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So far you've edited these:

Chapter 1 - Prolgue. (I've had to do some small minor spelling and grammar edits but just a few words)

Chapter 2 - Episode 1 (this is the chapter you are currently asking for)

I'm still in the middle of writing Chapter 3 - Episode 2 so there is no edited version of this one yet.

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When I write fanfics, my plans are only what I want the chapter to contain. I don't go into full detail like you have done as it all just comes to me as I write.

So for chapter 3 what will mostly takes place seeing as Shadow won't be there for the first journey will be the following (divided into 3 sections)...

section 1

  • Tsukasa arrives in Shadows world.
    The first thing he sees is utter darkness.
    A group of people wage a battle against the Death Roaches.
    Tsukasa transforms into Decade to help them.
    As he fights both Saber and Exis appear to finish the Death Roaches off and then they attack Decade.
    Decade wants to know why they are attacking him and they tell hi it's his fault that their world is like this.
    Decade tells them he doesn't remember anything from before a year ago.
    The Divine Guild interogates him and proves his amnesia is valid.

section 2

  • The main boss, Kage Akuma, appears and gives a speach to his minions and begins the final plans for destroying the world.
    Decade is taught the history of their world and about Kamen Rider Shadow. He looks at his Ride Card with an empty visage of Shadow on it.
    Another small city center is attacked as people can only find refuge in these places now.
    Decade, Exis and Saber go to fight the Death Roaches and come face to face with Kage Akuma.
    They fight him and end up having to retreat for the first battle.
    The three Riders plan out their next move as does Kage Akuma.

section 3

  • Tsukasa ends up meeting Shadow's family and ends up battling Lucas's father. His dad is a demon king which makes the battle one sided.
    After the fight Tsukasa has a talk with Shadow's sister and learns of how gentle the dark Rider was.
    He then talks to his mother and she in turn teaches Tsukasa a few small shadow craft techniques to aid him on his journey to restore the balance of the worlds.
    From there he has a heart to heart with Cerica (Exis) and finds out just how couragous and powerful Shadow really was and also how loving he could be.
    Kage Akuma prepares as the final battle is at hand.
    As everyone is getting ready, Goro watches the images from his place while trying to monitor the other worlds. Little does he know that another figure is also watching the events unfold from the shadows of Shadow's world.

oh yeah forgot to mention that its now changed to Tsukasa does not remember anything 2 years ago.

okay, ive went to edit Ep 1 both parts.

Tokuwarrior, could you send me your chp 3 Ep2 what your written so far?Ive just really need to tweak some of the dialogue and stuff.

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Spectre - I'l send ya what I have sometime today.

Tales - No, Natsumi won't be revived until either world 3 or world 4. Since Ghoul is set as World 4 I was going to do a side chapter with the first meeting of G anf Magnus and Natsumi's revival just before we go to Ghoul's world. So she would be revived by the end of world 3 basicaly.

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Ok thanks I know how to start ANT world now.

So Tsukasa is alone until ANT world... well I think I just have to find that good moment for Natsumi to pop up.

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Well, with a lot of the new changes I was seeing that my old Shadow no Sekai plans aren't in good balance with what we're doing so I'm redoing the plans. Once I have the new plans done up I'll get back to finishing CH.3 and then CH.4.

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Okay here are some key events........uncofirmed, see if Tokuwarrior approves.

Chp 4-After Decade Leaves to go to Neos's World next, suddenly,a Worldshift Portal appears in a city(Tokuwarrior can decide which city or where it is) in Shadow's World.A tank sized Machine from the Tartarus Empire moves out of the portal and unloads many troops.

The Worldshift Portal shows signs of faltering a bit.

Several robots quickly appear from the portal carry strange construction materials there and begins to set up two Strange Pillars to maintain the worldshift portal so their forces can keep pouring into Shadow's world.....

This is the start of the Invasion of Shadow's world and the start of conquest attempts of the Nine Worlds!

Nothing much happens in Neos's World arc however.

EDIT:changed from building to tank to be appropriate.

Edited by spectre555
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Not yet. I have to fix someting I had written in to help it fit with the new Shadow no Sekai plans. The first batch of plans will be short but the plans for CH.4 (the finishing chapter for Shadow's world) will be much longer.

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Not really sure yet but i have 3 ideas in mind. It'll either be the high school Lucas attended, the shopping outlet or the park (the park and shopping outlet are the first 2 major battle locations in CH's 1&2 of the KR Shadow series).

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its your choice, thought i would advise against the high school.

Next on the key events

World /Neos's World-In the begining of Pt2 of Neos's World for ANT's Narutaki gets reports that Decade and its user Kadoya Tsukasa are not lost.

World 3/ANT's world-Tsukasa is surprised when he finds Natsumi and the Hikari Studio in ANT's world.Natsumi appears to be well again and has no memory of the Necrophite Havester killing her.

Enjiro tells Tsukasa that a strange man appeared infront of them and gave them a device to world travel to look for him.

During the cooperation with Termite(ANT's secondary rider,a strange man with a cap helps them a bit and asks Tsukasa whether he has eaten a sea cucumber.

Strange man with a cap:Yo.

Tsukasa:?

Strange man with a cap:What are you doing here?There isnt anything for you to do in this world.

Tsukasa:who.....?

Strange man with a cap:.......Have you........eaten a sea cucumber.....?

Tsukasa:huh?

Strange man with a cap:I knew it.Its just like they said.........

Strange man with a cap then walks away.

Tsukasa tries to go after him, but the Strange man with a cap turns a corner and seemingly dissapeared.

Towards the end of the the first part of ANT's world arc........

-As Tsukasa and Natsumi walk back to the Hikari Studio,they are being watched from afar.

Suddenly,Kamen Rider Astro(Mark 1) appears infront of them and attacks them!!

Edited by spectre555
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Ok guys. Even though CH.3 isn't done yet I do have some of the plans for CH.4 (Shadow no Sekai part 1) done. This is only the beginning of the world chapter so the plans aren't finished yet.

CH.4 plans - Shadow no Sekai Part.1

  • Tsukasa looks around his surroundings
  • Looking around, he is shocked at what he see's
  • He sees the dead, mutilated bodies of many people
  • He then looks behind him and notices the worldshift wall vanish from site
  • He then mounts the Machine Decader and begins riding around the city
  • While he travels around, he is watched from upton the roof tops of the city buildings
  • As Tsukasa stops by a park entrance and looks at a city map board he hears the scream of a young girl
  • Looking into the direction of the park entrance he sees the girl, no older than 13, running for her life from two Akushi
  • Tsukasa dsimounts the Machine Decader and prepares to go to her aid
  • Before he can make a move though he is surrounded by five Akushi that had been tailing him from the roof tops
  • They open a small escape space to allow the girl to run to him
  • She begs him to help her
  • He looks down at her and sees her shivering in fear
  • He then tells her to get behind him as the now seven Akushi coner them to a stone wall
  • Once their backs are against the wall the Akushi laugh as they prepare to attack their latest prey
  • Out of habit and fear, the young girl wishes out loud for help
  • Young Girl - "I really wish Shadow and my sister were here right now."
  • Tsukasa, upon hearing the name Shadow, begins to have a small headache
  • He closes his eyes and, for an instant, sees the image of a demonic looking Rider
  • While he wonders why he saw that image the Akushi get even closer
  • One laughs, stating to the young girl that Shadow is gone and will never return
  • Tsukasa, getting tired of scenery of evil Kaijin, steps forward
  • He then looks at the girl and smiles lightly at her
  • Tsukasa - "I don't know who this Shadow fellow is; but from what I see, I'm not really worried right now."
  • The leader of the Akushi group steps forward and looks at him angrily
  • Akushi Leader - "That's quite a big mouth you got there boy. I hope your ass can cash the check it just wrote."
  • Tsukasa just smirks and takes out the Decadriver from the inside of his coat
  • Placing the Decadriver on his waist, it fastens itself and forms two silver handels on its sides and the RideBooker the left belt side
  • The girl and the Akushi look at the strange belt and wonder what he is up to while Tsukasa tugs on the two silver handels
  • Meanwhile, Cerica and Drake look around the park in their Rider forms, Exis and Saber, trying to find Cerica's little sister
  • They hear the sound of commotion and head off toward the sounds' location
  • What they find is a group of seven Akushi surrounding Cerica's sister and a young man wearing an strange belt
  • Back at group, Tsukasa is looked upon with intrigue as he opens the RideBooker and takes out a card
  • Tsukasa - I can do more than just that. For making this girl cry, I shall end your existence!"
  • Tsukasa holds the card infront of him, allowing the Akushi to see the image of a Rider on its front
  • Akushi group leader - You little punk! Just who do you think you are?!"
  • Tsukasa - I'm just a passing-through Kamen Rider. Remember That."
  • Tsukasa the flips the card around, showing them its backside
  • Tsukasa - "Henshin!"
  • he slides the card down into the opened Decadriver
  • With the driver making a continuous mechanical sound, it announces the card
  • Decadriver - "KamenRide"
  • Tsukasa then swings his arms over the Decadriver, closing it
  • Decadriver - "Decade!"
  • The symbols of the 9 fanfic Riders appear arround him as grey after images of the Decade suit coverge upon his body
  • The suit materializes on him as a red rectangular disc shoots out of the center of the Decadriver, resting in front and above his head
  • the red rectangle then seperates into many pieces and slams into his helmet, creating the barcode pattern from his last transformation
  • As the rectangle fuses with his helmet the grey shaded areas of his suit turn magenta in color
  • The girl and the Akushi look on in both shock and surprise
  • Young Girl (thinking to herself) - "He's a Kamen Rider just like big sister!"

That's all I got for the moment. More to come later.

Edited by Toku Warrior
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[*]The symbols of the 9 fanfic and 9 Toei Riders' appear arround him as grey after images of the Decade suit converge upon his body

uh the Decadriver was not optimised for the Toei Riders so it wont have the their symbols.The Decadriver was optimised for our Nine Riders,so it would have our fanfic riders symbols instead.

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Key Events so far

Chp 4-After Decade Leaves to go to Neos's World next, suddenly,a Worldshift Portal appears in a city(Tokuwarrior can decide which city or where it is) in Shadow's World.A tank sized Machine from the Tartarus Empire moves out of the portal and unloads many troops.

The Worldshift Portal shows signs of faltering a bit.

Several robots quickly appear from the portal carry strange construction materials there and begins to set up two Strange Pillars to maintain the worldshift portal so their forces can keep pouring into Shadow's world.....

This is the start of the Invasion of Shadow's world and the start of conquest attempts of the Nine Worlds!

Neos's world-Nothing much happens on Tsukasa's side.

Neos's World pt 1Magnus who was watching,appears in Neos's World and attempts to stop Tsukasa's journey thinking he was trying something bad.

Goro suddenly appears infront of him when he saw Magnus following Tsukasa and made a worldshift portal to get there.

Goro:Who are you?(Goro could not see who Alex was since he was disguised well)

Alex:So the Tartarus Agent comes for me.

Goro:Iam no Tartarus Agent.

Goro:Now, my vintage is at its luxurious… …Henshin!

*Goro then henshins into Kamen Rider G!*

Goro:Iam a Kamen Rider who fights for justice.....and the liberation of worlds from the Tartarus Empire!

Neos's World Pt2

After talking with G,Magnus follows him to his hideout.In his Hideout,G explains that ever since that time where they were tricked by Narutaki to be ambushed by Decade and been missing ever since, the Tartarus Empire has been having little problems in invading their worlds.

This time, the diagram of the Nine Worlds show that the World Boundary to Shadow's World was broken down!

And in addition,

The World Boundary to Neos's world is in process of being forced open!

The World Boundary to Cosmos's world was in the process of being drilled through!

The World Boundary to ANT's World was already fragmented!

The World Boundary to Ghoul's World was almost broken though!

After seeing the state of the Worlds,Magnus explores the hideout a bit and finds Natsumi the Medical room.

Magnus:Who is this, Goro?

G:Im not exactly sure, but its one of Decade's reasons for his journey.

G:Ive been trying to keep her alive for him, but i dont have sufficient medical supplies.

G: A Wound where some large foreign object pierced though her back and stomach.......That's not easy to fix.

ANT's World- Decade is seemingly no match for Astro mark 1 due to his immense strength.Goro suddenly appears and henshins into G and defeats Astro.

Before Tsukasa could talk to him, Goro leaves.

Back in his hideout,Goro is puzzled why Astro Mark 1 was there and the one he defeated earlier vanished.

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