Aranor Posted March 14, 2007 Posted March 14, 2007 This is what I have so far on a character I have been working on. Story is still in the making. Name: 95157 (Thus far) Unit type: Original organism Host: None - hostless Sex: Asexual Color: Puple tendrils, blue carapece Height: 3 tagl (Nine feet) Weight: 1.8888888888888888888888888888889 tharad (1700lbs) Overview: Aeons ago when the creators realised their bodies were failing them they stumbled upon a planet with primitive life forms. These life forms seemed capable of using a preys biological energy against itself by magnifying the energy signals within the prey in a sense draining the prey to the point of exhaustion where upon the organism would release a digestive acid disolving the flesh, meat, and virtually every part of the creature. The organism would digest the liquid and move on. It also showed remarkable regenerative abilities making its age hard to establish. Extensive study proved this creature could be controlled and its apetite supressed with hyperspace energy. With its body sustained the creators saught to use its abilities as a sort of armor to offer other creatures greater strength. Namely them. For years they tested until the creature could be programed using their control medals to take the form of a creature fully encasing it and using "hosts" mental commands to move about. The organism indeed offered great strength and their carapece great resistance to many things. One such organism named project 95157 was able to override the commands of the control medal and control its host though unable to digest it. The organism was removed, disabled, and tossed away into the failure pit. The term Guyba seemed to be used on it. The organism, thought to have been disabled and killed some how lived, its control medal still active yet malfunctioning sustaining it. The creature, now having had aeons of information downloaded into its being was able to communicate with the control medal and access it. Over the years it learned to program itself and change its form. Digesting others which were failures and storing their control medals it finally decided to take a single form. Its knowledge now even to or greater than a single creator it took a humanoid took. Four arms each having two fingers and one thumb, two wings, a tail which can split into two, head, and torso. The stored control medals it reshaped into the bones connecting them all into one giant network. Its main control medal now merged into a brain within the cranium. The skeletal structure hollow with a vortex open to hyperspace inside, a layer of aecheron crystal touching hyerspace constantly drawing energy. Around the skeletal structure it has encased three layers of its natural body enhanced by the creators knowledge. Its tendrils within all three layers now covered in smaller caprapece's. Each layer connected to the skeletal structure to draw energy. The first layer acts as muscle and tendons moving the skeletal fram. The second layer amplifies this energy with its own. The third amplifying again ending in a massively strong muscle system as it is basically one big power amplifier. Though the body has a front and rear the joints are reversable. A slight move of its tentacle can adjust the carapece's to allow movement in these positions. Not needing the organs of a normal creature it utilises its hollow torso to store more devices. Excactly what is in there is not currently known. Its control medal skeletal system is basically a network of control medals though not in the normal spherical shape. Should one be destroyed another can rebuilt it. Should many be detroyed the data from those left even if pieces can be combined to be recreated. The wings act as a conduit to direct hyperspace energy into a controlable stream of energy allowing the organism controlled flight in any medium. Both the tails, wings, and any other part of the body at the joint can be dismissed to hyperspace at will should the need arise leaving a portion of the control medal material exposed. Weapons Head laser: The head mounted laser is embedded in the forehead. It also has one just above the tip of its fingers on the back side and one on each point of its tail. Gravity orbs: Gravity control system is integrated inside thus a gravity orb is not exposed. Sonic emitters: Used for both weaponry and primary sonic communications. Sensory orbs: What would normally be representative of eyes is instead sensory orbs allowing the organism to see in many variations at once. Sonic blades: The sonic blades are located on all four arms, the upper arms are reversed blades, the lower arms are forwards facing. A blade is located on the outside of the lower legs, the tips of the tails have one extending from them, on the back side of the fingers behind the lasers are smaller blades extending double the length of the finger. Mega smashers: These are located in the chest behind the breat carapece's. The organism also has a smaller smasher in the palm of each hand. The plates protecting these organs are opened by the subtle movements of it tentacles rather the pulling them open with the hands. Self styled evolution: Having discovered the control medals ability to manifest atomic structures out of energy and learning how to program organic DNA it can evolve itself to suit its needs. A new weapon it finds suitable it can grow into itself. Strength: Currently not measured as humans have not been discovered yet. Speed: In atmosphere, Approximately seven times the speed of sound. (Though not fully measured yet) Running, limits not known. Flight through space is imeasurable as it is capable of bending space around itself. The appearance of speed multiple times that of light is possible. Powered flight has not been measured. Defense: Within the carapece's the organism has shield generatos which aid in reducing material attacks and absorb energy attacks to a certain degree. Backup shields can also be generated to redirect unabsorbed energy into hyperspace returning it to its natural state making a near perfect defense against energy attacks. Mentality: As the organism basically learned from exploring the control medal it is a biological verion of an android. Very calculating and precise. Before its great intelligence it learned great rage against the creators for the experiments and torment they put it and its race through. Having its entire race altered to these bio armors it thrives to release them. Upon learning of the imposibilty of this it has vowed to destroy all that use its race to protect themselves. Though this could change depending on whom it encounters. It is currently chasing remnants of the creators from world to world in hopes of finding them and releashing its arsenal upon them as they did to it. Quote
largo Posted March 15, 2007 Posted March 15, 2007 Wow Aranor that's a pretty sweet concept. If you use it wright your fic should be pretty sweet. I like the word sweet it's so sweet. Quote
W'Kar Posted March 15, 2007 Posted March 15, 2007 Very good concept, deserves a great deal of cleaning up and clarification though. Quote
largo Posted March 16, 2007 Posted March 16, 2007 I have to agree with Allen here on this one. But in a way isn't the W'kar unit similar. Quote
Aranor Posted March 16, 2007 Author Posted March 16, 2007 I intend on clearing some things up. Basically my fic is going to take place in an era before the creators stumbled upon earth. More or less a time when they first begin using the armor. Basically it is going to be the organism with its intelligence greatly enhanced by a malfunctioning control medals data. So basically the organism, not a guyver unit, becomes what we would call sentient and rather upset by its species being domesticated to protect another. Quote
Shenzon Posted March 18, 2007 Posted March 18, 2007 That sounds like an incredible story. The first yet. I'd love to read it. I've always wondered where the creators got or even came up with the idea of a living space suit. I've started some fan writing myself, though I'm only on chapter 2. Curious, what made you want to start so far back? Quote
Aranor Posted March 18, 2007 Author Posted March 18, 2007 I like to look at things and try to figure out where they come from. How they are made. Pretty much everything about them. Whatever it is. Keeps my mind busy. Especially at work. I figured I had not seen this angle done before so why not. Quote
largo Posted March 18, 2007 Posted March 18, 2007 Well I guess doing things that no one else has is what makes things more intresting then whats already out there you know like new stuff is always more exciting then the old stuff. Quote
*zeo Posted March 19, 2007 Posted March 19, 2007 Well sentient organism is not really new, WG's Zygote Guyver being one example (we just made it more like Venom though), but a new take on it is always welcome. Quote
largo Posted March 22, 2007 Posted March 22, 2007 While zygot is like that it still has a host but this one doesn't. Woot and I don't know why. Quote
*zeo Posted March 22, 2007 Posted March 22, 2007 Like I said, we went the Venom route. The reasoning was the fact the organism is a parasite so still needs a host even if it is sentient. Quote
TheGuyversWill Posted March 22, 2007 Posted March 22, 2007 You ever wonder what the Guyver organism was before it was deemed "controled" by the medallion? Quote
largo Posted March 22, 2007 Posted March 22, 2007 Ehh... who knows maybe it looked something like what the new series did when sho had his unit removed during his beating with the first Emzyn(sp?) Quote
TheGuyversWill Posted March 22, 2007 Posted March 22, 2007 I don't know. Perhaps, but one would have to think that since it did look so Guyver like that the core of the actual organism might have been replaced and just the wanted aspects such as the ability to easily replicate were left intact. Who knows. I don't know if I'd trust Takaya to tell me anymore now that Guyver Gigantic is a power ranger's mega zord. Quote
largo Posted March 23, 2007 Posted March 23, 2007 Dude Will give it a rest about the hole gigantic thing yes we know Go go but come on the rest of the series is cool so why does it matter if the lastest stuff really sucks. I mean look at Robotech the first season ruled but the second and third seasons blew chunks. Quote
TheGuyversWill Posted March 23, 2007 Posted March 23, 2007 It hurts. It really really hurts. But yeah... We should get an image for this so once he reworks it we can pop it up on the Guyver Fan Archive. Oh wouldn't that be swell? Quote
Aranor Posted April 4, 2007 Author Posted April 4, 2007 I have a picture I have been working on for the organisms original form. Should I post it or should I wait until I have the story written? Quote
Aranor Posted May 17, 2007 Author Posted May 17, 2007 Sorry for the double post, been a while. Thought I lost the picture I had started. Here goes. http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/55538519/ Quote
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