*Chernaudi Posted May 16, 2014 Author Posted May 16, 2014 I got a good start on Chapter 12. Shizu and Jennifer (a character from Twilight that existed only in text that I incorporated into my story) are having a little girl talk, but action will pick up soon, and Lia and Camel reveal some new powers unique to them later on as well. Quote
*Chernaudi Posted May 19, 2014 Author Posted May 19, 2014 Since I mentioned her, this is what Jennifer sorta looks like: https://scontent-b-ord.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-frc3/t1.0-9/395505_10150552166694317_591147147_n.jpg https://fbcdn-sphotos-c-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash2/t1.0-9/182007_10150097928799317_7822672_n.jpg https://scontent-a-ord.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ash2/l/t1.0-9/180932_10150097927239317_826873_n.jpg https://fbcdn-sphotos-f-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/t1.0-9/1385934_10151620901881739_1654291958_n.jpg Jennifer looks like the pale, brunette woman Quote
*Chernaudi Posted May 19, 2014 Author Posted May 19, 2014 Vampire hybrid women are supposed to be extremely beautiful. That, and I'm partial to brunettes. I'd think that Jennifer would look kinda like that because she's part vampire and of Hispanic heritage. I might have one more OC to introduce, and she'll be a blonde, which will be something different. Quote
*Chernaudi Posted May 20, 2014 Author Posted May 20, 2014 BTW, I did say that Melinda looks like Kristen Stewart/Bella Swan and Jess looks like Jenn Proske from Vampires Suck? Photos of them are all over the internet and such. Anyways, about Shizu's hair, should it be like when she first appeared in the manga (straight, parted down the middle), how it was little later on (pulled back into a ponytail with a bow or scrunchie with a couple of dog-ears hanging down the sides of her head), or as it is now (pulled back, some of it held in a ponytail with a band or scrunchie, and the little bangs she has), or some other combination? Shizu and Jennifer are having "girl talk" at this stage. Would it be nice, since most of the characters are female, for more moments like that, or moments between lovers/husbands and wives? Quote
*Chernaudi Posted May 24, 2014 Author Posted May 24, 2014 Some more stuff about my fan fic. Firstly, I'll soon start posting rough drafts of chapters in a separate topic here. Secondly, I decided on things about my newest character that'll be introduced soon here. Her name is Veronica, she likes to be called V-ron, V, and Ver. She's about 5'4", extremely feminine, blonde, with indigo eyes. She'll be introduced near the end of chapter 12. Quote
*Chernaudi Posted May 24, 2014 Author Posted May 24, 2014 I was trying to figure out her name last night. Couldn't just name her something generic. I thought of Vanessa, but Renesmee from the Twilight Saga had that as an alias (based on her nickname Nessie). But I settled on Veronica because of that, as well as Veronica Mars (portrayed by Kristen Bell, a blonde) and stuff like that. Quote
Guest Jupiter Posted May 24, 2014 Posted May 24, 2014 Well, I'm excited about reading the first chapter of your novel when you post it. I can't wait to see Mizuki cheat on Sho with Richard Guyot. Quote
*Chernaudi Posted May 27, 2014 Author Posted May 27, 2014 Anyways, if one wants a bit of a visual on what Veronica looks like, imagine Ashely Benson with waist length hair and purplish/indigo eyes. Quote
Guest Jupiter Posted May 28, 2014 Posted May 28, 2014 Anyways, if one wants a bit of a visual on what Veronica looks like, imagine Ashely Benson with waist length hair and purplish/indigo eyes. Katie Cassidy? Quote
*Chernaudi Posted May 28, 2014 Author Posted May 28, 2014 That could work, too. Kristen Stewart also looked good as a blonde. Veronica doesn't exactly look like what I posted, but it was more to give an idea or a visual that was at least (hopefully) close. Quote
Guest Jupiter Posted May 29, 2014 Posted May 29, 2014 That could work, too. Kristen Stewart also looked good as a blonde. Veronica doesn't exactly look like what I posted, but it was more to give an idea or a visual that was at least (hopefully) close. If I were basing a female fictional character off of someone. It'd have to be Summer Glau. She's hot, she's a model, she's a dancer, and one of the best actress that I've come to appreciate. She played in Terminator- The Sarah Connor Chronicles (Seasons 1 and 2 as Cameron/T0K-715) , Arrow, Firefly,Alphas, Doll House, and a few movies. She's a very nice person and if I had a choice in basing any of my fictional characters off of anyone. It'd be her. Quote
*Chernaudi Posted May 29, 2014 Author Posted May 29, 2014 In some pics, Summer looks like an adult live action version of Renesmee Cullen from the Twilight Saga (Renesmee is Bella and Edward's daughter), though I do think that to an extent that Lily Collins is a bit closer. It's sorta like how Lucithea on Deviant Art did a Guyver characters in real life/live action thing and picked Yuri Ebinhara as Natsuki (good fit) and picked Yukie Nakama as Shizu. Yukie is a lot older than Shizu (35 vs whatever Shizu is in the manga, like 20?), though, to be fair, Yukie doesn't look 35 in the least Quote
Guest Jupiter Posted May 29, 2014 Posted May 29, 2014 Yeah, Summer is starting to look like a women in her mid 30's in some of her photos. She's 32 and she's aged well. Most women don't age well at all. But I have to say, Summer Glau seems to get more and more prettier the older she gets. That could....could be my opinion, attraction,and my admiration of her speaking though. She's one of my top favorite actors. After all, beauty is in the eye of the beholder. Quote
*Chernaudi Posted May 29, 2014 Author Posted May 29, 2014 I seriously only thought that she was in her 20s to be honest. I'll be trying to post more chapters of my story later, maybe just 1-2, but more chapters will be coming soon. Quote
*Chernaudi Posted May 29, 2014 Author Posted May 29, 2014 OK, slight revision. Character's first and middle name is Veronica Jacqueline, and many of the attributes are the same, though she has one greenish blue eye and one hazel eye. Kinda based her off of this: https://www.facebook.com/media/set/?set=a.647531835322875.1073741839.523611434381583&type=3 https://www.facebook.com/media/set/?set=a.647960768613315.1073741840.523611434381583&type=3 Quote
*Chernaudi Posted May 30, 2014 Author Posted May 30, 2014 Another slight revsion (good thing I haven't written much about Veronica yet!): Imagine what I posted above with quite a bit (by that I mean a lot) of Jane Child from the early 1990's thrown in (quite a few of Jane's music videos can be found quite easily on YT, and Jane's a damn good singer and songwriter, too.) Quote
*Chernaudi Posted May 30, 2014 Author Posted May 30, 2014 So what should I do with Veronica as far as what I've posted so far? In case you wanna know, here's some photos of Jane: https://www.facebook.com/pages/Jane-Child/117040688316507?ref=br_tf&id=117040688316507&sk=photos_stream Quote
*Chernaudi Posted May 30, 2014 Author Posted May 30, 2014 I've basically decided that Veronica will kinda look a bit like Jane and a couple of other people. But wait until you see Melinda's mom, Miranda A little bit of this: http://www.imdb.com/name/nm4758215/?ref_=rvi_nm And Miranda Hilgers from WeatherNation. Quote
*Chernaudi Posted June 1, 2014 Author Posted June 1, 2014 As for Veronica, she'll look a little bit like one of my friends with some Jane Child thrown in. And she'll be about 5'8" She'll look a bit like this: https://www.facebook.com/PeaceLoveUnity89/media_set?set=a.10151620520696754.1073741826.683436753&type=3 Quote
*Chernaudi Posted June 2, 2014 Author Posted June 2, 2014 Another OC: Violet, Vernonica's sister. She'll look a bit like this: https://www.facebook.com/media/set/?set=a.647531835322875.1073741839.523611434381583&type=3 https://www.facebook.com/media/set/?set=a.647960768613315.1073741840.523611434381583&type=3 Quote
*Chernaudi Posted June 3, 2014 Author Posted June 3, 2014 One change and one other OC. Veronica will be a bit shorter than 5'8". Probably about 5'6" or a bit less. And one more OC: Vanessa, Jennifer's adopted sister, who'll look a bit like this: https://www.facebook.com/media/set/?set=a.561658723884439.1073741827.507406099309702&type=3 Quote
*Chernaudi Posted June 4, 2014 Author Posted June 4, 2014 I've been thinking a lot about Jennifer and one day, I might give her a spin off or at least a really humorous chapter later in the story. Here's a couple of other photos, from a modeling site: http://images.purestorm.com/z-images8/imageupload15/jadestiff1991_47904031.jpg?1815512237 http://images.purestorm.com/z-images7/imageupload6/jadestiff1991_42616525.jpg?1756995904 http://images.purestorm.com/z-images4/imageupload13/jadestiff1991_23073536.jpg?438360428 http://images.purestorm.com/z-images14/imageupload5/jadestiff1991_88973637.jpg?325500400 Quote
*Chernaudi Posted June 4, 2014 Author Posted June 4, 2014 Hope you like the ideas for my OC's. I'll be working more on Chapter 12 if I get a chance later tonight after I do a few things. Quote
*Chernaudi Posted June 6, 2014 Author Posted June 6, 2014 I haven't done a ton of work on it lately, though I'll try to tonight. I'll be posting chapter 6 in the thread soon and I'll also write an additional short story about Shizu in the adult section. Quote
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