BloodStorm Posted June 14, 2004 Posted June 14, 2004 Here's a character from my fiction I've been working on. He's also made a (very) brief appearance in one of the rpgs.. and I'm planning on bringing him back for another one sometime soon. http://img25.photobucket.com/albums/v75 ... Trelze.jpg In my story, the name Trelze is the creator word for 'Malformed' and as you can see, he's certainly misformed. His body and mind twisted by a creator bio-virus that went out of control. A few things set him apart from most guyvers. -His sensor orbs are fused in place, so they would appear innoperable.. but the virus has given the unit a keen awareness of it's surroundings, so it can function without the orbs. - Scars cover his form, some self inflicted, some not. These scars are super resiliant, giving him added protection in the scarred areas. -His left eye is scarred over, but he has developed a growth on his oversized arm that functions as a visual organ. It can also emit a beam from it's pupal similer in power to a megasmasher, but with a greater rate of fire. -The left megasmasher is gone, the plate scarred shut.. but there is a nother megasmasher style weapon in the plam of the huge mis-shapen arm. and yes, RE enthuisiats will notice that I drew inspiration from Berkin for a more than a few ideas on this character. Quote
Kaiser Dragoon Posted June 14, 2004 Posted June 14, 2004 Not bad Bloodstorm, though his head would probably look far more menacing if it wasn't so squashed together Quote
gall_4185 Posted June 14, 2004 Posted June 14, 2004 First off,the negatives: I agree about the head being squished and I think the 'eye' on the left shoulder could use some definition instead of just jutting out. The more I look at it,the less I like the head design. For me,that just ruins my perception of the image. Now for the positives: I do love the distored left side of his body,especially the left shin. I also think the parts which are in normal proportion are rather well done. Overall I'd like to see how this could develop given a bit more work Quote
BloodStorm Posted June 14, 2004 Author Posted June 14, 2004 Yeah... the head is supposed to look a little squished.. but looking back on it.. well.. I can see where I could have done alot better.. As for the 'eye' in the shoulder.. the original has detail.. but evidently the sanner decided not to pic it up.. might need to clean the surface again.. This one doesn't pick up debree on the scanning surface, but it its there, then it won't pick up the stuff you DO want it to scan.. Or something... Anyway.. I'll see if I can re-work the original image.. and if not, then I'll post a larger image of just the head sometime in the next day or so... Quote
Guest Posted June 14, 2004 Posted June 14, 2004 Hey I remember this guy, he's that funky guy you had in neo gahering with the virus. Anyway what sort of colors is he? Quote
BloodStorm Posted June 14, 2004 Author Posted June 14, 2004 Crap.. it's been so long since I've thought about his colors, I can't remember right now.. um.. I think a kind of sickly blue for the armor with moltish purple for the scars, and a kind of wine red organism underneith.. The 'eye' is pretty much the same color as it is for Birken in RE2 though.. (like I said before, Birken heavily influinced this's guy's original concpt) EDIT: Okay, did a little work on the head, and added some more definition to the area around the eye.. Mainly gave the head a larger skull structure and then put on the details.. now it shouldn't look so cramped and squished togeather. http://img25.photobucket.com/albums/v75 ... zeEdit.png Quote
gall_4185 Posted June 15, 2004 Posted June 15, 2004 Looks so much better now. When do I get my instructions for rendering it? Quote
Guest Posted June 15, 2004 Posted June 15, 2004 Yep, definetly looks like a boost armored Nemesis from Resident evil. Didn't know those huge guys had a name though. It's a nice interpretation though Quote
Guest Posted June 15, 2004 Posted June 15, 2004 Okay, it's much better than the first posted. But one thing is bothering me. I'm not sure if it's to do with the misproportionate parts or what, but the chest area seems a bit small to fit the rest of the proportioned parts. Quote
BloodStorm Posted June 15, 2004 Author Posted June 15, 2004 Trelze has now been done up in color! Once more, done by Our very own Gall-4185.. I just love the way he turned out.. especially how he appears dirty and half battered, but still has plenty of fight in him... http://www.imagestation.com/picture/sra ... 42e544.jpg Pretty much exactly as I envisioned him.. Fun Fact! When Trelze speaks, it sounds like he's inhaling... almost huanting.. (Go on, try it.. you know you want to.) Quote
jedi-guyver Posted June 15, 2004 Posted June 15, 2004 Damm that looks nice. Good work on the coloring Gall. Quote
Guest Posted June 15, 2004 Posted June 15, 2004 I agree, you two make a good team. Nice artwork, and nice coloring. Quote
gall_4185 Posted June 15, 2004 Posted June 15, 2004 Cheers for the comments. Keep an eye out for future collaborations between Bloodstorm and myself,they should be interesting Quote
nidhogg Posted June 16, 2004 Posted June 16, 2004 Very nice work both of you, can't wait to see future picture collaborations. Quote
Guest Posted June 23, 2004 Posted June 23, 2004 Very nice work both of you, can't wait to see future picture collaborations. Ditto. Just so you know, the first time I saw this I thought I was looking at a guyverized version of the William Monster From Resident Evil 2. Quote
Guest Posted June 29, 2004 Posted June 29, 2004 Very nicely done. I like the hybrid form that makes Birkin to look kinda weak in comparison. I shudder at the thought of the fourth form of Birkin at the end of the 1st Scenario of either Claire or Leon in a Guyver hybrid form. x_x Quote
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