February 6, 201115 yr Author With Time War part 4 now in Edit and it's worth nothing that once it is complete there is a major plot eliment in the story. Which is the "Unknown" red Alien Guyvers are given a name in Part 4 of Time War finally. So the main characters know who they are only after that event. Union of the Guyvers, which at the moment has the Grakken as strange red Guyvers who like telling people they will crush them and in fact "talk" with the enemy and challenged a Gigantic Guyver for awhile will happen very differently along with the Cori kidnapping. So it's work noting down that what happens that story will be heavily edited so the Grakken who strike are an Uknown to both Chronos and the ACTF when Union ends. Union will be edited after Time War to match up but until then will be very out of sync with the re-write.
February 6, 201115 yr With Time War part 4 now in Edit and it's worth nothing that once it is complete there is a major plot eliment in the story. Which is the "Unknown" red Alien Guyvers are given a name in Part 4 of Time War finally. So the main characters know who they are only after that event. Union of the Guyvers, which at the moment has the Grakken as strange red Guyvers who like telling people they will crush them and in fact "talk" with the enemy and challenged a Gigantic Guyver for awhile will happen very differently along with the Cori kidnapping. So it's work noting down that what happens that story will be heavily edited so the Grakken who strike are an Uknown to both Chronos and the ACTF when Union ends. Union will be edited after Time War to match up but until then will be very out of sync with the re-write. Sounds good! I look forward to the rewrite.
February 16, 201115 yr With Time War part 4 now in Edit and it's worth nothing that once it is complete there is a major plot eliment in the story. Which is the "Unknown" red Alien Guyvers are given a name in Part 4 of Time War finally. So the main characters know who they are only after that event. Union of the Guyvers, which at the moment has the Grakken as strange red Guyvers who like telling people they will crush them and in fact "talk" with the enemy and challenged a Gigantic Guyver for awhile will happen very differently along with the Cori kidnapping. So it's work noting down that what happens that story will be heavily edited so the Grakken who strike are an Uknown to both Chronos and the ACTF when Union ends. Union will be edited after Time War to match up but until then will be very out of sync with the re-write. Yeah that is true, the Grakkens love boasting for some reason. Of course the ones that boast all die.
February 16, 201115 yr Sully wrote:With Time War part 4 now in Edit and it's worth nothing that once it is complete there is a major plot eliment in the story. Which is the "Unknown" red Alien Guyvers are given a name in Part 4 of Time War finally. So the main characters know who they are only after that event. Union of the Guyvers, which at the moment has the Grakken as strange red Guyvers who like telling people they will crush them and in fact "talk" with the enemy and challenged a Gigantic Guyver for awhile will happen very differently along with the Cori kidnapping. So it's work noting down that what happens that story will be heavily edited so the Grakken who strike are an Uknown to both Chronos and the ACTF when Union ends. Union will be edited after Time War to match up but until then will be very out of sync with the re-write. McAvoy wrote: Yeah that is true, the Grakkens love boasting for some reason. Of course the ones that boast all die. Classic fatal flaw of many a villain and/or prideful warrior race, they get so caught up in bragging about how epically awesome they are and end up giving their opponent an opening to attack
February 16, 201115 yr Author Well Grakken's of the re-write are like 7 Days, they don't even talk (to their enemies that is or other races in general).
February 16, 201115 yr Sully wrote: Well Grakken's of the re-write are like 7 Days, they don't even talk (to their enemies that is or other races in general). Ah, so they're the strong silent types now eh? Makes sense though, if they hate all born of creator hands or is non-grakken in origin it makes sense they wouldn't speak to them.
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