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Ok, I think I'll just re-translate everything instead of using the ones you posted. Reading over the translated text takes longer.

It's impossible to arrange this on a word per word basis due to different grammar styles, but I did arrange it to match it by line, hence the fragmented sentences.

If you get stronger, for what purpose is that power

It is important to the Judge who uses it (you yourself)

Obtaining all by brandishing the dreaded... (You're mistaken!)

The inside of a praying person is only an Egoist (Isn't that right?)

In that instant, the dangerous appetite of the swallowing Darkside

POWER to TEARER the strength of heart

Just now, when being tested

Turn the destroyer into a protector, controlling that wish

POWER to TEARER now tame it

The power that continues from ancient times

being wielded by that body, in an eat or be eaten mission

Wow... POWER to TEARER

Just as always, using the same old methods (think about it)

Being confused driven in a corner, what to do after? (Don't run!)

In one last push, using the last measure in trying times to risk danger

POWER to TEARER if it's a challenge

even though it's faint, there is light

Even in an uncontrollable reality, do not overlook the chance

POWER to TEARER hold it down

With the raging unknown power

do what you can do, continue to the next stage

Wow... POWER to TEARER

Strongly fight to protect the wish and dreams inside your heart

This is where you advance, don't lose sight of the future

POWER to TEARER the strength of heart

Just now, when being tested

Turn the destroyer into a protector, controlling that wish

POWER to TEARER hold it down

With the raging unknown power

do what you can do, continue to the next stage

Wow... POWER to TEARER

Wow... PuToTyra

  • 2 months later...
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Okay, still doing some work on remaking the music video while also working on other projects as well but I was wondering if I can get help in translating these two song titles. They're from an album which is done by defspiral.

I used bablefish but I don't fully trust their translations.

Here are the two song tracks.

Track 1 - トワイライト

Track 2 - 月ã¨ãƒ´ã‚£ãƒ¼ãƒŠã‚¹

Bablefish said that track 1 was called 'Twilight' while track 2 was something about 'Month or vuinasu'.

I just want to be 100% sure so I can rename them into English on my media player, which always puts those bracket boxes in place of foreign text font on the playlist instead of the actual font.

Thanks in advance.

Edited by Ryuu-Oh
  • 4 months later...
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Hey guys, I'm helping a friend edit one of his fanfiction chapters and he needs a bit of help on a english to Japanese translation.

In his story, the character is about to receive a big power up and will have an attack that uses draconic energy. So he was modeling the attack in a similar fashion to Ichigo's Getsuga Tensho. We know that Getsuga Tensho translates as either Moon Fang or Lunar Fang and, when used by Ichigo as an attack, translates as Moon Fang Piercing the Heavens.

Well, his character will use an attack based on the words, Dragon Fang. And the Attack would be called Dragon Fang shattering the Earth.

How would that be written in Japanese romaji? Thanks to those who help out.

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well dragon fang would be Ryuga.

earth shattering should be daichikudaku.

but that may not be the most elegant way of saying it.

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by the way, getsu ga is moon fang. ten shou is heaven something.

according to wikipedia, it is heaven slicing, but my kanji dictionary doesn't list 'slicing' as a definition for shou. it's likely that the usage is indicating an opposition, or preventative. i personally think 'against heaven' would be more suitable.

  • 1 year later...
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Wow, this thread hasn't seen one lick of action in almost 2 years.  Guess I'll start it back up.  I'm working on notes for a fanfic, a Kamen Rider one to be exact.  The Rider is called Kamen Rider Syn and he has forms based on the 7 Deadly Sins and is able to increase his own power in battles, depending on how strong the main sin of his opponent is.  He's a young college student that is turned into a super cyborg weapon of mass destruction by the HADES Organization, which is founded and run by none other than his own father, The Great Leader who also calls himself Abaddon.

 

Syn feels that he must wipe out HADES for good and has a habit of judging others by the weight of their own sins.  So I wanted to create a catchphrase for both the character as well as the main theme of the series itself.  I borrowed some bits from Double and I came up with this.  "Now, your sins be judged!"  When I tried to translate it, I got, "Saa, anata no tsumi o handan suru!"  I'd like to know if I'm correct with that translation.  And, I'd also like to know if I got this right as well.

 

ã•ã‚ã€ã‚ãªãŸã®ç½ªã‚’判断ã™ã‚‹

 

Any help would be greatly appreciated.

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i would have thought you need to use shiteimasu.  could be wrong. I haven't studied for ages.

also, I would use soshite instead of sa-, as that seems a bit casual. leave out the 'anata no' because the context should do the job.

who knows, I might be right and the following might be suitable...

ãã—ã¦ã€ç½ªã‚’判断ã—ã¦ã„ã¾ã™

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I don't know if G-Translate is right but, if it is, the rough translation is, "And, I have to determine the sin."  While I like how it sounds in Japanese, it kinda goes away from what I want it to mean in English.  Would there be any other way?  Of course, this is only if Google Translate gave me a poor translation...which it's known to do from time to time.

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