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well, you guys can take your minds off it for a while, i'm busy trying to entertain our newcomer and fixing up concepts in the fanfic so they work.

Guys, are we still here? i suggest that we actually take things slowly, and build it up as we go on.So for now, lets just focus on Shadow's World before anything else.I will make the new premise later quite soon.

The Main Villain,who had unlocked the true nature of divine invoke,got visions of where the Omnipotence Force was mainly concentrated in the multiverse. He then discovered that in that place, there existed what literally could be the Omnipotent God's Throne. However,this place was not accessible by normal means.He discovered that, by tapping into the Omnipotent Force's ley lines spread throughout the multiverse,he could possibly gain enough power to access that place.

Its partially related to the Omnipotent Force. Every world Tsukasa will visit along the way,including Diend's World, has reasons for why the Tartarus Empire is there. This is also closely related to the position of the worlds in the multiverse.I might have to change what Goro said was happening to the Nine worlds, but this one fits better trust me. Besides, we have not posted up the confirmed finalized edited chapters yet, so i can still tweak them. This is one of the reasons why i have not posted up a confirmed version of the concepts and stuff.

Okay, just to let everyone know. Ive established what the main villain wants, its related to many things like why these specific Nine Worlds were to be invaded?

Thanks for the stuff tokuwarior, i'll go revise this and post it when i'm done.

The problem i feel shows i watch nowadays is that they lack the "pull" factor. I nowadays watch, finish, and is done with it for the time unless its finished its run.

Good obeservation. But i don't have a good opinion of western cartoons, you see, and i don't have the taste for live action drama. Ive only got the impression that western cartoons got bad after the 90's. And yes *sigh* Just by looking at the gaming industry alone, i can feel entertainment is going down. Its all about the hardware that not everyone can afford. Anime is having its big downfall this year as well.It begun failing since 2007. ...............And it wasn't that great even before that!

Still got one more exam on next friday, so i'll be busy.

so you changing anything else?

While i admit there are possiblites of other beings able to tap into the Omnipotent Force, but do note, no one in the multiverse can actually tap into 100% of it.That act is an utter impossibility since it would require becoming the Multiverse in the first place. Even the beings whose DNA was used in the divinity operations could only use at most 50%-60% of it.The most powerful of them of course still 65% only.

oh yeah, about what Magnus felt about Decade's Divine Invoke. He could feel it was some pure familiar and yet unknown power with no particular alignment at first, but it quickly became "Decaded". Since the Omnipotent Force is the source of power that literally gives life, it is not strange to feel familiar with it, but in its pure nonaligned form will make any lifeform feel strange.

The final bit cant be really like this, it would make it look too friendly a fight.Just cut out the unnecessary dialogue,make a bit like they were really wanted to give it their all at themselves and delete the verbal agreement to end it with their most powerful blows. Decade and Magnus both can tell that each other were at their limits anyway. In short, -Make the fight more of all out brawl of fists and wills or something like that. -Then end it with them charging at each other and they hit each other with their finisher punch attacks. Magnus's punch really hit Decade hard that Decade fell to the ground with his helmet slightly caved in where Magnus hit him. other than that, nothing else i guess for now.

still 2 more days till my exam is over, so wait.

What should the source of power in the Multiverse be called?

ok, just an update, we will put a copy of all of the neccessary info in Tales's form. The original premise has been changed, so i have to retype it all....For illustrations bits, i wont really do that just yet.

Do you guys read Springgan? i think we could look at Jean's regenerative ability and see if it fits here.

i will do up the Damocles sword in the illustration later.

well, if your are dealing with a full true god/demon whose wounds would recover within seconds,and can die many many times over before being really killed,you would want that effect so you can kill them eventually once they are down to their "last" life. then again, i should rework this into a better theory when ive got time,it just a test sample how it works.

So what happened to those items? It cant be helped if riders like Magnus, Shadow,Ghoul cant beat this.it was designed against their very existence.. Just a bit of explaination how it works. Damocles reaction Human/Mortal-No reaction Part Demon/Divine-Small reaction,can injure them slightly effectively. Quarter Demon/Divine-Small-Medium reaction,can injure them effectively.Wounds inflicted will not heal for a while. Half Demon/Divine-Medium reaction.can injure them very effectively.Wounds inflicted will not heal until the sword loses sight of target. 3/4 Demon/Divine-Medium-Big reaction.Wounds inflicted will get worse over time until the user tells it to stop.If the blade stuck in the target,any poor attempts to extract the blade will result in it activating a curse of magic to make it plunge deeper into the target. Full Demon/Divine-Big reaction.Wounds inflicted will get worse over time until the user tells it to stop.If the blade stuck in the target,any poor attempts to extract the blade will result in it activating a curse of magic to make it plunge deeper into the target and causing new wounds to appear.

uuuh, there cant really be a blade parallel to Damocles.(For very good reasons) Damocles,the sword that cuts the mighty,the God Slaying Blade. Created by Dark Tsukasa's unique one and only ability to access the(has not created a name for the source of power of the multivere),it is an essentially an existence created to slay beings of a higher existence. The workings of this blade is more sophisticated than any god slaying weapons,due to the complicated workings of the blade.Dark Tsukasa used the infinite source of power from the multiverse to condense a series of self created multiverse laws,rules and workings and materialise it into a form. Like a law in the universe, it will trigger upon coming into contact with anything or sensing a target within certain power levels,and will create a solution to enforce its destruction.(and thus a dagger version of it that appeared in Dark Tsukasa's hand) In short, the Damocles Sword is multiversal law against existences of certain levels taken a physical form. However, when its special ability is not activated, it is as good just any blade made by the best mortal sword makers.(Nothing higher than mortal materials should be used or else the blade could have a contradiction, thus destroying itself or losing its ability) Right now,i'm still working on a name for the source of power that exists in the multiverse. Any suggestions?This is related to Divine Invoke's true power.

Damocles's usual form is a Sabre actually,but please wait for me to put up why Dark Tsukasa suddenly managed to have a dagger version of it in his hands. btw, as to the origins to this blade, is closely related to his ability. Though he might have gone to Majin's planet to get a good example of what a god slaying weapon is during his search to find a god slaying weapon. Dark Tsukasa obtained it and decided to create an anti-higher existance slaying weapon after knowing the concept behind the weapon. btw,why would the Majin have that? We are getting into spoiler territory, just wait first.

Hmm okay here's what happens next. After Magnus fights and defeats the berserk Diend,suddenly, High Priest Daitosou appear. Magnus:Another Tartarus higher ups?Well am i lucky today.And its the one spearheading the entire invasion too! High Priest Daitosou: Narutaki!Take Diend away from here!I will hold him back! Narutaki:Are you sure about this!?This is the monster that.... High Priest Daitosou:I don't intend to get killed. Magnus:Where are my comrades? Narutaki:I will send men to back you up!Just hang in there! Narutaki then flees away with Kaito. High Priest Daitosou: oh, they are perfectly "alright" in our care.Despite not being cooperative...and they escaped! High Priest Daitosou:Oops,i cant say anymore.We may have lost the other riders, but dealing with you will have to come first! Magnus:Bring it, i defeated your empire's strongest warriors!! You and the rest are not much compared to them! Magnus then changes into a powerful form as High Priest Daitosou opens up a Dimension gate..... Just as the newly summoned Tartarus minions rush in and Magnus finished form changing and charges at the minions. Suddenly,all of them except Magnus pause upon feeling something. Magnus:What's wrong?Why the sudden halt? A gate appears from behind High Priest Daitosou and Dark Tsukasa walks out (in his official Tartarus armor and Helmet.) High Priest Daitosou:......why are you here.......? Dark Tsukasa:...Go back to the base....I will handle him.... High Priest Daitosou:You cant be serious!This is the... Dark Tsukasa:I know.Take the men away. High Priest Daitosou:I see.*a dimension gate then appears and whisks the Tartarus Minions back to base* High Priest Daitosou:...I will stay here and watch. Dark Tsukasa:....Fine. Magnus:So you are leader of the Tartarus Empire. Magnus:[Thinking]What is this pressure is this iam feeling here?It feels like it could overwhelm me if I'm not careful![Thinking} Magnus:....If i defeat you, all of this will end! Magnus launches a ranged attack,and Dark Tsukasa takes out a strange looking saber and slices the attack into nothing! Dark Tsukasa:......Magnus, was it?An existence similar to Decade? High Priest Daitosou:[Thinking]Indeed, it ends up only he can deal with such an opponent.[Thinking} Magnus then changes to Extinction Form. High Priest Daitosou:Watch out!He's changing into "that!" Dark Tsukasa:So this is the power that defeated Decade. Magnus Extinction then tries to punch Dark Tsukasa...but... Dark Tsukasa then narrowly avoids his punch and stabs Magnus Extinction in the stomach with a dagger that just appeared in his hand! Magnus Extinction then stumbles back and shouts out in tremendous pain! Dark Tsukasa:Like it?I went away from my empire for a while to make this to slay things like you if they ever appeared! Dark Tsukasa:The God Slaying Blade,Damocles. Dark Tsukasa:Hurts, doesn't it?The more powerful the target's existance, the more powerful the damage!! Dark Tsukasa:Especially... those whose existence has divinity... Magnus then looks in horror to see his wounds are getting worse rather than healing! Magnus then quickly pulls out the dagger with force and returns back to normal form. Dark Tsukasa:now, you die. Goro then suddenly appears and quickly flees with Magnus and they get whisked away by a dimensional wall. *I will explain what Damocles is later on and its powers*

...is anyone actually reading what i'm saying? okay before i go on what happened next, someone give a name for this High Priest in the Tartarus Empire.

I was thinking of something on how Divine Invoke was to be revealed in the story. In the 3rd fight with Diend, After Decade Cosmos defeats Diend and knocks him out of suit, Kaito decides to use a experimental divinity injection so he can use Divine Invoke.Kaito then henshins back into Diend. However, this goes awry,although his body can slowly accommodate to it,his mind cannot take the sudden surge of power from the Divinity DNA injection.Kaito is unable to control the Divine Invoke power as it is not within his mental capacity to do so. Diend then begins unleashing the power recklessly.Goro then steps in and ushers Decade and Natsumi to flee as this is something they cant handle anymore.Goro calls for Magnus to deal with this and he flees with Natsumi and Decade from the scene. Magnus then arrives shortly to see Diend unleashing the power in his surroundings as he walks,causing destruction. Ive decided not to give the Divine Invoke powers and moves real names yet.