be answered but not the answer itself. When I rewrite the Creator parts of the Assassin Story (namely the part where Isis goes to Enforcer Primes home world) that will answer the question you have Juggernought. As for Time War part 2, this should be done rooughly in 2 months at a guess, roughly the same amount of time it took to complete the new part 1. Though it might be longer depending on what I want added to that part.

Part 1 uploaded guys, have fun.

Though saying that, thinking about it I do have until late into the books I can write too detailing events that happened differently up until the Dragon Lord battle... Thinking about it would give a lot more detail on when the books themselves had events change that lead to Jason merging with his unit and what Sean and ACTF got up too during that time. Though that would be after the rewrites of all the other stories and at least the new Assassin Guyver story, and next part of the Warrior Guyver story are completed.

Off hand I'm thinking either Rescue or Assasin Guyver stories. I'd like to leave 7 days alone for awhile and go for the ones that really need it. I'll be leaving alone the Story 0 In the Beginning until such time as Guyver II F in the books has a more fleshed out plan.

1. Time War - Story 2. (Major rewrite nearing completion - working on part 5 at the mo) 2. Union - Story 1. (Major rewrite - might become a 2 parter) 3. Revenge - Story 3. (not so major rewrite, mainly removal of scripted look and tidying up plot lines, adding more to the Alkanphel - Jason talk). 4. Warrior Guyver - Character story 1 and 2. 5. Resuce - Story 4 - (Major rewrite - Total removal of Chronos and Europe from the story, events around Guyver XT9 and Zygote postponed - story will focus only on the Grakken and ACTF USA). 6. All Things Change - Story 5 -(A lot of this story will stay the same - a lot will be added into it though, from Rescue and from other character building parts. The last part of the story though will get a major rewrite as events happen very differently. Two characters in this story line get to have their time, namely the Gigantics will have a much more solid roll along with the Mercs, Jasons "death" will allow for more time for them to get more story) 7. The Assassin Guyver 2 stories, basic tidy up so that it matchs up now with the above, events with Isis and histroy are the main focus here) 8. Meetings - Story 6 (Very minor rewrite needed, so at most a rewread and tidy up the parts with Krullnar). 9. Seven Days - Story 8 (tidy up for the above to be taken into account). After all that you'll notice one story is left out, Story 0 is missing. The reason being I want to see the last bit of events around Guyver II F play out in the offical story and see who she is truly with before I really use the character other than talking of her in passing. Guyot though will die in an alternative version of the current battle happening in the offical Guyver books at the mo. Bare in mind obviously events will happen very differently, as Agito won't be arriving to battle Sho with his new Gigantic, instead... well I let you guys work that out. Suffice to say, Story 0's rewrite will be a very major event. It will happen after the above is complete and after story 8 and maybe even 9. But the plan so far is to go back to Mutronics (the first Guyver Movie) and start from there and lead up until the point where Guyot dies. If you where to look at the story as a whole, the first few parts focus on Sean, the second on Sho / Agito. Union takes place after that set 2/3/4 years after allowing time for Chronos to recover and rebuild it's leadership. Edit: Edited on 17/05/11

Todays update, I've gone back and added more yet again to Part 1, so it'll be a little more than 10k words but not by a huge amount. there was some parts I was going to add to part 2, but felt they would be better fitting in Part 1 to move the story along in part 2. I've also added a new location to it that will have baring on part 2. Needless to say, when the Guyver Zoalord event does happen, it will have a lot more impact and feeling than it did in the orginal Time War where the only thing that died was a few random zoalords before Solom got trapped (in the second edition which is posted on the forum, yes there was more death of Gen / Creators but again they where jsut random names to the readers before they died as they where introduced e.g. Gorgon the creator of the Eliminator project). :

Well on the news front, while writing part 2 and removing the old start to part 3 and moving it into Part 2.... Lets start again. What used to be the start of Time War has being removed up until the point about Solom's body being discovered in frozen water. that old intro will be absorbed into Part 2 of time war. Which will end where the old intro ended. Guyver zoalord wiping out the Projects. Part 3 (what used to be Part 1) will be edited this weekend and have the old into removed. Part 1 will be posted with it. Part 2 is about 600 words no into the story and I've a good idea of what I want to show in that story. There is also another part of the story I'll be putting into Part 1 involving Zuegma that I feel will go better in there. This should be done before the weekend. Part 3 after the rewrite will start off in the present day of the fan-fiction. Obviously anything you read in part 1 and 2 will be reflected in the rewrite when it hits part 3 and 4.

Ok time for an update on what's happening so far. Time War Part 1 is finished. It's appox 10K words. What was part 1 is now part 3 and what was part 2 is part 4. This will baiscally mean we end up with 4 even'ish parts rather than a super big part 1 and smaller part 2 and an even smaller part 3. There is a big gap story wise between part 1 and part 3. Basically part 1 of Time War envoles a huge amount of setup of characters important to the whole of the fan-fic (not just Time War). Overall not much in action but there is some. i'm debating on if to publish it this weekend or not. Most likely I will but who knows, the reason being the gap in the story between part 1 and 3 (and part 3's start is baically not compatable with the new part 1).

As W'Kar is in the WG fiction this would be a valid topic here. But as McAvoy said it is more relevent to the GWOTG side fo the forum (more characters there use the idea). So moving it there.

Latest Chapter is up on Japan Ledgend. Sho and Agito meet for the first time face since Agito stole the Gigantic From Sho! Oh October's can't come fast enough!

Ummm hate to burst your bubble there, but would be impossible to say who is the original in the case of Dreadnought. Also in his case he appeared long, long, long after the event of Meetings time line wise in the Great War. So it would be very possible that some other Ira could yet one day appear someplace.Or it could be the forgetful mega Guyver known as Angel, or she could have gone back in time or even forward or in what Universe, or if you look at Great War closely there could be something else your missing.... possibilites are loads with this plot.

The Grakkens' Queen unit cannot be replicated which is probably why the Gen do not implement it... All I'll say is Enforcer Kavzar.... Also bear in mind, a Guyver is the result of 2 things. 1. Unit-G 2. The DNA makup of what makes humanity and most life on Earth. Combine the 2 = Guyver. The only reason it works on the Grakken is the way the race opperates. Yes they are Guyver, so technically a Grakken could ignore their queen's commands. But as discribed in 7 days part 7, they are a hive and with deep respect of their elders. So the Queen being the 2nd oldest surviving Grakken her word is law to every Grakken younger than her. In other words, all the other Guyver simply do what they are told. it wouldn't even enter their mind set not too obey. Technically though they could indeed take advantage of being Guyver and live their own lives. Just to them, evertyhing else seems pointless than living to what they where born in the hive and their cast system. So basically they wouldn't ever rebel and if 1 did, it would most likely be killed for the insult such a Grakken would bring to it's hive/cast.

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Even with the orginal version of Time War you'd have to ask yourself how? How could an advance alien race come back (for the second time in the orginal version) and mess up so BADLY? They knew about the possibility of the Guyver Zoalord yet they still let it happen some how? For a race designing something so advance the fact they didn't do a simple risk assement and have a zoalord top of the list of "Don't let near the dormant Unit G" defies logic. Something else was at play. That doesn't really answer the question though

It should be, so far it's like 7 Days part 7. In that the Characters are into'd with a bit more space so you can get used to them without them being crowded out (e.g. All Things Change and the Mercs being a perfect example of characters being crowded out). There will be a large cast of characters in Time War, and it's the story that will introduce Zeugma and Kron first now, more so their pre Chronos era selves. It will also give Reeve a much bigger part even more he becomes the Guyver Zoalord, in the part that's already wrote (though it's after the preivew up there) it shows him already scheming.

You're forgetting the Grakken themselves, their units are designed to work with this primary Unit and it doesn't interfere or is intercepted by even the Warrior Guyvers / Dreadnought. In a way it's simular to Zygote Guyver and her command over the clones. Strange that Importantly though that is why the Qween of the Grakken is the ruler even though she is not the eldest. The Elder realised that he was not gifted with the Command unit.

On the news front the story has moved on a lot more since the above was wrote. Though today I didn't write much, isntead I read up more about what I've wrote about Zuegma in the current story line. Suffice to say once Time War is finished and Zuegma is a much more fleshed out character, I'll also add more to when she breaks free in All Things Change 4 and also develop the story more so it's just just a case of secret master Zoalord just appearing out of no where in a Chronos basement. :