Next story to re-write

[Sully]

At the moment I'm debating with myself to what story will be re-wrote next. The one I'm most looking forward to personally is All Things Change. The title says it all it's due to be changed a decent bit but will still overall be the same story. After fleshing out Zeugma and Kron's characters a decent bit in Time War it'll be interesting now to give them their more modren storyline. All Things Change as it is fails to do that, mainly because it was trying to do too much bringing in what where new characters with big back story... simply put it didn't work. Also the Mercs, different people have asked that they are not killed off basically as they are introduced. I aggree with that, so the only logical way for it to work, is they simply leave ACTF, and don't go up to the most powerful enemy's they have and piss them off right away. Makes no sense at all that they would go against ACTF and Chronos. So they will have a different story (not saying what it is, only that it will be different and will continue on after 7 Days). Warrior Guyver 5 will be happening differently to what happened in the present story. Simply put the character will know he's not Jason and is a lot more of a bastard about it (read 7 Days p 7 and what happened to Faye).

Soo you can see I am looking forward to All Things change being made into something better that matches up more to the style of Mettings, Strange Worlds and 7 Days (stories with decent planning).

But heres the thing, I can't really just jump from Time War to All Things. So the question is what story will I rewrite next. Overall I'm looking at Union. It's not that I'm not looking forward to it. The main things will be the start of the story will be Guyver US and ACTF V Washington based zoanoids, Cori being kidnapped, Agito's icey relationship with Sho, a short part on what happened to Zeus Thunterbolt before Union, Guyver US being a capable fighter before he meets G1 and Alkanphel's plan working won't be just a foot note at the end of the story. So overall there is some nice things to write about here, things that help with the build up to Time War and so on.

Then there is the option of going right into Revenge... The story is cool, there is nothing I want to remove only want to add more detail to it and change the way it is wrote from a script. I'll give more weight to to the meeting of Alkanphel and Jason. But overall out of all the old stories this requires the least actual change and nothing being removed.

Then there is Rescue, this basically will be a new story... simply put not what I'm aiming to do until Union, Time War, Revenge and the WG2 story are complete first.

So question is what one is next?

[Juggernought]

Well i would suggest: Revenge - since there is not much you said need doing and its the easiest to do. So will take only a little time. Then move onto Union as the next step, it covers a lot what happened in the "beginning" basically and will be the story that sets the tone for everything else. After those are done, moving onto something that you really want to do....All things change - would probably come out even better since now that other stories have been redone and probably most details have been addressed so that when this new story comes out there won't be much if any confusion.

Obviously Rescue could be the last one since it is depending on so many other stories to be done first. Once those are complete Rescue is free to be tackled in its entirety.

That's my 2 cents, however you're the creator....

Second suggestion: might as well just drink a beer and say eenie meenie miney mo!

[McAvoy]

Revenge seems natural. It's written in script format but seems to flow without a major rewrite. You could rewrite WG2 story after that too. I was always curious on why the Gen left Earth in that universe intact meaning left it alone. Especially now that we know that Alkanphel is known to them.

[Sully]

Revenge seems natural. It's written in script format but seems to flow without a major rewrite. You could rewrite WG2 story after that too. I was always curious on why the Gen left Earth in that universe intact meaning left it alone. Especially now that we know that Alkanphel is known to them.

I'd aggree there, all Revenge needs is a little added detail on a few parts. the flow of the story itself though is grand. but in saying that, REvenge really needs to be done around the same time as the WG 2 story, they are heavily linked. Thinking about it WG2 story needs to be done before Revenge so the character works better and when duped by Agito it makes sense.

Edit:

Actually I think this has anwered my own question of what to do next. For the story to make sense, I've to do Union next so the relationships are there properly for G1, G US, WG and G3. Basically that shapes evertyhing from there out and explains events like 7 Days 7 where Agito is seen joining forces with ACTF.

[OnyxPhoenix]

Union does look to be the next logical step. Though, I'm personally waiting for all the data files and their updates. Should be sweet.

Revenge would follow, along with WG2 as well. Also can't wait to see who in the end got the last Black Unit. (I may have missed who snuck away with it, but I can deal.)

[McAvoy]

Revenge seems natural. It's written in script format but seems to flow without a major rewrite. You could rewrite WG2 story after that too. I was always curious on why the Gen left Earth in that universe intact meaning left it alone. Especially now that we know that Alkanphel is known to them.

I'd aggree there, all Revenge needs is a little added detail on a few parts. the flow of the story itself though is grand. but in saying that, REvenge really needs to be done around the same time as the WG 2 story, they are heavily linked. Thinking about it WG2 story needs to be done before Revenge so the character works better and when duped by Agito it makes sense.

Edit:

Actually I think this has anwered my own question of what to do next. For the story to make sense, I've to do Union next so the relationships are there properly for G1, G US, WG and G3. Basically that shapes evertyhing from there out and explains events like 7 Days 7 where Agito is seen joining forces with ACTF.

That does sound like a plan. Especially since what we know of Agito will ultimately do at least up to Book 28. So naturally Sho wouldn't trust Agito at all. So alot of the stories that feature Sho following Agito wherever he goes would have to be fixed. For example the time he became WG3 and Shizu became Female Gigantic.

[Sully]

That does sound like a plan. Especially since what we know of Agito will ultimately do at least up to Book 28. So naturally Sho wouldn't trust Agito at all. So alot of the stories that feature Sho following Agito wherever he goes would have to be fixed. For example the time he became WG3 and Shizu became Female Gigantic.

There is a few things that needs to be handled better. Shizu is one, I'm thinking in Union of answering that one right away with some good old fasioned Agito bastardness. This is one of those situations where we don't have to cover for what the book said and done after we're wrote the fan-fiction. Now I can account for it much eariler on. So expect to see the plot around Shizu start much eariler on. Basically think about what would have happened if instead of Guyver 3 coming to Sho with his own Gigantic and looking for a fight with Shizu and his Libertus, Agito arrives defeated... Sho and co know something about Shizu the Zoalord, but instead he arrives with Shizu the cloned human.

I've also being putting a lot of thought into All Things Change. Simply put this story will grow a lot more. All Things Change does do alot for the characters that where viewed as main ones at the time. But others (Mercs for example) just don't have any story. Guyver Zerebubuse for example just gets destroyed by Dreadnought. Does nothing else really. XT9 is another good example, Zygote Guyver another (though she does get a much lager part in later stories). So overall there is a lot of changes planned for this story. Expect a very different timed story when I get around to this as events will happen at different times to triger plots.

[McAvoy]

There is a few things that needs to be handled better. Shizu is one, I'm thinking in Union of answering that one right away with some good old fasioned Agito bastardness. This is one of those situations where we don't have to cover for what the book said and done after we're wrote the fan-fiction. Now I can account for it much eariler on. So expect to see the plot around Shizu start much eariler on. Basically think about what would have happened if instead of Guyver 3 coming to Sho with his own Gigantic and looking for a fight with Shizu and his Libertus, Agito arrives defeated... Sho and co know something about Shizu the Zoalord, but instead he arrives with Shizu the cloned human.

This sounds like a good start for the start of the Warrior Guyver story I think.