*Jess♥ Posted December 9, 2008 Posted December 9, 2008 hey guys, remember draobrev yugeth.. well it kinda grinded to a halt didn't it? a while back, we had decided to finish it as literature instead of roleplay and we had a plan set out for it. I managed to get the machine compiled and although it needs editing, It is pretty cohesive. I apologise if somebody helped me with it and i forgot. I attached it to this post. there is the matter of metal man though. it is still in it's raw format and still unfinished. there is a plan for how the story was going to be ended. I feel like i would like to do it.. but as some of you know, I am dyslexic and i find it tough to do this kind of writing. so what i am suggesting is that if there is anybody who would like to compile and edit metal man. I can provide the notes for the ending. machine.rtf Quote
*Jess♥ Posted December 9, 2008 Author Posted December 9, 2008 I decided to write a short intro for the machine. it seemed to start abruptly. a little gust of wind blew across a limestone floor. it had come into this room through a gap from it's home over the wide empty ocean. it played with the little pieces of dust it could find but was left largely unsatisfied. eventually it found something new to play with. some hair was left free to be flicked around. the owner was a minion and was sitting here in this minions pit. the wind didn't know what this minion was doing here and it was rather none of it's business so it did not think to ask. the minion was also rather disinclined to ask the wind any questions. in fact this minion did not even consider the wind worthy of any communication. the minion ws new to this place. it did not understand the nature of this world. and so the wind continued about it's business and teh minion sat there and waited for something to happen. the minion was also disinclined to talk to the other minion that was sat across teh way. a rather peculiar fellow by any standards. but then the other minion would likely think the exact same thing. his name was espylacopa. his costume was black and his visor was green. he had seen his fair share of war and was sure to see more. he didn't know this but the place he was in would provide for him very well. his gaze wandered over to hte other minion. deraked. this odd fellow was impatiently kicking things about. there wasn't much to kick about but he was so impatient, he kicked anyway. a stray rock, piece of dust, an imaginary creature, his own shadow, anything. ther were tables and benches about, but deraked viewed these as coformist. he would not conform to this. tables and benches were for people who were patient and would not mind waiting. since he had gotten here he had grown more and more fed up of waiting. he wanted som action! Quote
RazorLaser Posted December 9, 2008 Posted December 9, 2008 Question... what happened to the original draobrev yugeth crew? Apocalypse... etc... What happened to them? I don't see them on this forum Quote
*Jess♥ Posted December 9, 2008 Author Posted December 9, 2008 they just disappeared. mav is doing real life. jade is gone. apocalypse, I think went to spend more time on gameskank. alpha omega.. no idea romulus, mavs mate, but dunno what happened to him. no idea what happened to blazin guyver. I think he got assassinated by a ninja camel or something.... :wink: Quote
RazorLaser Posted December 10, 2008 Posted December 10, 2008 (edited) NizalbRevyug lives!!! PS. Good idea... reading that brings back memories... of my bad writing haha Edited December 10, 2008 by Mr. McTaco Quote
*Kenji Murakami Posted December 10, 2008 Posted December 10, 2008 I had always wondered what happened to Jade. She just up and dissapeared one day. Quote
Toku Warrior Posted December 10, 2008 Posted December 10, 2008 I miss not being able to talk with her. Sad she never came here. Quote
*Kenji Murakami Posted December 10, 2008 Posted December 10, 2008 Yeah; I miss talking to her, too. I wish I knew what she was doing now. Quote
*Jess♥ Posted February 16, 2011 Author Posted February 16, 2011 I realised that i never posted the script i had of metal man and now the site is down and i can't seem to find it on my computer. there is somebody who may have a backup of it though. Quote
*Jess♥ Posted February 17, 2011 Author Posted February 17, 2011 hey guys, so i was given this file. it's an edited version of the machine along with character introductions. it's fairly nicely edited so please enjoy reading it. I will tell you the source later if possible. The_machine.rtf Quote
*Jess♥ Posted February 18, 2011 Author Posted February 18, 2011 Cool. Well I have ascertained that I can say that this was edited by Jade. so that is the source. Quote
Tora Tan Posted August 10, 2020 Posted August 10, 2020 Did anyone find the rest of this? I managed to find some bits of this story on the net, but there is a lot missing and I'd really like to read it. Quote
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