You got that right, Kenji.

UPDATE: Just completed Chapters 15 to 18, although I am a little wary about the last two, especially Chapter 17. I just learned it's really hard to write in "Norse speak."

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To be honest, the Deadpool chapter's my personal favorite.

Of course Doom and Makishima would 'work' together.

And backstab one another at the most convenient opportunity. Soon it'll be time to see which one is the cleverest of the two.

That was fun; I see I'm not the only one who noticed the uncanny resemblance between Old Bal and St. Nick.

Ok, CH.15 - I liked it as it reminded me of what the Guyver manga is like.

CH.16 - I loved it. I was holding my sides LMAO while Deadpool was mocking Barcus.

CH.17 - I agree that even i could not write like that. Nice way to bring Thor in.

CH.18 - Hah, I expected that from those two backstabbing SOB's. Nicely written.

I know you probably won't do this Jerry, but it'd be funny and insane if you gave Deadpool a Guyver unit.

Oh geez, that'd be like giving a kid his dad's gun

Not too sure about doing that, although it is a hilarious idea. Don't worry, the Merc with a Mouth will return soon...

UPDATE: Just completed Chapters 19 and 20. Only two this time, 'cause they're pretty big chapters (compared to the other ones I've written so far).

I'm starting to bring everyone together...

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Getting ready for battle royale!

Oooooooooo......me likey, me likey.

Glad to hear it, TW. You can probably imagine I had a lot of fun writing these two chapters.

Very, very exciting goings-on in the latest chapters; I definately approve. I can't wait to see what the FF think when they (inevitably) find out about Imakarum's past.

Why do I have the feeling that Deadpool is going to win?

I dunno, but somehow I think ol' Wade's gonna find a way to whittle some money out of the craziness :wink:

And thanks for the kind words, Kenji!

UPDATE: Chapters 21 through 24 are now done, and everyone's making their way to the playing field!

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And, it seems Sho's Guyver armor might have malfunctioned on the way to the Marvel Universe...

Looks like Sho's armor has to travel through dimensions(probably through the rift to another boost dimension) to appear.

That was satisfying. I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens when all those forces meet; Agito and Doom look to be shaping up into quite the pair of wildcards. Methinks Imakarum might be getting in a wee bit over his head here, as hard as that might be for him to believe. Things are definately going to get interesting once Alkanphel gets out of that rift.

As for the Guyver, I agree with LordSpleach's assesment of the situation.

Well if the rift causes a delay in the Guyvers' immediate transformation to about 1-12 seconds then imagine what'd do when calling the Chrysalis for the Gigantic Armor summoning.

All-n-all, a really great 4 new chapters. I also know the perfect christmas present for Wade....some little yellow boxes

Keep it up man. This is turning out to be a really good story.

Thanks guys. I'm really glad you're enjoying this.

And expect to see a smackdown between Archanfel and Thor. That's gonna cause some major damage. :wink:

Now that is going to be epic. I'm really looking forward to reading that.

Thanks guys. I'm really glad you're enjoying this.

And expect to see a smackdown between Archanfel and Thor. That's gonna cause some major damage. :wink:

ARCHANFEL AND THOR! AWESOME! Though if you threw in Odin, Archanfel is doomed.

Well, Odin is indisposed for the time being, LordSpleach. Although Thor's got the power of the Odinforce now, so he should be able to take Archanfel.

UPDATE: Got chapters 25 to 30 in the can! Just wanted to let everyone know this is still alive...

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My personal favorite bit...the dialogue between Sho and Spider-Man.

Nice, very nice. I like the dialogue between Spider-Man and Sho, too; those two have a lot in common, after all.

I like it. It seems that good ol' Alky is gona make his debut very soon.

Deadpool is easily the best character in your fanfic, Jerry. Also, Ryan Reynolds is a good pick for him.

That may be so, LordSpleach, but that doesn't mean ol' Wade is gonna be thrilled with it, for whatever reason.

And thanks for the support, everyone!