Everything posted by Sully
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Alkanphel (what will come out of the cocoon?)
Bear in mind a fully healed Alkanphel was no easy being to beat for Dreadnought. So imagine that with just simply the ability to healand heal wounds? Alkanphel doesn't need a lot to be scary powerful.
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Time War
That was the way it was meant to be. Think it needs more detail though to make it work. In Time War it will be helped by the fact Galen enters the story pretty much the same way as he does in WG2 story. Only that the Ark attacks the ship in modren times not a Grakken scout so Galen never had a chance.
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Time War
The only thing that bothers me is how the WG2 unit came off of the Gen. I am assuming that will be fixed? Yeah that will work better in the re-write.
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Time War
Time for another update. Almost done with the aftermath of the Warrior Guyver Prototype 4's failure. Though his isn't from the Gen's view but that of the Tribe of the Great Snake, or more so that they have become and how they are impacted when one of their close nit group is deemed a failure by their "Gods". Other events happen with result in the fiction we have today and the introduction of another long living Character will be in this part of the story too. Events from the death of the WG-P4 have combined with other factors shape this characters view of the world which utimately are still in play in the modren storyline. This has being mostly wrote up but needs some more work on it to give it more meaning but that shouldn't take too long. As with my writing in 7 Days part 7 I wanted to give the story more of a human element to why things shaped up the way it did and make the character relationships more complex than before. This will have done that and in more ways than you'd have thought before. Once that is done it's time to finish off the Part 2 and get the last major bit of story done and have the Guyver zoalord event happen. Basically as before this will end with the Guyver Zoalord destroying the Advanced Guyver projects and the Gen wondering who or what could possibly save them now. Next week I've a week off, I doubth I'll get much done on the site as I just finished building my new PC built around an ATI 5870 grpahics card. As my new gaming system and some new untoched games have being sitting there gathering dust the last few months and I've yet to play Halo Reach after buying it pre order (Matt the slacking artistic git has being playing it though ). So all in all, strangely I doubth I'll be writing anything at all until I'm back in work until November. I'd a read through and rewrote most of the first part of the WG2 story last week. So far it's being an easy rewrite as the first part read like a diary and needed very few subtle changes. Looking ahead Part 2 most likely will be different as I explain what went so differntly (compared to Time War) there but apart from background history not much will change. Time War parts 3 and 4 should be like this with little change to what was wrote before other than more filler events to show what happened to characters instroduced in parts 1 and 2. Saying that, when it's edited by James I'm betting he's looking forward to the chance to add more to the Guyver Zoalord battles.
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Time War
Will be answered Time War 2. which by the way is at the ending of the Guyver Supreme v Warrior Guyver prototype 4 battle. So it''s getting there. Once that bit of the story is done there is one schene to do based on the fallout of the fight from the humans point of view that leads up to the creation of Faye. Then will move on to the final phase of the story which is the final build up too and the start of the Guyver Zoalord event and the death of Pariah. :
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Time War
Yup, it was wrote like that. But orginally did he use those powers much? Nope he was basically always simply Guyver 0 he even at the end of the story wasn't able to use those abilites he had to learn English and hold onto it (it ends with him speaking Gen and no one understanding it).
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Time War
This depends on how orginal you want to get.... At first it was simply that Guyver 0 survived all this time. Then book 15 came out and years ago that was the first retcon and Guyver 0 was given a lot more history in the fiction to cover it. Basically we said it was a great who experimented with the unit and was given a human body. Now he's a little more and the bases of a dieing races attempt to survive. the Creators have not returned but another race in the Federation called the Gen. So Guyver 0's story has evolved with it considering we now know a lot more about the offical Creators and that they where called the Uranus and that they where part of a Federation of ancient races. The Federation was responsible of attempting to detroy the earth. In the Fan-fic the Gen "aquired" Guyver 0's old Unit in an attempt to re-create the Guyver and make it controllable. They did it not only for the raw power but because their race was in danager of being extinct.
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Time War
Deffo not Elera, while she will be reworked a little she's not going to be more than 50 or 60 years old at most, or will just keep her as is a teenager. Clue: a,b,c,d,e,f,g etc etc etc now I know my a.b.c.'s.......
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dreadnought upgrade?
The rewrite of the WG 2 fic will have this in more detail. But as it's not a major plot device I'll explain here. We've 4 Universes shown so far in the WG fic and another one shown in the GWOTG that show how things went differently for the Gen and their plans. Each one of those 5 had something happen in them that made them all different from each other. The Matrix is the product of the 2nd Universe mentioned. That means it does not have the advanced Nova tech that would be in Universe 3 or know about the W'Kar tech in Universe 4. While it is very advanced and can most likely learn new technology it does have it's limits. So the question being can it advance lets say the Nova twins, probably yes but it wouldn't be by advancing them with a lot more advanced Nova tech. It would be the more advanced WG tech from that Universe that would take over their Units. Though that is unless a Matrix of course learned of the tech from the Strange Worlds or simular to it Universe and learned of the Dark Nova. Bear in mind the WG2 universe wouldn't be the pinicle of the WG tech. They have not being in a fight for their lives for a long time and have not had a need to advance. So fact is it only knows of WG 2 universe would mean it wouldn't use what is considered less advanced Nova tech.
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the Rewrite/update plan for the next while.
They are coming along slowly. As I've to drive into work this week and don't have time to write on the train nothing is happeing writing wise. This month most likely will be crap for progress ont he story. But it's getting close, the first actual mention of the Unit that will become the Warrior Guyver has happened on the eve of the test day for the 4th Prototype WG unit. That is still the current plan (though is subject to change and more so up to James). The main set I'll be focusing on if not completed by James will be the Creator data files which need ot be rewrote so that they are in fact the Gen data files and time lines mentioned changed drastically. Yup, they are done and ready. I just don't want to upload them as having mixed data (some with old power levels and time lines) files will suck. Though as with the fan-fic rewrites that is subject to change... Thinking off hand I might put them up on the forum after Time War part 2 is done.
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dreadnought upgrade?
Possibly, bear in mind it would have the technology avilable to the Gen of the WG2 universe. A Universe where the Nova Project lost to the WG project. What we know is the following. Jasons Unit is the same as it is in the main universe, meaning it was capable of handling Gravity based attacks. It was replaced by the standard version of the WG Unit (Stephen's Unit). Question would be how advanced it was, and how well it rivaled Solom's work. But yes it would be there inside the Matrix for it to use if needed.
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Time War
Above is the first preview. Bare in mind this will most likely be re-edited by me again as while it gets the information out about what has happened recently. It doesn't to me flow right. But in the end it works and will give you guys a clear idea where part 2 is headed. You guys should know where this one is headed. It's linked with the first privew but there is a lot of story between them but for those of you who like reading between the lines. The 2nd preview has just being finished by me on the train. To put it in a perspective time wise this is about 5 to 10 years away from the next major bit of the story that will focus on the 4th WG prototype. Once that is completed the story will most likely focus on a character you guys have being asking about in the forums (that be your only hint). After that part is done and the setup is in place the 5th and final WG unit prototype will be in the story. It's not something I want to rush so good chance it will be awhile away before I get the story finished. But it's still progressing nicely. The story is on about 16/17K words.
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Time War
The way it is wrote, events in the current story that have already happened wouldn't have happened if not for him. Has for his fate, that will remain unchanged. The question is when it happens in the story and why it happens. But seeing that I'll not be uploading the full part this weekend as orignally planned chances are I'll post a preview later today.
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Time War
time for another update. Time War continues to grow as a story... so rather than Part 2 ending at 15K words. Well it's not, still got a lot of plot left to go through as Pariah has grown has a interesting character considering before he was just a footnote and a data file. how important he wil lbecome to the fan-fic as a whole (both Assassin Guyver and Warrior Guyver stories) will be interesting (hopefully). Saying that the part I'm writing now with Pariah will be the last part of the story before the next phase of part 2 which will focus on the WG Prototype Unit 4. After that we've the final bit to do which is the final lead up and the end of Part 2. There will be surprises. As for when I'll finish this.. no iea I keep adding stuff.
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Guyver Books, the Movies, the OVA and The Fic
Blank post here too. Same reason Though if you have any questions concerning orginal characters (though note it would be best to ask in the Time War topic if it's regarding anything that can be answered in that story) and need things covered here would be the place to ask. Though this topic will be pruned and when I view it's complete, locked off and then deleted once the new version of the fic Website is complete and the detail put into that instead.
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Time War
the answer would be Guyver 0 and Pariah. They basically lost too much of themselves in the process. But would they do it if they could? yes but they couldn't. It would be like you wanting to become the ulimate fighter etc, but the cost would be you'd be as dumb as a ****roach and basically lose a lot more than you would gain. Would you do it? The human bodies they have now allow their minds to be as close has possible to what as they are like as free Gen but in human form. But even then their human bodies have had an effect on their being giving them human emotions and the ability once again to breed.
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weird thought
Possibly, very like our DNA is related to monkey's. To Alkanphel, we are the monkey. He is the ulitmate in everything the Uranus learned on Earth collected in one being. He was simply born like that in an adult form.
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weird thought
Strnage fact of the books, Alkanphel was never human. If you mean in his more human looking form how powerful would he be as a true Guyver? Preaty dam powerful close to that of what Guyot would be in his full Zoalord form would be my guess. Alkanphel in his humanoid form showed amazing power and was able to frighten Guyot off, the only attack Guyot had that broke through his shields being the Black hole attack itself, and that didn't even kill Alkanphel.
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Mysterious Stones....
I've not being envolved much in the creation of the Stones. but in terms of Paradox's it's being conformed in the fan-fiction that there are 2 Paradox's. 1. Time War details it heavily caused by the Guyver Zoalord event. 2. The second is only known to envolved Dreadnought and little is known about it, it's only hinted at in 7 Days and is the reason the Gen haven't attacked in force to take over the ruined Clan Ship.
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Time War
Primitive Guyver will be in Time War. But won't say much more than that, you'll have to wait until the re-writes are done of Time War (there be your only clue). Zero and Pariah are now a lot more felshed out characters. There impact on the story will be more than what was wrote before and with the changes with the Gen these characters will give an different insight into their race different to that of everyone else (them being in a strange limbo between being Human and Gen). Other characters will also have their impact on the story. By the time this story is done it will be wrote in a way that you the readers will know things that the characters in present day will not. This will annoy the hell out of you most likely, as it will be something of huge importance. But only you the reader will know other than one nasty person who an't giving away secrets in the story. Again, I'm not going to give away what that is but in rewriting this story I realised it worked better if you guys know what this something is, but that the secret is both buried in time and dead bodies. Sooo onto the news front. Yes the story is continuing to be wrote, plots planned out to work better than before, Pariah and Zero are becoming fun to write about... pity for what's about to happen to them Still a good 3 weeks away, though the way this story is coming along and growing good chance when Part 2 is pubished a fatter more complete version of Part 1 will be relaised also and maybe slightly revised.
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Guyver Books, the Movies, the OVA and The Fic
Blank post here. This is for adding more detail to the above and if I run out of room in the above post.
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Guyver Books, the Movies, the OVA and The Fic
The Fan-Fiction is based on a simple premese which Warrior Guyver then joins. That is what would be a working idea to a story with all the offical Guyvers in it. that would be the live acton movies, the OVA Out of Control and then the Comics. But as the 3 storys do not link perfectly one has to be the primary story that the others link into and are modified to do so. in the end that revolves around characters and the choices they make, so events happen differently for there to be a fan-fiction. There is also the orignal fan-fics the way they where wrote 10 odd years ago. They'd a total lack of information and the Warrior Guyver so what we came up with then doesn't fit with that we know now. So for the rewrite that is happening now all 4 of these atories need to link. Details to follow later.
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Latest Guyver story (Spoilers ahead)
As per the previous multiple warnings in this thread. DO NOT READ BELOW if you've not cought up on things in Japan Ledgends site. Looks like it's finally about to happen, Sho v Agito to the end. Tetsuro and Mitzuki captured by Shizu to insure that Sho fights to his full power. We might finally be seeing the winding up of this great story, some important long standing characters will be dead soon if this story goes the way it is going. v Fight!
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Time War
Update time Had a little writers block, but got over it. Hit the 10K mark. 2 major bits left to do before I can write Guyver Zoalords activatation and go into blow s**t up mode Of those 2 parts, one is about 2/3 done which will revolve around the Guyver 0 and Guyver Surpreme a lot and what they got up to for so long while the other projects evolved and made units capable of beating them. The last part will focus on the core part of the stroy which is the final year of the WG project. After that is done and it reaches the part where Time War used to start (the WG Prototype 5 being finished) we go into the final part of the story, as said above Guyver Zoalord basically will be going full destruction on the projects much like has shown before in the old version of the story, and the rewrote beinging that was published on the forum before. Note 100% sure on how long this will take but hopefully should get another update done soon (3 weeks or so). Note: There will be some suprises obviously, but not saying what they are. :