Razell

Thanks, I suck badly at writing battles, I always make them too short, and, as a consequence, not very dramatic. In Stray Dogs, the two final battles, each take less than a full paragraph, what's that called, being anticlimactic?... though some of them actually work in this one, the final battle is a bit. Remember how Ladena said Archanfel wouldn't be taken so easily, and it's very... Mary Sue? Simplistic? I don't know, right now I'm working on two chapters for for two other stories, so it's hard to think. Thank you.

I'm down to the end of The 14th Zoalord on FF, but I want to change the last chapter a little, if I can figure out how to make it work...

I've started posting The 14th Zoalord on FF. Being 80 pages, it will take a while to post Other stories I've posted: Stray Dogs (Complete) The Fangirl Blues (Complete) The Fangirl Horror (Complete) The Fangirl Menace (Complete) [b]Gyo-Jin Pride[/b] (Unfinished) Hero (Complete) Don't Fear the Reaper (Complete) I hope to right a sequel to Stray Dogs, I'm thinking of calling it Kidoumaru Does Konoha! (It's Comedy, not porn :wink: ) I'm kind of sick right now, but I hope to start soon. And I've started a Lovecraft/horror Story called The Wedding, but it needs a lot of work before it's ready. Here are pictures of Kidoumaru. Yes, he does have six arms.

Sense a theme?

My sister sent me these.

I just joined FF last night, so it will be a while before I can post, and I have to change the titles so as to have both capital and lowercase letters. I'm under the name of . . . Razell

'Kay.

Maybe, I just have to get off my lazy butt and re-format everything. What did you think?

Stray Dogs The Akatsuki is bringing People back from the dead, an earthly Avatar of the evil god Jashin is being created by his worshipers, Mizuki is trying to redeem himself . . . Lots of stuff. Main canon characters are Touji Mizuki, Abumi Zaku, Kidomaru, Nara Shikamaru, Sakon and Ukon. WARNING! Contains violence, spoilers, insinuations about Orochimaru's perverted habits, OCs, OOCNESS, Peanut products and MSG. Mizuki, Kidomaru and Zaku are meant to be out of character. I use a lot of obscure characters. Naraku Eiji, Naraku Eiichiro, The Village of the Silken Web and a few others are mine. Everyone else belongs to Masashi Kishimoto I also need to mention that I'm crazy, so my plots may go off-track from time-to-time Here are pictures of Mizuki and Zaku. STRAY_DOGS_Chapter_1.txt STRAY_DOGS_Chapter_2.txt STRAY_DOGS_Chapter_3.txt STRAY_DOGS_Chapter_4.txt STRAY_DOGS_Chapter_5.txt STRAY_DOGS_Chapter_6.txt STRAY_DOGS_Chapter_7.txt STRAY_DOGS_Chapter_8.txt STRAY_DOGS_Chapter_9.txt STRAY_DOGS_Chapter_10.txt STRAY_DOGS_Chapter_11.txt STRAY_DOGS_Chapter_12.txt STRAY_DOGS_Chapter_13.txt STRAY_DOGS_Chapter_14.txt STRAY_DOGS_Chapter_15.txt STRAY_DOGS_Chapter_16.txt STRAY_DOGS_Chapter_17.txt STRAY_DOGS_Chapter_18.txt STRAY_DOGS_Chapter_19.txt Stray_Dogs_Chapter_20.txt Stray_Dogs_Chapter_21.txt

First up are three short comedy stories: Hero is a Renji/Rikichi Bleach non-yaoi The Fangirl Blues and The Fangirl Menace are short comedies filled with various characters and series I hope you like . . . I also have a in-progress Naruto drama fic called Stray Dogs, I may post it later, and of course, The 14th Zoalord, which I may or may not post . . . You can find it posted on Guyver.Net Warning! The "fangirl" stories contain mention of horrible, horrible horrors! Read at your own risk. Please forgive Schrodinger's horrible accent. HERO.txt FANGIRL_BLUES.txt THE_FANGIRL_MENACE.txt

The Knights of Tennis (The Prince wouldn't come, the snotty little . . . ) I like Momo better anyway.

The Lovable Lecher :wink:

Adorable Nazi Catboy of Doom! I don't even watch Hellsing, but Schrodinger's just too cute to ignore.

One of the most depressing Anime/Manga in history. :cry: