Time War

[Sully]

So in other words, his Gen DNA may have more than just telepathy?

Probably a no comment...

Will be answered Time War 2.

which by the way is at the ending of the Guyver Supreme v Warrior Guyver prototype 4 battle. So it''s getting there. Once that bit of the story is done there is one schene to do based on the fallout of the fight from the humans point of view that leads up to the creation of Faye. Then will move on to the final phase of the story which is the final build up too and the start of the Guyver Zoalord event and the death of Pariah. :

[OnyxPhoenix]

Waiting with baited breath, my man.

[Sully]

Time for another update.

Almost done with the aftermath of the Warrior Guyver Prototype 4's failure. Though his isn't from the Gen's view but that of the Tribe of the Great Snake, or more so that they have become and how they are impacted when one of their close nit group is deemed a failure by their "Gods".

Other events happen with result in the fiction we have today and the introduction of another long living Character will be in this part of the story too. Events from the death of the WG-P4 have combined with other factors shape this characters view of the world which utimately are still in play in the modren storyline. This has being mostly wrote up but needs some more work on it to give it more meaning but that shouldn't take too long. As with my writing in 7 Days part 7 I wanted to give the story more of a human element to why things shaped up the way it did and make the character relationships more complex than before. This will have done that and in more ways than you'd have thought before.

Once that is done it's time to finish off the Part 2 and get the last major bit of story done and have the Guyver zoalord event happen. Basically as before this will end with the Guyver Zoalord destroying the Advanced Guyver projects and the Gen wondering who or what could possibly save them now.

Next week I've a week off, I doubth I'll get much done on the site as I just finished building my new PC built around an ATI 5870 grpahics card. As my new gaming system and some new untoched games have being sitting there gathering dust the last few months and I've yet to play Halo Reach after buying it pre order (Matt the slacking artistic git has being playing it though ). So all in all, strangely I doubth I'll be writing anything at all until I'm back in work until November.

I'd a read through and rewrote most of the first part of the WG2 story last week. So far it's being an easy rewrite as the first part read like a diary and needed very few subtle changes. Looking ahead Part 2 most likely will be different as I explain what went so differntly (compared to Time War) there but apart from background history not much will change. Time War parts 3 and 4 should be like this with little change to what was wrote before other than more filler events to show what happened to characters instroduced in parts 1 and 2. Saying that, when it's edited by James I'm betting he's looking forward to the chance to add more to the Guyver Zoalord battles.

[OnyxPhoenix]

Much obliged for the update, Sully. Still waiting for the first taste of the goods...heh, heh, heh...

Til then,...

[guyverfanatic]

Thanks for the update!

[McAvoy]

I'd a read through and rewrote most of the first part of the WG2 story last week. So far it's being an easy rewrite as the first part read like a diary and needed very few subtle changes. Looking ahead Part 2 most likely will be different as I explain what went so differntly (compared to Time War) there but apart from background history not much will change. Time War parts 3 and 4 should be like this with little change to what was wrote before other than more filler events to show what happened to characters instroduced in parts 1 and 2. Saying that, when it's edited by James I'm betting he's looking forward to the chance to add more to the Guyver Zoalord battles.

The only thing that bothers me is how the WG2 unit came off of the Gen. I am assuming that will be fixed?

[Sully]

I'd a read through and rewrote most of the first part of the WG2 story last week. So far it's being an easy rewrite as the first part read like a diary and needed very few subtle changes. Looking ahead Part 2 most likely will be different as I explain what went so differntly (compared to Time War) there but apart from background history not much will change. Time War parts 3 and 4 should be like this with little change to what was wrote before other than more filler events to show what happened to characters instroduced in parts 1 and 2. Saying that, when it's edited by James I'm betting he's looking forward to the chance to add more to the Guyver Zoalord battles.

The only thing that bothers me is how the WG2 unit came off of the Gen. I am assuming that will be fixed?

Yeah that will work better in the re-write.

[McAvoy]

I'm assuming either the ship was unmanned or the Gen was unarmored at the time or something else.

[Sully]

I'm assuming either the ship was unmanned or the Gen was unarmored at the time or something else.

That was the way it was meant to be. Think it needs more detail though to make it work. In Time War it will be helped by the fact Galen enters the story pretty much the same way as he does in WG2 story. Only that the Ark attacks the ship in modren times not a Grakken scout so Galen never had a chance.

[McAvoy]

I'm assuming either the ship was unmanned or the Gen was unarmored at the time or something else.

That was the way it was meant to be. Think it needs more detail though to make it work. In Time War it will be helped by the fact Galen enters the story pretty much the same way as he does in WG2 story. Only that the Ark attacks the ship in modren times not a Grakken scout so Galen never had a chance.

It was meant to be as in that we have to guess how the unit came off?

[Sully]

The thing is he never had it on in WG 2's story. This will be helped plot wise by a more detailed intro in Time War 3 for Galen. In away he's is similar to Elera in that he is made for a purpose so comes to Earth in a similar way. Sufice to say my old story telling lacked that detail needed to sell that point in the story.

[Sully]

Update time (yep I know this is a double post of sorts, but a few days have gone by and have something worth while to add to keep you guys up to date).

I'm finally actually re-writing in Time War. The build up is done and am now at the point the 5th WG Prototype is finished and in the story. Unlike before though it's not going to go right from that point into "OMG Guyver Zoalord!". There has being a lot of story before this moment, a lot more character building and important events that need to be closed off our built up to a point where they can continue on in the current storyline.

At the moment the story is 21500 words approx. At a rough guess I'd say it is between 2/3 and 3/4 done. Hopefully this part will be easier to write in someways but the more important plot points will most likely take awhile. One thing is certain, the Guyver Zoalord this time will not just "happen". There will be the final build up and betrayals that allow him to get a Unit that will actually work for him. It's being kinda strange but good though to have such a large story without my main character in it. But it's being a good write so far and looking forward to how I finish this myself.

Once I'm a few pages into this part of the story I'll post a preview of the story from the point the WG Unit has being created to give you guys a better idea of what is happening so far.

P.S. Primitive Guyver (more so his host) is also now in the story but not going to make it obvious who it is (it should be guessable though).

[OnyxPhoenix]

...drooling with anticipation...

Can't wait for it, Sully.

[guyverfanatic]

I look forward to this next part Sully!

[Zoaknight]

I like how Fulton is basically the oldest protozoalord, a precursor to Alkanphel, I'm sure he and Zeugma will be facing off again soon in the future now that they're on opposite sides once again and no Gen stopping them from killing eachother. Also, Seraph being Zeugma's sister adds some extra drama to the story as well, since the two siblings may have to face one another someday in battle. However, does this make the modern day Seraph a Kavzar enhanced Zoalord like Tonnin or is she considered a normal Enforcer Kavzar? Like, does she have the same basic power level, body type, and abilities expected of an enforcer only very old and experienced like Enforcer Prime or is her body design and powers more close to Tonnin's since she like him is a remodeled Zoalord?

[Sully]

22 Years Later - Feral Island 100 miles south east of present day Malaysia

Deep inside an alien warship located on a small island Solom was hard at work. Using his vast telekinetic powers that normally remained idle and the natural control his unit gave him over the warship, a ship that he himself had grown for this purpose, he had finished the fifth and hopeful final prototype of the Warrior Unit project. It had being a hard to get to this stage and it had being lined with both a path of success and failure and of pain. G’Kor’s decision to kill Daye impacted him more than it should have. But it was wrong, so very wrong it was his Unit that failed. It was his Unit that went out of control taking over the Host. It was his burden not an innocent Clone. G’Kor said he had grown too human, using his rank he ordered Zeugma and she obeyed. The image of Daye dying would forever haunt him. Gen where normally shielded from such things Solom got to see her fear and read her brief sense of horror as Zeugma turned on her. Maybe he was being too “human” as Solom put it. But he was a living being and what had happened to another in front of him impacted him greatly. But there was no way he could change what had happened, Daye was dead now. All he could do now was insure that his Fifth Warrior Unit Prototype was not a failure and those that paid for it with their lives at least done that for something.

The Warship he finished the Prototype in was completed last year. Completed in Gen terms meant that it was grown. Its Pyramid Control medals matched that of the Warrior Unit and the theme matched that of the ship itself being pyramid in shape though similar to that of a Uranus ship. This was the first Gen Warship and had two sister Ships designed for the variants of the Warrior Unit that Hpa’Var and Hpa’Edem where working to finish. Each ship matched perfectly the Warrior Unit it was built to test with. With these completed Units and ships he would finally be declared the victor. The Black Nova stood no chance against his Prototype Warrior Unit! But he would not test the Unit yet. Tests had to be done to insure it was stable, that it could stand the stress of the Supreme Test and then Black Nova. He knew his rivals too neared completion. Even the rash Gordon claimed to finally near completion of his Eliminator project. He realised that this new year would prove to be the most important in his career.

He contacted Hpa’Var and Hpa’Edem to let them know of the news. They too reported their Warrior Units near completion. Solom turned his attention back to his completed Unit. It would have to be tested. But after years of pain staking work he was not about to rush the process. The host he had selected was Faye, the fifth generation of a warrior woman he met millennia ago. A woman he ordered to be re-incarnated he felt wronged so that she could finally prove herself to be the true warrior who would help the Warrior Project show that it was the choice of the Gen as their new Unit. This time it wouldn’t be the Unit that failed the host. She though had only recently come of age. He felt she needed some more time before the test could commence. Unlike the past prototypes he was sure of the success of this unit. Merged with his son’s Kavzar Technology would produce a being that could conquer all opposition with the power greater than that of the Guyver and yet remain controlled.

Knossos – Floating City above Mount Olympus

Solom teleported to his home, it had being a long time since he allowed himself to rest. It had being years since he saw his wife or son in person. The Warrior Unit had cost so much to complete and it had cost him time with his wife and son. Time he hoped he could make up to them now that the project neared completion. The house was dusty from not being used in months. But that was easily sorted with but a simple thought it was cleaned by a Gen device. He was deeply tired and fell onto the couch not making it to the bed and fell asleep like he had done so many times before.

Below the great city on the frozen peek of Mount Olympus Seraph the protector patrolled. If she where human she would have counted this as the most boring work imaginable. Who in their right mind would try and attack the Gods? Who other than the Zoalords themselves could reach the Floating City? No one could. The Gods did not need a Master Zoalord who devoted her life to their protection. But Seraph was no longer human. Her highly programmed mind loved that she did this for her Gods. She would gladly complete this task over and over again without any malice to those that asked it of her. Even as a young girl Zeugma’s sister was the most obedient of the two always doing exactly what was asked of her. It was no surprise to either of them that now as a Zoalord she had settled into this life without trouble happily obeying her Gods. Tonight though was no different than the past no one would be attacking the Floating City.

There was only one time she could recall a moment when she would have being close. It was over twenty years ago. She looked up sensing a powerful being approaching off in the distance. She did not change into her battle form she recognised who it was. Zeugma landed in front of her. Even in human form she emitted an aura that Seraph normally found compelling to obey. But right now she was not. Seraph knew something was wrong soon as she saw her sisters face. She had being forced to do something she did not like. Zeugma landed beside her sister the only person she now truly felt close too and even then they had not talked liked sisters in over a century. Zeugma told her of having to kill Daye, at first Seraph did not know who it was and wondered why Zeugma would be so affected by caring out the Gods wishes. But she realised it was Aaye’s reincarnation. Not only had Zeugma to kill her childhood friend, a person she knew since birth once, this was the fourth time she was forced to do such a thing. Even her, a master Zoalord felt the pain from doing so once the Gods left her to her own thoughts.

Seraph though in reality was like speaking to a post. She might have being Zeugma’s sister but the Gen processing never found a more willing host to give up her humanity. Seraph shook her head and looked back up at the floating city, thoughts like this was for the weak. She had to remain strong, focused for her Gods so that they are protected. Once again like so many times before even the memory of her sister buried itself in the back of her mind.

The next day Solom awoke. He went about his usual routine and got ready for the day. For once it would not be occupied by thoughts of nothing but work. Ananke would be arriving back soon too. She had being working on something she said was wondrous. He did not doubt it, every Gen somehow or another viewed their self worth as being great, but why Solom was attracted to Ananke was simple. He viewed her as the greatest Gen mind that ever lived. Some would debate but that did not matter to him, his wife was beyond him and had worked in secret now for many years in the dead Red planet. On what she would not say but research from her greatly helped the Warrior Project. She only told him once that they would make something great together and named it the Matrix. What it was Solom did not know, like a child playing with a pet cat with a ball of string she would dangle little bits of information in front of him only to take it away. It was what he loved about her.

Solom left the house and walked the city. “The Gen population had truly thrived now,” he thought as he walked the city. Gen of adult age and children roamed the street about their daily business. So great was the number of newborns there was now a younger population who could not yet be given a Unit-G than the older generation. Gaia the ancient forgotten world had truly being a place that saved his race. But as G’Kor reminded him this was only the first phase in their resurrection, once they had completed the Warrior Project and the victor was decided they would leave and go onto the next stage. Krullnar worked on his Fourth Zoa Guyver unit and it too near completion. The timing could not be better, if this design finally defeated the Supreme test he and Krullnar could progress onto designing the Kavzar. Solom didn’t know why but the idea of leaving Gaia was not a good one, he’d grown accustomed to this world. To him this was now his home.

Two Months later - Atlantis City – District of Guyver Supreme

It was midsummer in Atlantis and the days where long and hot. Pariah sat out in the garden with Feaia enjoying the sun. She was in her mid sixties and both knew her age was beginning to take her. She was still the commanding woman of her family, still a prideful woman not looking for help but she tired easily. Pariah knew she was long lived for the average person. Most human’s life expectancy ranged between the forty’s and early fifty’s. Atlantian’s had carved out a world where their life expectancy was slightly higher but unlike the Gen or as he thought future human cultures they had yet to discover medicines to cure diseases. Pariah used his medical knowledge many times not only to save her but his many children and grand children. His grandchildren played in the large garden at the back of the house with his youngest daughter who was in her early twenties. Like Zero he too had lost count of the family he now had. But he could not bring himself to marry another woman while Feaia was still alive.

He heard his grandchildren scream in delight and run to the side of his house. He stood up knowing he had a visitor. It was Zero with his wife, Pariah was losing count now of how many he had but unlikely him Zero felt the constant need to be having children and had three wives now of varying ages. It was not a sore subject between them, both respected each other to know what they wanted out of life was different from each other. As Zero said to him many times, he did the exact same with his first wife and still loved her to this day.

“Pariah my friend, how are you this fine sunny evening,” said Zero with one of Pariah’s grandchildren riding on top of his shoulders.

“I am doing well, enjoying the life come let’s have some wine and enjoy it together,” said Pariah mentioning towards the large table to the back of his villa.

They sat, they ate and drank the house servants attending to their needs. As usual Pariah’s grandchildren asked many questions of Zero of his battles, but Pariah sensed Zero was here for a reason. After awhile when the children got used to the idea of his guest being here and their wives now chatted away Pariah knew the topic would change to something more serious.

“Have you thought about what I said yesterday,” asked Zero.

“Yes I have,” answered Pariah.

“What have you decided?”

“You’re correct; it’s only a matter of time before the Council of 13 decide to leave. It’s unlikely we will be allowed to stay here and what would come of our family.”

“Indeed, after you told me of what G’Kor asked of you for admittance to this city I’ve come to realise that while it is a very good thing we are allowed to have a family, it is contingent on us being of use to them. I heard that they seek a host for the new Warrior Unit.”

“How could you know such a thing?”

“I still have my sources.”

“This is not good news at all.”

“I know my friend, you said it yourself. You where lucky that Zeugma stepped in when the last Warrior Unit failed in battle. I imagine this Unit will be a lot more refined,” said Zero. Pariah nodded in agreement. It was time to organise his family and extended family like Zero had done.

“I will contact my eldest children and begin arrangements. What is this land like?”

“Hostile, not many people have settled on this large island to the North. Only animals and lot of trees,” answered Zero.

“I hope it is far enough away from here Zero.”

“No place would be, but the fact they would have to look for them alone would mean that they would be somewhat safe. Once we remain here in Atlantis I find it unlikely they will look for our children.”

“I never thought it would come to this, after so many battles,” said Pariah.

“Eventually my friend all things must come to an end.”

“I never asked you this before. If this is how we are going to come to an end, when did it all begin for you Zero?”

“I guess this depends on from where I start and whom.”

“What do you mean?”

“In a way I am a hybrid. A being made from two people,” answered Zero.

“How is that possible?”

“You really do not know?”

“No, I know what happened to me. I was foolish and decided to make a human body that was more human so that when I bonded with a Guyver unit I would be closer what the humans are in power than our brothers. But I failed I am too human,” answered Pariah.

“You could say the same thing happened to me, but unlike you who most likely cloned a human from that was build for the purpose and had not memory of what is was to be alive. I was not as lucky.”

“How is that possible?”

“I was foolish, or I should say the Gen side of me was. My human side was a hunter from Gaia’s past. The land was harsh and the ships of the Uranus like today where dotted around the Planet. They had being here so long vegetation had clearly taken hold of their outside structure. I know now that Alkanphel was born signalling the end of their project. But for me it simply meant pain as I bonded with the Unit-G. I don’t remember much from when the Unit was out of Control. What I do clearly remember though is a flash of light and losing the Unit after that it seems to go dark.”

“We know from the Uranus ship records that Alkanphel used the remover on Guyver 0 then killed the human host,” said Pariah. He had seen the ships memory. It had shown him these events when he queried what a true Guyver was. It was what inspired him to his own “failure”.

“Yes, I’ve seen that too or more correctly my Gen side of me saw the memory. It was that which led me to the recovered Unit,” said Zero. Pariah simply nodded in agreement. “I can’t remember how I did it, but I somehow managed to get the Unit to recall its past host information. It remained locked though inside the Unit and to truly see what it held that was the mystery at the time. G’Kor wanted results and fast telling me that the future of our species was inside that Unit. After seeing what I discovered he suggested we bond the Unit to someone so that they could see the recovered memory. At the time we were at the ruins of our home world. We had nowhere to go and abandoned by the Federation for what we had done no future either. I took it upon myself to give us that future.”

“That is why you activated the Zero Unit? It was because you felt the weight of our race on you?”

“Yes. Though I did not just merely decide ‘Oh I’ll just go an activated it’, no I carefully modified the Unit and put in safeguards to protect me.”

“The Gen side of you,” asked Pariah now sitting towards the edge of his seat listening to what his friend told him.

“I did not do enough though. I still have painful memories of bonding with the Unit. Screaming in agony as the being I was then was modified by the Unit. I lost control and I just wanted to escape the pain. The idea of escaping became more urgent. I opened my chest plated and fired the mega-smasher. The Control Centre of the Uranus ship was destroyed and my last memory was escaping it and wondering onto the frozen north waste lands of our home world.”

“The Unit G is not kind when it merges with a host,” said Pariah. Zero laughed at the light hearted joke as he too knew that pain.

“Pariah, G’Kor has being their always at the edges or inside the Guyver Project. From the day I became Zero. This is why I don’t trust him. This is why I feel the need to have my family migrate. This is why you too should do the same.” Pariah simply nodded in agreement with his friend.

As promised above is actual rewriting and adding a lot more detail to the days after the WG Unit was made (though the above hasn't be re-read, re-edited, so some bits have very poor grammer more so because I was rushing to finish this on the train this morning as I'd a good flow going). Things are picking up, characters are being forced or feeling forced into action all trigured by the near ending of the Warrior Project. You all know already the final event, but the process leading up to it was poorly presneted in the past and only hinted at... and those hints where crap. This time it will be in the actual story and there will be betrayal and it will probably leave you annoyed after reading it as not all the time do the good guys win or the bad guys really lose.

I like how Fulton is basically the oldest protozoalord, a precursor to Alkanphel, I'm sure he and Zeugma will be facing off again soon in the future now that they're on opposite sides once again and no Gen stopping them from killing eachother.

Who said they where on opposite sides?

Also, Seraph being Zeugma's sister adds some extra drama to the story as well, since the two siblings may have to face one another someday in battle.

They do? News to me... I didn't realise the Gen of the WG fic where dead set on wiping out the Earth...

Speaking of Zeugma after re-reading what I wrote in the past. Pre - Meetings and 7 days the character was really under used, and felt a little lifeless. Sufice to say after you read Time War 1 and 2 you'll understand a lot more about the character as she was then, a highly controlled Zoalord. An agent of the Gen who had a more complex relationship with them than most of the Zoalords. In modren times she awakes to find all this gone, she calls for help and gets none, not even a responce. All Things Change does not do this well enough (there is a lot it doesn't do well enough). Remember the Gen are not bothered Zeugma is now alive, they know most if not all Units are active and out of those most will not even bond with Zeugma or any Zoalord. She's now simply part of the modren day testing.

However, does this make the modern day Seraph a Kavzar enhanced Zoalord like Tonnin or is she considered a normal Enforcer Kavzar? Like, does she have the same basic power level, body type, and abilities expected of an enforcer only very old and experienced like Enforcer Prime or is her body design and powers more close to Tonnin's since she like him is a remodeled Zoalord?

That would be telling. No Commet

[Zoaknight]

Sully wrote: Who said they where on opposite sides?

Sorry if I made the wrong assumption there , I just thought that since neither serve the Gen anymore and since Zeugma is with Jason and Fulton is with Chronos, and since they both clearly don't like eachother, that if they ever met again they'd try to finish eachother off once and for all. I mean, Fulton tried to enslave her the first time they met & laid waste to her people, only to end up becoming HER subordinate when the Gen remade her into the new Master Zoalord, and Zeugma only spared his life because the Gen forbade her from killing him since they still had use for him. I guess I just liked the idea of Zeugma having an archnemesis amongst the Chronos Forces, a grudge that goes back millions of years in time just sounds EPIC

They seem liked fated enemies to me unless Zeugma gets brainwashed by Chronos or Fulton becomes good guy

They do? News to me... I didn't realise the Gen of the WG fic where dead set on wiping out the Earth...

Speaking of Zeugma after re-reading what I wrote in the past. Pre - Meetings and 7 days the character was really under used, and felt a little lifeless. Sufice to say after you read Time War 1 and 2 you'll understand a lot more about the character as she was then, a highly controlled Zoalord. An agent of the Gen who had a more complex relationship with them than most of the Zoalords. In modren times she awakes to find all this gone, she calls for help and gets none, not even a responce. All Things Change does not do this well enough (there is a lot it doesn't do well enough). Remember the Gen are not bothered Zeugma is now alive, they know most if not all Units are active and out of those most will not even bond with Zeugma or any Zoalord. She's now simply part of the modren day testing.

Sorry again if I got the wrong idea, I just don't picture the Gen leaving earth alone forever, sooner or later their testing will be over & earth will outlive its usefulness and become simply a threat with so many powerful Zoaforms and bio boosted beings running amuck (many of whom are not wearing test units designed by them, so they can't just use their extinction device on them). Plus, while its been in their best interest to assist Jason in the past, I wouldn't call the Gen good guys nor allies of those allied against Chronos, they're all just pawns or test subjects in their eyes, & Jason already went back in time & killed Guyver Zoalord Reeve for them (and if and when they ever master the Warrior Guyver technology Jason's importance to them will be over )

And well...Zeugma resents the Gen for leaving her for dead and not even responding to her calls for help right? I guess I just figured that meant sooner or later she'd want to settle the score & may come to odds with her sister Seraph, who's still a servant of the Gen and under their complete control.

Seraph, Fulton, Kron...There's alot of people from Zeugma's past still floating around and belonging to factions she's not fond of, she's gotta confront at least one of them sooner or later (I do like how you've been fleshing out her character more, she's one of my faves now).

Sully wrote: That would be telling. No Commet

Oh now you're being mean! "hacks into Gen information network"

, well, I look forward to learning more about Seraph instory later then

[Sully]

Fulton is dead dude... he died in the first Live Action movie. In the fic time line that puts his death before Sho and Agito where active. Again though this is something All Things failed to show properly, Zeugma's place in the modren story. But that will be fixed in the re-write. As you see above, it's not about taking from the story but to add more to it.

[Zoaknight]

....Sorry Sully, I thought Fulton was still alive in your fanfics "slaps forehead in epic "doh" moment"

Anyway, in lighter news, I like how ya focused on Solum, Zero, and Pariah most recently and show us how even the Gen aren't all just a bunch of heartless gene splicers, some of them know love and compassion (even if they're obviously not the norm for the Gen). I mean, the thought of Gen raising families with humans and genuinely caring for them really shocked me since I've grown used to them being logic driven self proclaimed god type characters. I mean, Faye even turns out to be a clone born from a woman Solum felt responsible for getting killed. Oh, and Solum's wife being the one who created the Matrix, at least in Jason's home universe, VERY cool touch

[Sully]

....Sorry Sully, I thought Fulton was still alive in your fanfics "slaps forehead in epic "doh" moment"

Anyway, in lighter news, I like how ya focused on Solum, Zero, and Pariah most recently and show us how even the Gen aren't all just a bunch of heartless gene splicers, some of them know love and compassion (even if they're obviously not the norm for the Gen). I mean, the thought of Gen raising families with humans and genuinely caring for them really shocked me since I've grown used to them being logic driven self proclaimed god type characters. I mean, Faye even turns out to be a clone born from a woman Solum felt responsible for getting killed. Oh, and Solum's wife being the one who created the Matrix, at least in Jason's home universe, VERY cool touch

I aggree there, this story will be a big shift from what we where used to with the "Creators" and how they where shown v now the Gen and how they will be shown. The porblem in the past was in a way we didn't want to show characters within the Creators. Everyone of them was somewhat the same, and felt cold and non character in a way, they just where there as a plot device really. Solom was just there to make a unit and die. It's only later that the death is felt but Krullnar barely shows it. Strangely it's only in Meetings, with an alternative universe Krullnar that we see them shown any real emotion at all, and that was revenge and hate.

In a way they felt to me like Vulcan's but without the cool back story as we couldn't do it without someone going "Hey dude, Takaya never said the Creators where like that", which in a way the fiction thankfully is easier to rewrite for now because of this. I can actually make up the details of a race, give them a story, give them an impact in the overall fan-fiction and not suddenly claim "oh the Creators done this". It's working much better as a plot device to give them a reason to look for Earth, to want what Earth had, and importantly for them too not want to contact the Uranus / Creators / Federation. This gives the fan-fiction a controlled element where we can do what we need to give you a story.

As for this like the back story to the Matrix, yes its nice to be able to show now how the ideas fit together in Time War. Should be a very good story when completed. I'm looking forward to getting back to work on Jason and getting the rest of Time War complete. I'd say way things are going we're looking at a before Chirstmas release of Time War part 2, the rest should follow soon after as I don't see parts 3 and 4 needing as much added to it. Only needing things brought in part 1 and 2 worked into the story and finished worked out properly.

Update time, since putting up the above preview I've worth about another 500 words moving onto the rest of the story. It's getting a lot more fun to write as the villan of the story finally does something to show what he is up too. That's porbably part of the problem, I'm really enjoying writing this story so am not ending it too soon to make sure it works out. Not talking 7 days part 7 in size yet, but it's 24000 words in total and still needs a decent bit of story told, plots from other writers stories to be added (like the above from Zero which ties in what Guyver 0 rememebers in the first GuyverC story) and battles to happen before the Guyver Zoalord arrives.

[Sully]

Update time again.

Not done much writing the last 2 days. instead I've being planning out the last section of time Part 2 part. Problem is the story has got to a complex stage as it's hit a section where we've some complex events happen in different locations.

1. Fulton Balcus - Needs to be nearly killed and left in a Ruin for him to be discovered/awoken years later. Makes more sense logistically that this happens in / Near the USA (less to travel for him to make his base in LA and then be envolved in the events leading to and the creation of Guyver US and the frist live action movie).

2. Guyver 0 frozen to be found in Matt's story. No knowledge of what happened in Time war.

3. The Proto Unit why was it found where it was (Matt's fiction)?

4. All those other random events that link with the above and events in Allen's story and MAtt's that need not to be messed up by my re-write of Time War.

I've it pretty much planned out and I've other sub plots from 1 and 2 that will cary out as new elements of the story in Part's 3 and 4. So hopefully should get back to writing stuff soon rather than planning the story out. But so far what is planned is good.

[Juggernought]

Is there any plan to have the Eliminator project to be fully developed/explained/brought into the main storyline? I had kinda assumed that the current Eliminator being was a representation of this unknown project, since it was born from the manipulations of a matrix and it could have been the equivalent of what that project could have been in that alternate universe where Jason killed Alkanphel.

[Zoaknight]

Juggernaut wrote: Is there any plan to have the Eliminator project to be fully developed/explained/brought into the main storyline? I had kinda assumed that the current Eliminator being was a representation of this unknown project, since it was born from the manipulations of a matrix and it could have been the equivalent of what that project could have been in that alternate universe where Jason killed Alkanphel.

Good point there, the Eliminator we know best is the one created by that alternate reality Alkanphel, and with use of the Matrix for the purpose of hunting down and killing the Warrior Guyver. However, if what we've read in Time Wars is true then that means that the main WG universe has its own Eliminator as well, or at the very least one was in the process of being made before the Guyver Zoalord incident, and that this particular Eliminator was a Gen project rather than Alkanphel's bloodhound.

[Sully]

Kinda No Comment

But lets put it this way, Time War rewrite will answer a lot of questions. There will be others left unanswered leaving stuff open for the future stories as well has new questions. :

[Zoaknight]

Finished reading the completed story in the actual warrior guyver website, and I can't help but find it adorable that Zeugma used to be little Krullnar's babysitter when he was young, and that he clearly loved her to pieces ....But also makes it that much sadder that his grownup incarnation ignored her telepathic cries for help when she first awoke alone on earth with Chronos after her. Damn kid's an ingrate

I also like seeing how each head of the project back then had different ideas as to how to approach creating the perfect guyver, Gorgon being hellbent on completing his perfectly programmed Eliminator without going step by step first, Vulcan figuring out how to improve his Nova's Guyver's control medal so it could handle its advanced features, and Solom being all poker faced about his plans for the Warrior Project after his success with Guyver Supreme. So much more personality than I'm used to from the usually logic driven, emotionally detached Gen in the modern story arcs.