Time War - Unpublished rewrite

[Sully]

Prelude:

Earth, two million five hundred thousand and ten years ago.

Deep inside an alien warship located on a small island in the middle of what would become known as the Pacific Ocean was a Creator scientist hard at work. Using his vast telekinetic powers and the natural control his unit gave him over the warship, a ship that he himself had grown for this purpose, he had almost finished the fifth and hopeful final prototype of the Warrior Unit project. This new unit had taken over a century to develop from the previous failed versions of the Warrior units and other projects. In total it and the other prototypes from the Stealth, Aqua and Stellar Warrior Projects would allow him and his team to dominate the new class of Creator armour. The result of literally two hundred centres of work and lesions learned from past failures lay in front of him. It was the first of these new units, a fully functional Warrior Unit.

As Solom looked at the new completed Unit. The history of how it came about went through his mind. It was over one hundred thousand years ago when the Guyver0 was reborn and showed the Creator Council that it was possible to control a Guyver. This revelation rekindled a desire inside the Creator Council to recover the research lost to them when the Guyver0 slaughtered an entire zoanoid army and destroyed a Research Ship. That day was a stain on the Creators when they discovered that one of their creations became Guyver and tried to destroy them. A stain that with this new project and that of his son Krullnar would be washed away.

With the support of other best Creator minds in the empire that wished to design Warrior units of their own they reached an agreement with the 13 Council of Elders to start the Warrior Project along with other rival projects. The goal was simple design Unit that could be controlled, replicated and that would allow the Creators to update their existing army so that they could conquer their enemies.

This new unit of his was not the final step in that goal. But merged with his son’s Kavzar Technology would produce a being that could conquer all opposition with the power greater than that of the Guyver and yet remain controlled.

As he was about to order one of his zoalords to get his unit remover so he could shed his old unit and merge with his new Warrior Armour he saw a sudden flash of a Creator been killed followed by a sickening sense of pain has his control medal lighted up. One of his brother Creators had been killed!

Not since the time of the Guyver0 had something as bad has this happened. Throughout the empire every Creator felt the death of their brother and it instantly sent a shockwave of fear throughout all their forces. Every Zoalord and zoanoid on Earth suddenly found themselves with a barrage of orders from various Creators looking for protection. Seconds later the Creator Grogan of the Eliminator Project sent an image of a Guyver to the rest his brethren. Solom and the others quickly realised what it was, a Guyver Zoalord. How in the name of the Thirteen did he get a Unit?

A second later the Creator Grogan was killed. Zoanoids and other life forms in the area found themselves been used by their Creators to watch the destruction brought by the Guyver Zoalord.

Solom almost instinctively knew he was in danger. Grogan was one of his rivals for the future of the Creator battle armour project. If the Guyver Zoalord was viewed them as rivals then he and the other Creators who where part of the Warrior Projects would be top of his hit list for obvious reasons. Solom quickly gathered his senses with a simple command to his ship the dormant Warrior Unit was teleported to the War Ships storage chamber.

Deep in the lands of what would later become China the Creators of the Nova Project too realised that this would be the end of their lives and quite possibly there life’s work. They dreaded this and realised that their life’s work might be activated someday by someone not part of their team and quickly program a message into the test units in the hope that someday their life’s work will not be lost to such an engine of destruction. They quickly ready their escape root and hide there two great test ships. But before the Creators of the Nova Project can escape their craft explodes in Earths outer atmosphere.

Solom held his head in his hands. All hope was lost. There was nothing that could stand against such a being. It was destroying anything that had a chance against it. His great rival Hpa’Tus Vulcan had just been killed and soon the unit he made to rival that great secret prototype of Vulcan’s would be destroyed along with himself.

Thousands of Miles away at Solom’s old Bio-Research Ship were the Battle Unit and Forth Warrior Unit prototype Units where stored the earth rumbled and shook has the great ship sunk itself into the ground. Solom hoped the ship he now resided would be the main target of the Guyver Zoalord and that his son Krullnar who was currently on Core World Prime would someday return and claim his prototypes and finish his life’s work. It was then with his life’s work protected so far away that an enormously powerful beam of energy cut through his so called Warcraft like its shields did not even exist. Has liquid surged out the deeply wounded War Relic Solom could see the out side light shining off his attacker. It was the Guyver Zoalord!

“I command you Zoalord. Deactivate the armour!” demanded Solom.

“Ha, ha, ha. No foolish Creator. Do you forget so easily? I am a Guyver, I can’t be controlled” declared Guyver Zoalord.

The Guyver Zoalord raised his hand and shot at the warship with his hand beam. The power of his armour magnified this blast beyond levels Solom could even hope for the Warrior Unit and the warship shields ounce again failed delivering another serious would to the War Ship. Standing on now solid ground the blast rocked the whole ship and sent Solom falling onto his backside. Outside, the Guyver Zoalord sensed another easy victory and was about to fire again when he was hit by multiple energy beam blasts. It was a research ship! Show dare the puny Creators send such a week craft against their new God!

Solom's knew this was his last chance for escape. He ordered every last one of his Zoalords to leave the War Ship and to attack the Guyver Zoalord. Immediately a platoon of Zoalords exited the warship and fired at the Guyver Zoalord drawing his attention from the Research Ship. One by one the Guyver Zoalord killed them off like they where nothing. Solom knew the War Ship was too badly wounded to escape and with some flashes of his control medal the only visible sign of his order. He commanded the warship to bury itself deep underground and not to let the Guyver Zoalord have command access to it. Solom then teleported into the research ship and was about to order it to get as far away from Earth as possible, when it was attacked by the Guyver Zoalord. The first shot blasted through their shields but missed anything vital and the craft continued on its way out of Earths atmosphere, but a second well-placed shot from the Guyver Zoalord saw to that not happening. The research ship started to dip from its upward course and scorched through Earths atmosphere towards the icy cold ocean at The Northern Pole of the planet.

With the death call of Solom, the Creators of the Stealth, Hydra and Stellar Warrior Unit variant projects which he commanded knew they too where under serious threat. Before any further damage could be done to the Solom Warrior Project the Creators ordered the Research ships to hide using the characteristics of the units within. Then they too attempted to escape. With almost perfect sense of where these brings where located The Guyver Zoalord struck and killed the Creators. Only one, the Creator Hpa'Edem managed to escape merging his stealth technology with the Escape Pod.

Inside the Giant Clan Ship the Council of 13 Creators, Draven one of its leaders looked in dismay at the mental images of destruction that spread has the Guyver Zoalord decimated the Warrior Project, the Eliminator Project and the Nova Projects. Nothing stood could stand in its way he thought. How though could a Zoalord get a Guyver unit? The safe guards should have ensured that it never happened!

Then he and the council received a message they did not expect. It was the Zoalord Zeugma. She had captured the Supreme Test unit and was awaiting future orders. The second most powerful zoalord ever created after Alkanphel. If anyone had a chance at killing the Guyver Zoalord however small it was her and her second in command Kron who had the enhanced unit remover designed to capture two other rouge Guyvers. This would be there ultimate test of fait in their gods.

Immediately she was redirected towards the coming Guyver Zoalord. They quickly formed a plan. Zeugma the more powerful of the two would attack the Guyver Zoalord head on. Kron then using the Remover would strike second and remove his unit without it the Zoalord would be nothing compared her and she would destroy the traitor who dared challenge her gods.

Only a few miles from the main Clan Ship of the council over an area of land that would become France Zeugma and Kron waited. This would be the next logical place for the Guyver Zoalord to strike. With the fallen Guyver Supreme’s Unit in his hand Kron was confident they would win. The Guyver Zoalord stopped in front of them. Normally he would be just one of the crowd, a puissant lesser zoalord and these two would boss him around. He was sick of been second best to these two zoalords and now he was better than even their so-called Gods.

Zeugma’s body glowed and a fire like aura surrounded her body. Then she flew at the Guyver Zoalord has fast as she could turning her body into a living weapon. The Guyver Zoalord did nothing and just waited for her. He could sense the power from the leader of the Zoalords but has he always thought, she was no Alkanphel and she could not shatter moons. Zeugma crashed into the Guyver Zoalord with all of her power. A huge explosion followed toppling trees for miles around and wiping out men and zoanoids alike unluckily enough not be zoalords. Kron floated just far enough away to be unhurt by Zeugma’s attack. Has the dust and debris cleared Kron saw something that made his mouth drop open is awe and shock. Their floated the Guyver Zoalord with Zeugma held by the throat. The Guyver Zoalord squeezed napping her neck and with a simple flick of his wrist sending a power wave that deeply cut into the Zoalord’s chest killing Kron.

Deep within the Clan Ship of the Creators the only thought going through the Council Leaders minds was “Who could save us now?”

August 4, 1958, just hours after completing "Operation Sunshine", the USS Nautilus, the first nuclear powered submarine, had made history as the first vessel to reach the geographic North Pole 90 degrees North. When the sonar officer informed the Commanding officer of a strange echo from a nearby ice deposit that had recently cracked open. Unable to determine its source, Commander William R. Anderson ordered a team of divers to investigate. What they had discovered was the body of an alien buried in the ice. Word of the discovery was kept secret as the body was kept frozen and brought back to America.

July 20, 1969, Apollo 11 successfully lands on the moon and Neil Armstrong takes the first historic steps on the moon when two unidentifiable radar blips show up on the Orbiters sensors. No one notices as the UFO’s danced around the moon with one vanishing as it was seemingly destroyed and the other lost as it crashes into the surface of the moon. The event took all of ten seconds but was recorded by the Orbiters computer. November 19, 1969, Apollo 12 successfully lands on the moon and discovers a crashed alien ship. Word of the discovery was kept secret as the remains of its former pilot were brought back to Earth. April 13, 1970, Apollo 13 lands on the moon and recovers the wreckage of the crashed alien spacecraft. A cover story was released showing that Apollo 13 had never landed on the moon and that the crew had nearly died from a major malfunction. The wreckage was released into Earth orbit and recovered by a secret early prototype of the space shuttle as the crew of Apollo 13 made a successful re-entry and splash down on Earth. The remaining four Apollo moon mission showed no other signs of alien presence on the moon.

End of Prelude

The above is part of a rewrite of Time War that was never published. Overall it's correct and will mostly stay the same in the next rewrite (well that is subject to change, the part about Guyver 0 will change a lot) but it will give you all a better idea of what changes to expect in the final version of the rewrite. This was done about 3 odd years ago... so even then I wasn't too happy with Time War the way it was. The above shows that there was more than just the WG project and even more to the WG project itself (it also explains Krullnar's thoughts in 7 Days Part 7).

By the time the 2nd rewrite is done the above will also have a good bit more story added to it and also more history of the Gen's WG project and how it is different to that of the Uranus. Also will answer how Alkanphel fits into the story better and answer how Zeugma was made and why she was chosen to be the new leader of humanity and what she and Kron did to deserve it.

[Juggernought]

How come this wasn't published along with the old version of Time War?

It's quite a good intro to Time War though.

[Sully]

How come this wasn't published along with the old version of Time War?

It's quite a good intro to Time War though.

Basically it was never completed, simply put it's now out of date considering what is known about the Creators and what is decided for the story.

[McAvoy]

I like it. I wonder what will change though. It seems to fit on what we know of the new changes. Maybe alter a few things here and there.

[OnyxPhoenix]

Adding this to my favorites. Sweetness.

Edit: Keep up the great work.