sonarelite Posted August 3, 2010 Posted August 3, 2010 Yes Do It , I'm going on holiday tomorrow morning it make a really really realy good good good RRRRREEEEEEEEAAAAADDDDDDD........
Sully Posted August 4, 2010 Author Posted August 4, 2010 Well on the news front, while writing part 2 and removing the old start to part 3 and moving it into Part 2.... Lets start again. What used to be the start of Time War has being removed up until the point about Solom's body being discovered in frozen water. that old intro will be absorbed into Part 2 of time war. Which will end where the old intro ended. Guyver zoalord wiping out the Projects. Part 3 (what used to be Part 1) will be edited this weekend and have the old into removed. Part 1 will be posted with it. Part 2 is about 600 words no into the story and I've a good idea of what I want to show in that story. There is also another part of the story I'll be putting into Part 1 involving Zuegma that I feel will go better in there. This should be done before the weekend. Part 3 after the rewrite will start off in the present day of the fan-fiction. Obviously anything you read in part 1 and 2 will be reflected in the rewrite when it hits part 3 and 4.
Sully Posted August 5, 2010 Author Posted August 5, 2010 Todays update, I've gone back and added more yet again to Part 1, so it'll be a little more than 10k words but not by a huge amount. there was some parts I was going to add to part 2, but felt they would be better fitting in Part 1 to move the story along in part 2. I've also added a new location to it that will have baring on part 2. Needless to say, when the Guyver Zoalord event does happen, it will have a lot more impact and feeling than it did in the orginal Time War where the only thing that died was a few random zoalords before Solom got trapped (in the second edition which is posted on the forum, yes there was more death of Gen / Creators but again they where jsut random names to the readers before they died as they where introduced e.g. Gorgon the creator of the Eliminator project). :
guyverfanatic Posted August 5, 2010 Posted August 5, 2010 Todays update, I've gone back and added more yet again to Part 1, so it'll be a little more than 10k words but not by a huge amount. there was some parts I was going to add to part 2, but felt they would be better fitting in Part 1 to move the story along in part 2. I've also added a new location to it that will have baring on part 2. Needless to say, when the Guyver Zoalord event does happen, it will have a lot more impact and feeling than it did in the orginal Time War where the only thing that died was a few random zoalords before Solom got trapped (in the second edition which is posted on the forum, yes there was more death of Gen / Creators but again they where jsut random names to the readers before they died as they where introduced e.g. Gorgon the creator of the Eliminator project). : Sounds good to me!
McAvoy Posted August 7, 2010 Posted August 7, 2010 Hmmm. interesting. I always thought the Matrix just created the Eliminator out of Warrior Guyver technology and the need to counter the technology itself. never would have thought there was a prior Project for it.
guyverfanatic Posted August 9, 2010 Posted August 9, 2010 Fantastic as always Brian! I look forward to Time War Part 2 whenever you finish it.
Juggernought Posted August 9, 2010 Posted August 9, 2010 Since the Gen are no longer on earth, i wonder if they took some of the influences and culture they enjoyed while they were there, to their own worlds and if they still walk around there unarmored (out of the prying eyes of their warriors of course) or if they keep armored 90% of the time?
guyverfanatic Posted August 9, 2010 Posted August 9, 2010 Since the Gen are no longer on earth, i wonder if they took some of the influences and culture they enjoyed while they were there, to their own worlds and if they still walk around there unarmored (out of the prying eyes of their warriors of course) or if they keep armored 90% of the time? Good question. I would think that they stay armored 100% of the time since they have an HSL they never need to go unarmored...
Sully Posted August 9, 2010 Author Posted August 9, 2010 I'm glad you guys like it. I can tell you when this will be answered but not the answer itself. When I rewrite the Creator parts of the Assassin Story (namely the part where Isis goes to Enforcer Primes home world) that will answer the question you have Juggernought. As for Time War part 2, this should be done rooughly in 2 months at a guess, roughly the same amount of time it took to complete the new part 1. Though it might be longer depending on what I want added to that part.
guyverfanatic Posted August 9, 2010 Posted August 9, 2010 I'm glad you guys like it.I can tell you when this will be answered but not the answer itself. When I rewrite the Creator parts of the Assassin Story (namely the part where Isis goes to Enforcer Primes home world) that will answer the question you have Juggernought. As for Time War part 2, this should be done rooughly in 2 months at a guess, roughly the same amount of time it took to complete the new part 1. Though it might be longer depending on what I want added to that part. Cool. I look forward to the "new" Assassin story.
Sully Posted August 9, 2010 Author Posted August 9, 2010 Cool. I look forward to the "new" Assassin story. Just a little bit of warning. Not all stories will be has heavily reworked as Time War. Time War badly needed it compared to what is in it, and what was based from it. Assassin will mostly just get light editing so it matches up with Time War. This would also be the same for Warrior Guyver 2's character story. When you guys read that, you'll see that not all stories will be reworked to a scale that Time War is being. Some like Faye's character story won't be changed at all.
Sully Posted August 11, 2010 Author Posted August 11, 2010 Update time on how Time War part 2 is going. The story is getting to the point where it is beinging to write itself. The first seeds in the events that lead up to the Guyver Zoalord have being planted. Strangely it's an event you've all read about before though it will be expanded on in Time War P2. I won't give you more details than that so you've some surprieses to read but basically the event of the Guyver Zoalord should be more epic when it happens, and a lot more personal and bitter. Word count wise I'm in about 2,500 words with a total of 4K words if you include the old intro. Though the old intro will be so heavily edited most likely when part 2 catches up with it and with what has changed in the new parts if it will suvive has is, is very unlikely and large parts of it will be edited out.
McAvoy Posted August 13, 2010 Posted August 13, 2010 Some things I have caught up on: 1. Seraph is as powerful as Kron. She is also the sister to Zeugma. Whether this is blood or some sort clan sisterhood. I am leaning towards the former. Though i wonder how much of her humanity is left after becoming a Enforcer Kavzar. Also wonder why she is so special. 2. Guyver Supreme wasn't created like Guyver 0 was (replicated I mean) but is in fact a Creator or used to be one. How he got his name too is different too. Originally Guyver Supreme was given that name because it was the final test for test units to pass. The Supreme test I guess. Well now he was given this name for some unknown reason after a single battle. Just that he is first stable unit. 3. Gorgon seems to be more brash than the others. Perhaps he is the one had Reeve merge with a Guyver unit. Also I have new theory on the Guyver Zoalord. It has been said that the Guyver Zoalord isn't as powerful as he should be. Well I think whoever gave that Guyver unit to Reeve somehow dampened the Limitation device so that he would recieve most of the bio boost potential if not all of it. 4. Krullnar isn't as old as originally believed. I think most of us thought he was born before the Warrior Project. Now he is the first human/Creator baby. I wonder how he will end up creating the Kavzar species. I hope to see this in Part 2. 5. It stands to reason that it is the Guyver zoalord who blows up Atlantis. Which is why we can't find it anywhere today. 6. Where is Solom's wife/Krullnar's mother in the present day? was she killed by the Guyver zoalord?
Sully Posted August 13, 2010 Author Posted August 13, 2010 Some things I have caught up on:1. Seraph is as powerful as Kron. She is also the sister to Zeugma. Whether this is blood or some sort clan sisterhood. I am leaning towards the former. Though i wonder how much of her humanity is left after becoming a Enforcer Kavzar. Also wonder why she is so special. I can't say yet if Time War will answer this in more detail and later stories. Seraph has being introduced in a strange way, you've seen her first in 7 Days long before you should have seen the Seraph's beinging, but the question really is it the same person? What happened in Time War and why is there a human Enforcer at all? If it is a human Enforcer? 2. Guyver Supreme wasn't created like Guyver 0 was (replicated I mean) but is in fact a Creator or used to be one. How he got his name too is different too. Originally Guyver Supreme was given that name because it was the final test for test units to pass. The Supreme test I guess. Well now he was given this name for some unknown reason after a single battle. Just that he is first stable unit. Both where at one point normal Gen. It's not much to give away but Supreme is the Supreme Test in part 2. What you saw in part 1 even towards the end of it was still the very beinging of the Gen project on Earth. There is a lot of time that will be covered in Part 2. Remember by the time Time War part 1 ended you hadn't even seen the first Prototype WG Unit yet, nor even the first Battle Guyver. Nor had the Nova projects or WG projects clashed yet (all this being hinted at in other stories). So there is a lot yet to be mentioned. Part 1 was marely the setup to a lot of things. 3. Gorgon seems to be more brash than the others. Perhaps he is the one had Reeve merge with a Guyver unit. Also I have new theory on the Guyver Zoalord. It has been said that the Guyver Zoalord isn't as powerful as he should be. Well I think whoever gave that Guyver unit to Reeve somehow dampened the Limitation device so that he would recieve most of the bio boost potential if not all of it. . No Comment 4. Krullnar isn't as old as originally believed. I think most of us thought he was born before the Warrior Project. Now he is the first human/Creator baby. I wonder how he will end up creating the Kavzar species. I hope to see this in Part 2. I changed that in part 1, as I wrote the story it made a lot more sense for the Gen to need humanity and need it for a reason. Krullnar appearing before they appeared on Earth made no sense, more so as he's not Uranus, who could be argued could have made humanity on another world with ease. The Gen only had one means of getting their Project going. The ship they "borrowed" that had details on where Earth was once located and the Unit that was Guyver 0. Remember they needed to find Alkanphel before they could create their own master Zoalord Zeugma, and she was made last. Krullnar had to fit into all the above, it made a lot more sense for him to be actually born on Earth. That too wouldn't have happened without his parents feeling they where in a safe place to do so. Krullanr as said above time line wise was born around the time of the Guyver Supreme's first battle. There is a lot more story to come which will explain why he is where he is in the modren fictions storyline. 5. It stands to reason that it is the Guyver zoalord who blows up Atlantis. Which is why we can't find it anywhere today. No Comment 6. Where is Solom's wife/Krullnar's mother in the present day? was she killed by the Guyver zoalord? No Comment That should give ye something to look forward to in part 2 :
Sully Posted August 19, 2010 Author Posted August 19, 2010 I'm not 6k words into this part in total now. I've got Krullnar established now as his own character with his own views and basically all the setup of what I've needed to do is done. I'm now getting to the good stuff. The Nova Project and the Warrior Projects will be as talked of before in full rival mode. Guyver Supreme continues to be a torn in the side of anyone making a test Unit (more so for a certain young Gen). all of this will then lead towards Reeve becoming the Guyver Zoalord. So this is the stuff I'm looking forward getting done. the story won't go into detail about every Unit you can think of, but will answer the question of what happened to all 5 Prototype Units (the 5th being WG himself) and why they where found where they were found in the present day story line.
guyverfanatic Posted August 20, 2010 Posted August 20, 2010 I'm not 6k words into this part in total now. I've got Krullnar established now as his own character with his own views and basically all the setup of what I've needed to do is done. I'm now getting to the good stuff. The Nova Project and the Warrior Projects will be as talked of before in full rival mode. Guyver Supreme continues to be a torn in the side of anyone making a test Unit (more so for a certain young Gen). all of this will then lead towards Reeve becoming the Guyver Zoalord. So this is the stuff I'm looking forward getting done. the story won't go into detail about every Unit you can think of, but will answer the question of what happened to all 5 Prototype Units (the 5th being WG himself) and why they where found where they were found in the present day story line. Will there be more detail on the Eliminator Project?
Sully Posted August 20, 2010 Author Posted August 20, 2010 Will there be more detail on the Eliminator Project? There will be some yes.
Sully Posted August 24, 2010 Author Posted August 24, 2010 Update time yet again. The story is moving along, slowly but surely. I'm kinda just beyond the halfway point. the fiction from this point will mainly focus on Pariah, Zero, Kron and Reeve. At this moment though, I might change the end of Part 1 as part 2 is looking to be a lot longer than part one. So when I actually finish the rewrites and have all 4 parts done I'll try and make all 4 parts a little more even.
Juggernought Posted August 27, 2010 Posted August 27, 2010 2 Questions...are there more Gen that became more human than Gen like Pariah? If so, and if they lived to produce offspring, would they retain at least some attributes of their progenitors or would they more or less be like other humans?
Sully Posted August 27, 2010 Author Posted August 27, 2010 2 Questions...are there more Gen that became more human than Gen like Pariah? If so, and if they lived to produce offspring, would they retain at least some attributes of their progenitors or would they more or less be like other humans? That will be answered when the rewrote Time War is complete. Yes there is a new twist to the story, what that is... no comment
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