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One thing to bare in mind, this will be given more detail in the re-writes coming up. So expect some slight changes to what you think is standard. Also timing wise, in the rewrote Rescue there will probebaly not be any Chronos characters at all and the story will more focus on ACTF and the Grakken. This means All things Change parts 1 and 2 will instead be more Chronos focused, along with the story line of Cori finding the Battle Unit and Primitive Guyver's story at the start of part 1. Kron in modren times will be a big factor of All things Change Parts 1 and 2. So expect a different build up than before. At the moment if I where you guys I'd remove Alknaphel out of the chat about Bio-Lords as he's totally un-related other than the people who helped make his Unit somewhat viable are at the apex of that project. Guyver II F's unit relationship to his Unit will be explained in that story too. Prug'stall's suvival in the fan-fic will be given a lot of time here too as Chronos faces it's first major crisis of leadership since the reforming of Chronos 2 odd years ago when the Gigantics knocked their number in half. The Bio-Lords, bio-Titans etc all stem from this time, and in fact from about 3 major fan-fic characters interferance. So yup the re-write of All Things Change will be interesting. Thinking about it at the moment: Parts 1 and 2 = Kron story line mostly dealing with events since Revenge and All Things Change and the new leadership in Chronos. Kron will not be ranked has he was before. Imakarum is the 2nd in command still due to his relaltopship with Alkanphel, that will not change in the rewrite. Kron for awhile is the single most powerful being in Chronos. A master Zoalord healed of his wounds. Bound now to Alkanphel and in turn Imakarum. Agito activates his WG unit in part 2. Part 3 = This will be where modren Gen impact will be fully felt, the Merc's are introduced here. As before though it ends with Warrior Guyver flying the WG relic into the waiting hands of a healed Alkanphel. Part 4 = Agito reveals his trump card the Zues armour. Zeugma's escape is handled much differently than before (that's all I'll say here). Major change here is the Merc's. They will be trying to act as the Grakken's human reps. They will betray (basically leave for high paying jobs). But the only one who fights others is WG5 as he goes a little loopy. He will damage Faye's unit. Chronos and ACTF will have a more hostile relationship in Part 4 too. Europe being the new battleground. The MErc's largely stay out of events and do not piss off Chronos as much has last time. Note at the moment thinking about it I can't think of a good reason to have WG5 and WG fight as it happened before. Also thinking about it Dreadnought's return will happen differently. how the Grakken get involved by the end I'm not quite sure of yet but it won't be the same has it happened before.. I think this is a good enough derail now. Happy new year.

G'kor's Zoalord protectors wouldn't pushovers. Let's just put it that way. He armed it realsing the most present threat would be another Guyver, everything else he could control with ease due to him being a member of the 13 (something he still takes avantage of in pesent day storylines). G'Kor is a master planner, even planning for minor things that repesented the greatest threat to his plan. Zoalords rushing to save the day = unlikely, he'd know due to his rank and would have known something. Guyvers = The only unknown. He'd not be sure of which one / ones so would have have trained a Zoalord to do his dirty work. That zoalord much like Zaugma would have being at test battles and knew how Guyvers fight. So yes you'd have expected Guyver 0, Guyver Supreme and Proto Guyver to put up a good battle. They did the Zoalord didn't kill them in 3 seconds.

Witht eh rewrite one subtle thing will change. When the Grakken started their war, they are as were now Unit wise. But the Gen army wasn't at all what it is in present day stroy lines. To put it in context the Kavzar warrior then wasn't as advanced has it is now. So even the basic Kavzar wasn't 3 times that of a Guyver it was more a factor of 2. As before the Grakken (though with a more basic Destroyer armour than that of the Sect in the present storyline) attacked when they were good and ready. They devestated the early Gen army and a lot of worlds were lost. What happened from there is what happened before. The Gen eventually upgraded their army to a point where the Grakken numbers didn't decide the battles. Enforcer Prime being the person that signalled the first great loss to the Grakken and the Gen counter attack. As before the Gen made peace with the Grakken and few even on both sides know really why, Krullnar's rants about them in 7 Days gives you a clue. This will get a lot more detail in All Things Change. In the rewrite up until then Grakken won't even be known by name offically until that point. The ACTF only learn who they are when Jason is told by Krullnar confirming what they were told by Martin (they don't exactly trust the crazy x scince guy from Area 51).

I could be a git and say "Safari" isn't on my supported browser list (which tbh it isn't and I don't normally check the site on it). But as I also own an Iphone I've to admit it's painful seeing that huge updates page there. So I'll either fix the code or go for an easier option of making a smaller updates page to go into the front page. It'll be fixed in the next site update, though I've no idea yet when that will be. Supporting Iphone's is about as far as I'll go outside IE8 + or Firefox. I'm old and only consider PC's/laptops webdevices. Everything else be dammed (and Iphones would be too though I bought one last year....) The format of the fic's is something that will be fixed over time. As the rewrite takes hold more and more of it will look the same. The most I'm thinking in terms of format changes, is the editing of the fic. Stories wrote by me will be in Times font. When they are edited by James the font will be changed to Vernada or Arial. Apart from that and maybe a header on the top of the page for simple site controls all the fics will sooner or later look the same format wise. Note: aprt from Time War, Rescue and large parts of All Things Change most of the re-writes will be a lot quicker to produce. It's just those stories needed the most added to make them work. Rescue for example simply doesn't work at all the way it is wrote now and needs a total re-write. Once that heavy stuff is done I can then focus more on site design and getting the look right.

It's not the only thing to factor in. F-WG's control medal has details how to make the Dreadnought armour. How things used in the past in the fan-fic will have far reaching costs and factors for the fan-fic in the future that need to be factored in.

New part 2 of Time War now uploaded to the site.

Added Time War Part 2 to the WG fan-fiction, Brian's section. Note: As before this is the second part of the new Time War story arc. Part 3 will bridge the gap between this part and what used to be part 1. The old Part 1 is now part 4. Once the new Part 3 is done that will be rewrote next. Happy Christmas and New Year to you all from the WarriorGuyver.com team! Updated front page of the site to make it easier to see when the site was updated.

In the large scheme of things, Earth is just a blip they see as a distant star.

Lets spice things up a little. Some of you know the main diffence between WG fic's Agito and the offical story line is that in the fan-fic he never got access to the Arizona Relic. But instead he got access too the Unit of Solom of the WG 2 universe. Now after reading Time War part 1 do you think Agito would have access to something... Well not just Guyver info that Solom knew? Also consider the location, the ACTF HQ is the former main proceessing plant in the USA and formerly the Pentagon. So on levels Aigto's new found alliance with ACTF has many pluses to it. So much so that he gave Carter what he wants. Another dormant Unit.

Yet another update. This will be published either tonight or tomorrow. Word of Warning. This is story is supject to change, edits etc so once Time War is complete and James gets his hands on all 5 parts don't be suprised if things change. There will also be my usual grammer/spelling errors

Well in the case of W'Kar and Dreadnought they didn't make their way into "This Universe". They ended up somewhere else completely. Both W'Kar and Dreadnought had access to tech that meant they could leave and go to "this Universe". Question would be this. IF Cassandra was even copied. Where her copy would go and what point in time would be endless. Another thing would be if she was copied so could have being the unborn daughter.

TheGen don't need to re-model their army. Aceaer's are the cannon fodder of the Gen army. The Gen can littrally Zerg (for those of you who don't know Starcraft the term means to simply outnumber by vast amounts your foe and simply overwhealm them) most foes and win just with the Aceraer forces alone. Each world could have billions of them. The Gen expand slowly but surely, taking over systems and building them up to War World Status. They then support those War Worlds by Seed worlds. E.G. if the Gen controlled our solor system. Earth would be the Seed world along with Mars. They are best located for life to grownaturally. They would possibly make another artifical planet in the ideal range for life to grow (or at least start one off using the asteroids in our system as a base). One of the more hostile planets would be completely teraformed but not to produce life, it would be heavily artifical much like the War World of Enforcer Prime. Life wouldn''t be expected to grow here both Earth and Mars would supply this world with what it needs in the form of new recruits. Possubly Venus would make a good War World. The War War would maintain control then of the system. Note as more Seed worlds get ready a second War World would be made. Another thing to factor in would be that the War World wouldn't be like a Seed world. The number of Aceaers here would be far less. And only if they prove themself do they become a Kavzar. Their rack syste depends on them killing an absorbing parts from other would be contenders to that post. Survial of the fitest makes for a good army, but as said before also means they need a supply of good possibly hosts to become Kavzar. Again they then compete with each other to gain higher ranks. To take it in a modren standing, present day Gen would have a working population and fleet produced by Earth in a realitively short time. In a decade Earth as a seed world would be producing an army and growing a expanding fleet of bio-ships that could defend the world. Give them a centry then you'd have a fortress system of 2 maybe 3 War Worlds depending on what resorces are in the Sol system. Each War World having it's own Enforcer. So simply apply that then to the Galaxy. The Gen after leaving Earth would have taken awaile to establish themselves somewhere. They then would have taken awhile to grow from there. The Grakken learned from them. Though they work differenty. I'll cover that later.

Ok.. Basically I've come to the conclusion that this won't be wrote up by X-Mas / New years. So what I've decided to do is stop part 2 not exactly where it is now but end it at a good point (realitively speaking, but the main plot of who did what is shown) in the story that you guys might like. Overall it looks like there willl be an XMas update and Time War will now be a 5 part story. P.S. No idea when James will get back to his editing ways but lets hope it's soon.

It's not giving away much to say, it's exactly like the WG2 and WG3 (if you removed Solom's memory store). This is a different matter... No Comment No Comment (though shouldn't be hard to guess). Sho's Unit's data file won't go up until he actually has a fight. Though art for him still needs to be done. Yeah for the time being I'm staying focused on re-writes. What we plan in the future makes no sense as a Guyver story when you take what we know now and look back at the old ones with an unforgiving look. Even more so since they have small edits from the past to try and tie them up. Stories like Rescue for example completely annoy me (I've said why in other sections of the forum but basically it sucks and is all over the place plot wise), the start of All Things Change is another. All Things Change should signal the Gen's return and the impact it has. Guyver XT9 will have a much more of a role as a harbenger of doom knowing the dark side of the Gen. This will again also have more impact after the new start to Time War as you get to see who the Gen are. Deslexia's a bitch... but yeah I do it and will continue to do it. This is why James edit's my stories Amuro Ray wasn't my creation host wise. But I'm not suprised giving Matt's like of Gundam and possibly Andre's as well. Carter wasnt named after SG1, my brother in law is a Carter so that's where it came from. O'Neill is though from that, there's other insperation for names that I use. Some from RL, can't remember the name right off but that Air Force officer who intruduced Gilgamesh is a name I found on the net who is in command of that base at the time I wrote it. Most names are either made up from no where (see Time War), a little bit of research and changing a name I've seen, or in some casessimply taken from someone I've met in person.

So in the re-write, Agito would not or will not have gained the spheres, or he did and secretely kept a Gigantic to himself without informing Sho and the others? Just want to get that out. Even before the re-write it was decided Agito never got the sphere's. As a plot device Agito never won the battle in Arizona (I'm sure somewhere in revenge it comments on him having being there before or did after an edit a long time ago). The fan-fic basically had Aigot and Sho sharing the Gigantic which is wrong to have done. So only thing changing there is Sho will not in any of the fan-fics share his Gigantic with Agito. When WG2 arrives in the main fiction it will have a lot more impact what he unwitingly causes by bringing with him what he did.

I already know I won't go into it in Time War, but there will be a story later that will give more detail to the Eilminator project. There's a great line in Mutronics (the first Guyver movie) which is something on the lines of "Not all Zoanoids are created equally". The same will can be said of Guyvers especially in the Fan-Fic. So there is your hint about what to expect in that up and coming story. The main thing I'll explain is that Cori (Battle Guyver) will be a lot more used character wised in the rewirtes and up coming stories. Given events of 7 Days read the above and you can get an idea of what I'm thinking of as the next upcoming plot. Back to Time War it's update time. The last two weeks I didn't get much done at all for a simple reason. I was on holidays and enjoying them. Back in work again so the fic is progressing. I've re-wrote some of the re-write so that it makes more sense what has happened. The Guyver Zoalord has being born and his impact will shape a lot of events that already happeend in the fan-fic and ones that some of you wouldn't have expected him to have shaped. There is going to be a lot of action happening at the end of Part 2, basically it will include some new events, events that where included in the Old intro to Part 1, and also bring in events from Solufein you see in Allen's fic. That gives you a basic idea of where I am, and where I want to get too with this part of the story. Can't give and estimate of when this will be finished but hoping for a XMas / New Years release but it might be early in the new year itself depending on how much more I add to the story. One thing for sure though once Parts 3 and 4 are rewrote to match up with the new parts 1 and 2. I'll edit all 4 parts to make them more even rather than a small part 1 and a huuuuge part 2, and who knows how 3 and 4 will look.

Warning, not something you watch at work... or with kids around.... Or if you don't understand Irish humour!!!

There is one thing to bare in mind. Eliminator is heavily modifed to work off what was avilable to the Matrix so it could do what it required in the time it had avilable. Is it a true verion of what that project repesented?

Yup and in the rewrite we know a lot more of the offical story now compared to what we knew back then (it's also helps that I also have worked in a lot of offices since then and seen a lot of how people are deviced into ranked strutures, groups and office politics compared to when I first wrote a story). If you look at the offical story Chronos as an organisation left itself with a drastic weakness against the Guyvers. That being that once the leaders started falling there was nothing ready to replace them. The fan-fic (even more so since the rewrites have kicked in) is based on what happens after Arizona. But with one key diferrance Agito lost the battle and the Zoalords won but at great cost. 6 months later is where in the book Agito is now using his own Gigantic the fan-fic will be very different. Chronos will have it's first Prototype Zoalords in action. Zeus Thunderbolt will be on the run and it's into that world the Guyver II F will be released. All the while in the USA ACTF will grow in it's hidden bunker in the USA. The Proto-Zoalords who will later become Apprentice Zoalords (basically more stable Prototypes) will be their key opposition.

Best to leave that to the Fan-Fic section to chat about. If you guys want to make a new topic there I've no problems but I like to keep this area clear of fic topics and chats. Acording to the translation it's simple why Gigantic Dark wasn't turned into something new. Agito's control medal had the information stored within it needed to convert the Nav sphere into a Gigantic. It gained this information thanks to Guyver 1 and even locked out from ever using Sho's Gigantic again, thanks to having this information that is all Agito needed to get what he wanted. As for the bio-material I don't think that is important to the Control Medal of the Nav speare in the grand scheme of things and once given the needed information it can trigger a growth. It also had Guyver 3's own body to work from. At most that is all it needed and time. Which Agito had as this is based 6 months after the fall of Arizona.

Yup, though looks like we've to wait 2 months to find out what happens next. Next month is a break for Takaya :/ Really looking forward to seeing how this all plays out.

Kinda No Comment But lets put it this way, Time War rewrite will answer a lot of questions. There will be others left unanswered leaving stuff open for the future stories as well has new questions. :

Update time again. Not done much writing the last 2 days. instead I've being planning out the last section of time Part 2 part. Problem is the story has got to a complex stage as it's hit a section where we've some complex events happen in different locations. 1. Fulton Balcus - Needs to be nearly killed and left in a Ruin for him to be discovered/awoken years later. Makes more sense logistically that this happens in / Near the USA (less to travel for him to make his base in LA and then be envolved in the events leading to and the creation of Guyver US and the frist live action movie). 2. Guyver 0 frozen to be found in Matt's story. No knowledge of what happened in Time war. 3. The Proto Unit why was it found where it was (Matt's fiction)? 4. All those other random events that link with the above and events in Allen's story and MAtt's that need not to be messed up by my re-write of Time War. I've it pretty much planned out and I've other sub plots from 1 and 2 that will cary out as new elements of the story in Part's 3 and 4. So hopefully should get back to writing stuff soon rather than planning the story out. But so far what is planned is good.

Aptom has being trapped before by absorbing something bad (the cloaking Zoanoid for exmaple). So wouldn't be the first time and wouldn't be the last if Libertus's short life spam became his.

thing is I wonder if Aptom would want to absorb them. They burn up too quickly, only have a 2 year at most lifespan. This might be a zoanoid Aptom is better off not absorbing and he might know it (he has a sense of zoa-forms simular in a way to Zoalords).