Toku Warrior Posted November 18, 2008 Posted November 18, 2008 (edited) Finally, after all the planning stages, drawing, and opinion considering I have finally finished chapter one. Here it is. I plan on writing chapter 2 sometime this weekend. Please R & R. Chapter_1___Unleash_the_Darkness.htm Chapter_2___Of_Angels_and_Demons.htm Edited November 25, 2008 by Toku Warrior Quote
Bobby Posted November 18, 2008 Posted November 18, 2008 Could you PDF it so I can read it in the event I lose my connection??? Quote
Toku Warrior Posted November 18, 2008 Author Posted November 18, 2008 I'll do ya one even better. I'll PM ya the original word documant. Quote
Bobby Posted November 18, 2008 Posted November 18, 2008 E-mail it to me. I can check it out after I get some sleep. Providing my cat can get off my bed. Quote
Toku Warrior Posted November 18, 2008 Author Posted November 18, 2008 Well I PMed it to ya as I can't e-mail it seeing as I don't have your e-mail address. Quote
Bobby Posted November 18, 2008 Posted November 18, 2008 StarBeast14(at)hotmail.com or BThompson1983(at)hotmail.com Quote
Larz Zahn Posted November 18, 2008 Posted November 18, 2008 i'll check it at ffnet tonight an leave ya a review. im getting ready to go to town in a few an i dont wanna be disturbed when i read your story. Quote
Toku Warrior Posted November 19, 2008 Author Posted November 19, 2008 That's cool. Bobby, I'll e-mail it to ya shortly. I just now got online for the first tie today. Quote
Bobby Posted November 19, 2008 Posted November 19, 2008 No problem. One time last year, I went a WHOLE day without touching my laptop. I worked a six hours & fifteen minutes long shift at work, which wasn't enough to get a lunch break and went to Subway to pick up some lunch to eat at home. I changed into my normal/street clothes when I got home and ate my sandwich before going to my sister's basketball scrimmage and then to a Mall , which I've now frequented in the last year, for THREE HOURS. Quote
Toku Warrior Posted November 19, 2008 Author Posted November 19, 2008 That's nothing. I went four months without internet and 3 weeks without a computer. Anyway, my work schedule for the week of 11-23/11-29 is gonna be busy. I gotta go to a meeting this Sunday for two hours to discuss the midnight sale we're having on Friday next week. I gotta work Tuesday and Wednesday, I'm off Thursday cuz it's thanksgiving. Then on Friday I work from midnight to 6AM, come home and sleep, then I have to go back to work from 5PM to 10PM later that night, then I'm off Saturday. I'm gonna be tried as hell after my first shift on Friday. It's because of this schedule that I'm holding off on chapter 2 for the KR Shadow fan-fic until the following Sunday. So for now I'm currently in the progress of writing CH.4 for my Quantum Guyver fan-fic. I've alreay had things planned out for the next 3-4 chapter for the QG fan-fic but I'm gonna wait for a week and a half before I write CH.2 to KR Shadow as I'm trying to figure a funny and yet embarrassing situation that I could put both Lucas and Cerica in. For now, all I can hint at is it will probably involve one of 3 things. The school equipment shed, the closet at a friends party, or a class field trip on a plane and probably involving the plane bathroom. I just want to put those two in a very embarrassing situation. Quote
Bobby Posted November 19, 2008 Posted November 19, 2008 I forgot that after I ate, I went to a store called Anime Pavilion to get some more Yu-Gi-Oh cards. Not sure what my schedule is like after Tuesday. I get my schedules weekly. Back to topic. Quote
Toku Warrior Posted November 21, 2008 Author Posted November 21, 2008 Well, I'm currently writing Ch.2 and am already on the 4th page after an hour of writing. I'm opening the chapter with a bit of humor. The serious action won't happen until later in the chapter. I want to build it up. There most likely won't be any Rider action in this chapter but there will be half-demon action. Quote
Toku Warrior Posted November 25, 2008 Author Posted November 25, 2008 Finally, I finished writing CH.2 about 5 minutes ago. This chapter is twice as long as CH.1. Hell, CH.1 was only 10 pages but when I finished CH.2, it alone was 28 pages long. I never knew I could write that much. It's now up on the site and on FF.net. Get it while it's hot. ~Note: All released chapters will be located in the very first post. Quote
Tales Posted December 9, 2008 Posted December 9, 2008 Sweet dude! This fic rocks! I can see the images of your rider in my head! Nice! Quote
Toku Warrior Posted December 9, 2008 Author Posted December 9, 2008 Thanks You Kero. Most of the Rider form inspiration comes from the Kiva series but other than that it's totally different. Yes, like Wataru, Lucas is a half-demon and he belongs to a royal demon family but he's apart of a demon race that has been thought to have been extinct for centuries. Unlike Kiva, who only fights fangires, Shadow fights all types of monsters, demons, and things that go bump in the night. He even has to face not one, but two different demon hunter organizations and 2 other Riders. Now, unlike Kiva who can control his new forms easily and summon them when he wants to, Shadow has to earns his new forms and he can't easily control them for the first few transformations. I also made it to where the power of his demon blood has to supressed or else it will take over him. That's where the rosary comes into play (the rosary idea comes from the anime/manga series "Rosario + Vampire"). I've already mentioned it in the chapter 2 preview, but for those who haven't read that far I'll give a hint for chapter 3. Lucas will have to face the WHOLE Divine Order all on his own (with the exception of Cerica and her family as they will be somewhere else during the battle. This battle is brought about when the Divine Order does something to lure KR Shadow out. That's it. That's all I say for that and trust me, I'm gonna make it even better than chapter 2. Maybe not as long but just as good if not better. Quote
Tales Posted December 9, 2008 Posted December 9, 2008 Yeah your fic rocks man! In comparision, Kiva dulls when compared with yours. Quote
*Jess♥ Posted December 9, 2008 Posted December 9, 2008 bobby, I edited your post to protect your email address. there are bots that browse the web in search of email addresses to spam. Quote
Toku Warrior Posted March 9, 2009 Author Posted March 9, 2009 Well Guys and Gals, I have now finished my Inuyasha + Vampire story which means that Kamen Rider Shadow is back in gear. There were 3 main reason as to why I stopped writting this story for such a long while. those are: 1) Work Schedule 2) Daily life 3) Writers block due to poor planning Well, I have done some additional planning on the series, mostly chapter length and what the main theme for each hcapter will be about and it's down to this. I have it set to where Shadow will be 36 chapters long. 35 for the story itself and the 36th chapter will be an epilogue chapter. Now for those who remember the soul stone bursts, they're gonna happen soon but i won't say which chapter and which burst. Also, the 4th Rider for this series will be seen near the end as the main villian. His name is still in the planning stages as well as his design but I have a ways to go before I get there. Once I'm around chapter 5-6 of Shadow and have the DQG story finished, I shall be picking Ghoul back up as well as starting Magi and Neos and one of three short stories. I apologize to those who love this story but I thank you for your patience. I will start writing CH.3 later this week once I finish the final details for it. Quote
Larz Zahn Posted March 10, 2009 Posted March 10, 2009 heh, no worries dude, good things come to those who wait, so all this means is, your third chapter is gonna be killer! Quote
Recommended Posts
Join the conversation
You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.