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Can you do that for me TW? I would really appreciate it!

Here's chapter 1: http://fav.me/d2wauuf

BK: That was my original thoughts on it, just she didn't get a Unit herself. Instead all her attempts to get one for Alky backfires badly. TW: I see what you mean. I thought I made the prolouge too short... Kenji: We are idea buddies! That is so cool!

That's acually a good idea. Okay. I'll try to get chapter one done soon!

I know all of that, and I will be writing stuff from the manga into the story as it continues. There's going to be the same amout of action here as there is in the manga, maybe a little more comedy here and there as Rhia's attempts to get a G Unit for Alkanphel later on backfires. And for Rhia to be Alkanphel's kid was part of my original idea, and I kinda scared my friends with that idea because she had a tomboy personallity at first.

I know it's small and I'm trying to put chapter one together. I'm currently stuck as to where to start the chapter.

Well, no one on deviantArt will comment on it, so here's the original prolouge I had in mind for my Guyver fanfi: http://fav.me/d2vl6ev I would like to hear some feedback on it, please! DO NOT BE AFRAID OF HURTING MY FEELINGS!!! Go all out if you want!

Wow! The expressions of the characters tell all! Whomever did these is a really good character artist.

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