Time War

[Sully]

Update time

Had a little writers block, but got over it. Hit the 10K mark. 2 major bits left to do before I can write Guyver Zoalords activatation and go into blow s**t up mode

Of those 2 parts, one is about 2/3 done which will revolve around the Guyver 0 and Guyver Surpreme a lot and what they got up to for so long while the other projects evolved and made units capable of beating them.

The last part will focus on the core part of the stroy which is the final year of the WG project.

After that is done and it reaches the part where Time War used to start (the WG Prototype 5 being finished) we go into the final part of the story, as said above Guyver Zoalord basically will be going full destruction on the projects much like has shown before in the old version of the story, and the rewrote beinging that was published on the forum before.

Note 100% sure on how long this will take but hopefully should get another update done soon (3 weeks or so).

Note: There will be some suprises obviously, but not saying what they are. :

[Juggernought]

Will something on Primitive Guyver be revealed as well??

[guyverfanatic]

Will something on Primitive Guyver be revealed as well??

I would assume so... I can't wait either way!

[Sully]

Primitive Guyver will be in Time War. But won't say much more than that, you'll have to wait until the re-writes are done of Time War (there be your only clue).

Zero and Pariah are now a lot more felshed out characters. There impact on the story will be more than what was wrote before and with the changes with the Gen these characters will give an different insight into their race different to that of everyone else (them being in a strange limbo between being Human and Gen).

Other characters will also have their impact on the story. By the time this story is done it will be wrote in a way that you the readers will know things that the characters in present day will not. This will annoy the hell out of you most likely, as it will be something of huge importance. But only you the reader will know other than one nasty person who an't giving away secrets in the story. Again, I'm not going to give away what that is but in rewriting this story I realised it worked better if you guys know what this something is, but that the secret is both buried in time and dead bodies.

Sooo onto the news front. Yes the story is continuing to be wrote, plots planned out to work better than before, Pariah and Zero are becoming fun to write about... pity for what's about to happen to them

Still a good 3 weeks away, though the way this story is coming along and growing good chance when Part 2 is pubished a fatter more complete version of Part 1 will be relaised also and maybe slightly revised.

[Juggernought]

Got a question about the Gen hybrid bodies.....how come none of them have tried zoaforming their hybrid body in order to make it more powerful and therefor be on par with a human guyver once they activate their own units?

Maybe the overlord process which has barely any physical changes from human form, or a specialized full zoalord process?

[Sully]

Got a question about the Gen hybrid bodies.....how come none of them have tried zoaforming their hybrid body in order to make it more powerful and therefor be on par with a human guyver once they activate their own units?

Maybe the overlord process which has barely any physical changes from human form, or a specialized full zoalord process?

the answer would be Guyver 0 and Pariah. They basically lost too much of themselves in the process. But would they do it if they could? yes but they couldn't. It would be like you wanting to become the ulimate fighter etc, but the cost would be you'd be as dumb as a ****roach and basically lose a lot more than you would gain. Would you do it?

The human bodies they have now allow their minds to be as close has possible to what as they are like as free Gen but in human form. But even then their human bodies have had an effect on their being giving them human emotions and the ability once again to breed.

[Sully]

time for another update. Time War continues to grow as a story... so rather than Part 2 ending at 15K words. Well it's not, still got a lot of plot left to go through as Pariah has grown has a interesting character considering before he was just a footnote and a data file. how important he wil lbecome to the fan-fic as a whole (both Assassin Guyver and Warrior Guyver stories) will be interesting (hopefully).

Saying that the part I'm writing now with Pariah will be the last part of the story before the next phase of part 2 which will focus on the WG Prototype Unit 4. After that we've the final bit to do which is the final lead up and the end of Part 2. There will be surprises.

As for when I'll finish this.. no iea I keep adding stuff.

[Juggernought]

It'd be pretty cool if he came back somehow in the present much like how Guyver 0 came to be or through some other way entirely. Especially if his actions, accomplishments and way of thinking affected how the story progress.

[Sully]

The way it is wrote, events in the current story that have already happened wouldn't have happened if not for him.

Has for his fate, that will remain unchanged. The question is when it happens in the story and why it happens. But seeing that I'll not be uploading the full part this weekend as orignally planned chances are I'll post a preview later today.

[jedi-guyver]

Sweet.

[Juggernought]

OK, ha i wouldn't be surprised if he was one of the causes for the way that warrior guyver's gravity shield works, well one of its uses anyway...say he was the first one to use the shield to boost one of his powers say to send it to his mega smashers but the power overloaded him as well as the attack from the opponent and Solom was there to witness that final battle and it gave him an idea for his unit he was developing, and then to add to it his rival who created the powerful Nova units would have further encourage him to take the shielding idea to it's present form. That's my view anyway when i was thinking on it, although it's probably wayyyy off the truth lol.

But then the Supreme unit could be back on another host in the near future and it could even be updated if it can handle a mrk 2 upgrade from the matrix or converted to warrior unit status. That would be rather interesting...maybe that guy who gained powers from the mysterious stones in the Nova Guyver arc will get it...or maybe that creator made human that Chronos captured will get it...who knows, possibilities are endless.

[guyverfanatic]

All I can say is that I look forward to the next part and all the surprises too!

[Sully]

Pacifica Test Site

It has being over three hundred and fifty years since Krullnar had made his first Unit. Since then he has finished two more Units both being defeated by the Guyver Supreme. But like the Units of the Warrior Project their designs are getting better and better. Krullnar still wants to perfect the basic design before he merges the Kavzar idea with that of Warrior Unit technology Bitter rivalries have since formed between the Nova Project and the Warrior Project teams. Both teams claim to have the edge on what will be the ultimate Warrior Project. Last year the Guyver Supreme was defeated for the first time by someone outside the Warrior Project. The Hpa’Tus Vulcan Unit – 3A the name of it while dormant proved too much for the Guyver Supreme obliterating him.

Anyone would have being forgiven for thinking this would be the end of the Supreme test, but such a useful being and test was not so easily ended. The Guyver Supreme’s Control medal had long progressed from a simple test Unit. Like the Guyver 0 they represented the peak of a testing system for weeding out the weak test Units that the Council of the 13 felt did not meet the standard needed to be “their” Battle Unit. Before every battle the Guyver Supreme always remained in a Bio-Pod inside the great Clan Ship for over a week to make sure he was at the best possible bio-energy potential for the battle ahead. Unknown to all bar Solom and the Council after Guyver Supreme proved his worth centuries ago his Active Control medal was backed up inside the Clan Ship. When the Guyver Supreme died a dormant Unit was activated by the ship and fed the Control Medal information required from Guyver Supreme before his last battle. His was reborn unaware he was ever defeated.

The Warrior Project through Eve received information about the Nova Project’s next Unit, it was an ambitious and devastating Unit with control over gravity that inspired a response. Solom had to design a Unit that would nullify the advantage of the Black Nova Unit. Solom knew from the information given that it would take many years to perfect the design of the Black Nova, he had to perfect his Warrior Unit and fast. The third prototype using the three sided Control Medal had failed. Again when strained the Unit lost the HSL system, unable to feed itself enough power the Darmon system kicked in, but it was still defeated by Guyver Supreme. Krullnar held this Unit and the 2nd Prototype Warrior Unit in the Pompeii site research ship. Some years later Solom designed his answer to the Black Nova. But to test it battle before he amalgamates it with his forth Warrior Unit prototype he decided update his original Battle Unit the Unit that he first tested the HSL system on.

Now a year later he faced the Warrior Project’s latest test Unit, the Solom Battle Unit G2 stood ready to face the Supreme Test. The battle started and as before Guyver Supreme wasted no energy and simply walked towards his foe. The Battle Guyver though unlike its previous incarnation which outlasted the Guyver Supreme was now equipped with a modern HSL designed for the Warrior Unit. That gave it a lot higher energy pool than its needs that constantly regained energy from the boost dimension so it no longer had the limitation of stamina. The Battle Guyver rushed into battle flying at full speed towards the Guyver Supreme. The Guyver Supreme unaware of the advances this unit contained reasoned that such a waste of energy to simply meet his opponent would lead to this Units defeat. The Battle Guyver landed only a short distance away from him opening its left mega-smasher right away. Guyver Supreme immediately fired his head beam to destroy the mega-smasher cell before it fired. But the laser fire hit off the Battle Guyver’s body shield.

Once the shield appeared Guyver Supreme knew it would only me a matter of seconds before he would be on the receiving end of a mega-smash. His shield activated as he pushed it to the maximum he could. Her mega-smasher fired hitting him at point blank range. The power of the mega-smash was intense but Guyver Supreme had felt power like this before and knew he could withstand it. The blast cleared and Guyver Supreme countered with a pressure cannon attack aimed right for the Battle Guyvers head. Expecting to see the Guyver shield the blast Guyver Supreme opened his full mega-smasher. But to his shock his gravity ball was met by the Battle Guyvers blast field and it swirled around to and fired back immediately a him without the time to shield himself the gravity ball hit the middle of his upper chest blowing apart both mega-smasher cells the force of the impact sending him flying backwards to the ground. He knew he was finished as he lay there in shock. Battle Guyver’s blast field cleared she stood ready to obliterate the Guyver Supreme!

<“CEASE”> ordered the voice. But Battle Guyver’s mega-smashers continued to charge. Horus the Battle Master did not wait any longer. Zeugma teleported in front of the Battle Guyver before the mega-smasher fired. The blast hit her but before it even reached Zeugma her zoa-crystal flared has she channelled the energy around her and the Guyver Supreme. Guyver Supreme sensed this happening but he was in incredible plain and unable to do anything about it until his Unit healed the damage done to him. As the blast cleared a surprised Battle Guyver was met by Zeugma with her arm pointed at her with a Unit Remover charged. A moment later it fired and there was a momentary flash around the joints of the Battle Guyver as the Unit removed from its host Caye and then lay on the ground before her.

Caye the third in a series of battle clones stood before the Master Zoalord. Even though she was a Guyver disobedience was not allowed, Zeugma’s eyes glowed as Caye was set alight killing her instantly. Zeugma recognised her, though she realised she should not for she should have died a long time ago of old age. She was the image of one of Clan Sisters. Not a blood relation like Seraph but close. The Gods must have used her image, Zeugma wondered what ever happened to Aaye, did the Gods see fit to use her for something different to what they did to her? It was something she would have to answer at a later time, Horus commanded her away from the Guyver Supreme and to return the Remover and dormant Battle Unit to Feral Island. Zeugma as always carried out the wishes of the Gods and teleported away leaving Guyver Supreme alone.

A short while later the armour had recovered enough to that he could close the cover to his mega-smashers. He was not fully recovered enough though to be able to deactivate his Unit. He could feel tiredness creeping in. That Battle Guyver was different from everything he had faced before. It was able to sustain high level attacks and was not only able to easily shield his pressure cannon, but manipulate the gravity ball so that it not only was totally ineffective but lethal to the person who fired the attack. He’d being defeated finally he thought. What would the Gen call him now?

Above is the first preview. Bare in mind this will most likely be re-edited by me again as while it gets the information out about what has happened recently. It doesn't to me flow right. But in the end it works and will give you guys a clear idea where part 2 is headed.

Mount Guyver

Mount Guyver was called so by both the “Gods” and the Zoalords that lead their army. Called so because this rugged area was chose to be the location where most of the test Guyvers lived. The only exceptions being Guyver Supreme and Guyver 0 due to their status as fallen Gen. At any one time there could be five or six Guyvers living in the mountains. It was here that Solufein teleported in his search for what happened to his tribes people. He doubted they were killed off violently it was most likely they simply died of old age and their ancestors mated with the natives and what make his tribe unique simply disappeared over time in the city surrounding Argus. But he left the home of Fulton Balcus the zoalord called him back and warned him to be careful about what he sought and that this mountain would contain some of his answers.

Unless he was here to see it he wouldn’t have understood by description along how the land was so very rugged. It seemed unnaturally so with share rocks jagging out around the land. He couldn’t sense any beasts and wondered if one tripped or fell down the side of the mountain how soon it would be before that unfortunate person died. He thought this mountain must be a test site of the Gods made to give the Guyvers and more so their hosts an extreme environment to live in.

Solufein lifted off into the air so that he could see the layout of the land better. Even though it was now nightfall with his enhanced Zoalord eyesight it was to him like as if it was daytime. As he few around looking for signs o life he sensed he was being followed. He turned around to see a strange flying creature. It was a mix of a tiger and a bird and it was not alone. Solufein could sense their thoughts with ease now after seeing these creatures. They had being zoa-formed and they where both the guardians and constant threat in this land to anything human. He did not want to fight though and with a simple mental command the creatures left him alone. Solufein had sensed something else from these creatures. Nestled into the mountains there was had a device that the Guyvers and him were unaware of its purpose. The creatures thoughts showed things magically appeared there that the Gods wished for. This intrigued Solufein but it was not what he came for.

After a few minutes of searching their thoughts Solufein realised why the Gryphons showed him that image. The magical device of the Gods was in a network of caves. The largest of which housed the device branched off that where smaller caves they could not get into due to their size. This is where the gryphons thought the humans to live. Their young hunted them there and where in turn hunted by the Guyvers. This was a hostile situation to go into but Solufein being compelled to find out more decided it was worth the risk.

Moments later he had teleported himself into the cave. The cave seemed wrong almost perfect him shape leading to the outside and it was unnaturally large. As he turned and looked at the back of the cave he was in awe of what he saw. The entire back section was this strange looking device that the Gryphons had saw. It was built into the rock of the mountain and had an unnatural glow to it. At the top of the cave was a device that reminded him of a large Guyver crystal that they had in the centre of their heads. He stood there in awe looking at it. The Guyver armour he once heard in distance memory being called the “Armour of the Gods” by he thought Zeugma. He almost forgot the comment but it now had added meaning to him. If that was the Armour of the Gods then this was some sort of device of the Gods.

Solufein turned from the large cave and into one of the caves on the side. This cave was natural compared to the artificial looking one he was just in and parts of it where jaded and too tight and for large creatures like griffons to pass through. It was likely that if not for the large cave this smaller natural would have remained hidden behind the rock of the mountain. After a minute or two slowly walking and at times climbing through the cave Solufein came across the first signs of human life. The walls of the cave had tribal paintings on them in this section. These depicted in a basic way the arrival of the great ship of the Gods and around those paintings where more depictions of the people hunting creatures for survival. It reminded him of the great cave his people had made their home before the arrival of the Gods and of the strange paintings there his people regarded as scared.

The memory bought a sense of shock to him. Those caves and the area his people had made their home was connected with the Gods. Not in present day but many years ago. The stories of what that cave meant to his people where lost over time. His father only described the strange shape of what where now clearly pictures of the ships of the Gods as something important to his people a long time ago but its true meaning was lost.

Out of the corner of his eye Solufein spotted someone or something. He turned to see nothing wondering if it was his imagination. Then he clearly heard footsteps. He moved quickly after the person. But as he saw her more clearly he realised it was a very young girl. She wasn’t a Guyver as he could read her very panicked thoughts. He would not chase her and let her go towards where he hoped would be her people.

You guys should know where this one is headed. It's linked with the first privew but there is a lot of story between them but for those of you who like reading between the lines. The 2nd preview has just being finished by me on the train. To put it in a perspective time wise this is about 5 to 10 years away from the next major bit of the story that will focus on the 4th WG prototype. Once that is completed the story will most likely focus on a character you guys have being asking about in the forums (that be your only hint). After that part is done and the setup is in place the 5th and final WG unit prototype will be in the story. It's not something I want to rush so good chance it will be awhile away before I get the story finished. But it's still progressing nicely. The story is on about 16/17K words.

[jedi-guyver]

Yes. Faye.

[Sully]

Yes. Faye.

Not exactly...

[OnyxPhoenix]

Who could it be?

yeah, I know. No comment.

Can't barely wait for the next chapter, man. it's looking really good.

[McAvoy]

I am running through my head right now on who it may be. The obvious answer is a young Faye. But if not her, then someone else, maybe her mother.

Or... a backstory on a character that we do not know. Or a new character.

[OnyxPhoenix]

Pretty sure it's not Elera. She wasn't around back then, either. Hummed, the plot thickens.

[Sully]

Pretty sure it's not Elera. She wasn't around back then, either. Hummed, the plot thickens.

Deffo not Elera, while she will be reworked a little she's not going to be more than 50 or 60 years old at most, or will just keep her as is a teenager.

Clue: a,b,c,d,e,f,g etc etc etc now I know my a.b.c.'s.......

[OnyxPhoenix]

lol, very funny, Sully. You'se a funny guy.

[Weltall2]

I have a small question. I thought Guyver 0 was the original host merged with some Creator genetics? It now sounds like Guyver 0 is the crteato merged with human DNA. is this the case now? If so why the change?

[Sully]

I have a small question. I thought Guyver 0 was the original host merged with some Creator genetics? It now sounds like Guyver 0 is the crteato merged with human DNA. is this the case now? If so why the change?

This depends on how orginal you want to get....

At first it was simply that Guyver 0 survived all this time. Then book 15 came out and years ago that was the first retcon and Guyver 0 was given a lot more history in the fiction to cover it. Basically we said it was a great who experimented with the unit and was given a human body.

Now he's a little more and the bases of a dieing races attempt to survive. the Creators have not returned but another race in the Federation called the Gen. So Guyver 0's story has evolved with it considering we now know a lot more about the offical Creators and that they where called the Uranus and that they where part of a Federation of ancient races. The Federation was responsible of attempting to detroy the earth.

In the Fan-fic the Gen "aquired" Guyver 0's old Unit in an attempt to re-create the Guyver and make it controllable. They did it not only for the raw power but because their race was in danager of being extinct.

[McAvoy]

I thought it was always like that? I would have to reread the Guyver C's stories but didn't he already have some Creator DNA in him?

[Sully]

I thought it was always like that? I would have to reread the Guyver C's stories but didn't he already have some Creator DNA in him?

Yup, it was wrote like that.

But orginally did he use those powers much? Nope he was basically always simply Guyver 0 he even at the end of the story wasn't able to use those abilites he had to learn English and hold onto it (it ends with him speaking Gen and no one understanding it).

[McAvoy]

So in other words, his Gen DNA may have more than just telepathy?

Probably a no comment...