Decade Fanfic Discussion and Updates thread

[spectre555]

...is anyone actually reading what i'm saying?

okay before i go on what happened next, someone give a name for this High Priest in the Tartarus Empire.

Edited October 31, 2009 by spectre555

[Toku Warrior]

Just because we don't reply doesn't mean we're not reading.

I work during the day and night so I get online when I can.

Anyway, I can't really think of any names yet but let me think for a moment.

Well, in Spanish, you say priest as "sacerdote".

As for Japanese, you can say it as these. saishi, nyuudou, pateren, shukke, daitoku, sou

Go with one of those and improvise on them name. High Priest Daitosou (combo of Daitoku and Sou).

[spectre555]

Hmm okay here's what happens next.

After Magnus fights and defeats the berserk Diend,suddenly, High Priest Daitosou appear.

Magnus:Another Tartarus higher ups?Well am i lucky today.And its the one spearheading the entire invasion too!

High Priest Daitosou: Narutaki!Take Diend away from here!I will hold him back!

Narutaki:Are you sure about this!?This is the monster that....

High Priest Daitosou:I don't intend to get killed.

Magnus:Where are my comrades?

Narutaki:I will send men to back you up!Just hang in there!

Narutaki then flees away with Kaito.

High Priest Daitosou: oh, they are perfectly "alright" in our care.Despite not being cooperative...and they escaped!

High Priest Daitosou:Oops,i cant say anymore.We may have lost the other riders, but dealing with you will have to come first!

Magnus:Bring it, i defeated your empire's strongest warriors!! You and the rest are not much compared to them!

Magnus then changes into a powerful form as High Priest Daitosou opens up a Dimension gate.....

Just as the newly summoned Tartarus minions rush in and Magnus finished form changing and charges at the minions.

Suddenly,all of them except Magnus pause upon feeling something.

Magnus:What's wrong?Why the sudden halt?

A gate appears from behind High Priest Daitosou and Dark Tsukasa walks out (in his official Tartarus armor and Helmet.)

High Priest Daitosou:......why are you here.......?

Dark Tsukasa:...Go back to the base....I will handle him....

High Priest Daitosou:You cant be serious!This is the...

Dark Tsukasa:I know.Take the men away.

High Priest Daitosou:I see.*a dimension gate then appears and whisks the Tartarus Minions back to base*

High Priest Daitosou:...I will stay here and watch.

Dark Tsukasa:....Fine.

Magnus:So you are leader of the Tartarus Empire.

Magnus:[Thinking]What is this pressure is this iam feeling here?It feels like it could overwhelm me if I'm not careful![Thinking}

Magnus:....If i defeat you, all of this will end!

Magnus launches a ranged attack,and Dark Tsukasa takes out a strange looking saber and slices the attack into nothing!

Dark Tsukasa:......Magnus, was it?An existence similar to Decade?

High Priest Daitosou:[Thinking]Indeed, it ends up only he can deal with such an opponent.[Thinking}

Magnus then changes to Extinction Form.

High Priest Daitosou:Watch out!He's changing into "that!"

Dark Tsukasa:So this is the power that defeated Decade.

Magnus Extinction then tries to punch Dark Tsukasa...but...

Dark Tsukasa then narrowly avoids his punch and stabs Magnus Extinction in the stomach with a dagger that just appeared in his hand!

Magnus Extinction then stumbles back and shouts out in tremendous pain!

Dark Tsukasa:Like it?I went away from my empire for a while to make this to slay things like you if they ever appeared!

Dark Tsukasa:The God Slaying Blade,Damocles.

Dark Tsukasa:Hurts, doesn't it?The more powerful the target's existance, the more powerful the damage!!

Dark Tsukasa:Especially... those whose existence has divinity...

Magnus then looks in horror to see his wounds are getting worse rather than healing!

Magnus then quickly pulls out the dagger with force and returns back to normal form.

Dark Tsukasa:now, you die.

Goro then suddenly appears and quickly flees with Magnus and they get whisked away by a dimensional wall.

*I will explain what Damocles is later on and its powers*

Edited October 31, 2009 by spectre555

[Toku Warrior]

I guess it's a good thing to have something that can cause Alex some serious damage. Though Dark Tsukasa needs to be careful that the dagger doesn't fall into the hands of his enemies.

Makes me wonder what would happen if he faced off against Decade - Divine Invoke Complete Form, Shadow - Darkness Form and Magnus - Rising Soul Extinction Form at the same time? Considering that Magnus and Shadow are my 2 most powerful. Though we need to wonder how he would deal with all the Riders in their most powerful final forms.

Actually, maybe I should design one for Goro/G.

Wait, Spectre, you could have had Dark Tsukasa travel to Magnus's dimension and have him go the planet of the Majin to take that dagger which was developed there to kill godly beings.

Edited October 31, 2009 by Toku Warrior

[spectre555]

Damocles's usual form is a Sabre actually,but please wait for me to put up why Dark Tsukasa suddenly managed to have a dagger version of it in his hands.

btw, as to the origins to this blade, is closely related to his ability.

Though he might have gone to Majin's planet to get a good example of what a god slaying weapon is during his search to find a god slaying weapon.

Dark Tsukasa obtained it and decided to create an anti-higher existance slaying weapon after knowing the concept behind the weapon.

btw,why would the Majin have that?

We are getting into spoiler territory, just wait first.

Edited November 1, 2009 by spectre555

[Toku Warrior]

The Majin Emperor had one forged so when the time came that the 1st original Magnus returned it could be used against him. It would actually be one of the few things that could easily penetrate Extinction Forms armor and give Alex a fatal wound. It's sorta like his Kryptonite.

There are four things that I've created that could kill Alex. Some are inspired by your ideas.

Dark Blade - a parallel type of blade of the Sacred Scabbard of Rodimus. A lower quality version which is not as powerful as the original.

Sycron Ruby - a rare gem that emits a frequency that, if placed against the Magnadriver when activate, can cancel out its power for 24 hours. this ruby is also known to be very lethal to Lykroscians (something that Alex is half of. He's a human/Lykroscian halfbreed so it's deadly to him).

The Sacred Scabbard of Rodimus - An ancient weapon even older than the Magnadriver. Created by the first super warrior of the universe, it has been around since the time of creation and is the only true weapon that can best Magnus even when he is at his zenith.

Staff of Ages - A staff made by the creator himself. It's power is absolute and can smite even the most poweful of enemies. It has a special ability in which it can hender a being of an unnatural level of existence powerless, thus making them normal while the staff is around.

Edited November 1, 2009 by Toku Warrior

[spectre555]

uuuh, there cant really be a blade parallel to Damocles.(For very good reasons)

Damocles,the sword that cuts the mighty,the God Slaying Blade.

Created by Dark Tsukasa's unique one and only ability to access the(has not created a name for the source of power of the multivere),it is an essentially an existence created to slay beings of a higher existence.

The workings of this blade is more sophisticated than any god slaying weapons,due to the complicated workings of the blade.Dark Tsukasa used the infinite source of power from the multiverse to condense a series of self created multiverse laws,rules and workings and materialise it into a form.

Like a law in the universe, it will trigger upon coming into contact with anything or sensing a target within certain power levels,and will create a solution to enforce its destruction.(and thus a dagger version of it that appeared in Dark Tsukasa's hand)

In short, the Damocles Sword is multiversal law against existences of certain levels taken a physical form.

However, when its special ability is not activated, it is as good just any blade made by the best mortal sword makers.(Nothing higher than mortal materials should be used or else the blade could have a contradiction, thus destroying itself or losing its ability)

Right now,i'm still working on a name for the source of power that exists in the multiverse.

Any suggestions?This is related to Divine Invoke's true power.

Edited November 1, 2009 by spectre555

[Toku Warrior]

Made changes to it then. Also added one other item as well.

[spectre555]

So what happened to those items?

It cant be helped if riders like Magnus, Shadow,Ghoul cant beat this.it was designed against their very existence..

Just a bit of explaination how it works.

Damocles reaction

Human/Mortal-No reaction

Part Demon/Divine-Small reaction,can injure them slightly effectively.

Quarter Demon/Divine-Small-Medium reaction,can injure them effectively.Wounds inflicted will not heal for a while.

Half Demon/Divine-Medium reaction.can injure them very effectively.Wounds inflicted will not heal until the sword loses sight of target.

3/4 Demon/Divine-Medium-Big reaction.Wounds inflicted will get worse over time until the user tells it to stop.If the blade stuck in the target,any poor attempts to extract the blade will result in it activating a curse of magic to make it plunge deeper into the target.

Full Demon/Divine-Big reaction.Wounds inflicted will get worse over time until the user tells it to stop.If the blade stuck in the target,any poor attempts to extract the blade will result in it activating a curse of magic to make it plunge deeper into the target and causing new wounds to appear.

[Toku Warrior]

Hmm, overkill on the last one slightly but it's still a good weapon.

As for what happened to those 4 items I mentioned, the Dark Blade is used by the Majin Emperor to try and kill the 1st but the 1st turns the tides and steals the balde, using it on Alex later in the Magnus series. The blade is destroyed in the process. The Sycron Ruby is actually discovered by Darkside and used on Alex while in Azarath Form. Alex will be intensly hospitalized and unable to transform in Magnus for a few chapters which will represent a few weeks do to the fact he was in a higher form than his basic form. The ruby is destroyed later on by the Teen Titans and J'onn J'onnz.

The Sacred Scabbard of Rodimus is used when a decendant of the ancient warrior believes that Raven is a threat to the life force of the universe. It will appear in the second big arc of the Magnus series when Trigon returns to to conquere the world using Raven as his living gate. This arc is also the first appearance of Azarath Form and Disoto using his Majidriver which turns him into Kamen Rider Dreadnaught. The warriors descendant is tricked by Trigon and is relieved of the scabbard. In the end when Alex uses the FinalRide card to defeat Trigon he uses the scabbard and plunges it into the seal, thus permanentally trapping Trigon in the realm of hell for all eternity. This is the arc that Dreadus and Stratus also reach their evolution forms. The scabbard is destroyed in the process.

The Staff of Ages is used in the final arc by Alex to help him defeat the 1st. It's a double edged sword though as he is greatly injured in the process, thus making it impossible for him to abosrb the sins of the 1st. Raven then uses it in the final chapter to seal the 1st powers long enough for Magnus to defeat him while only using his basic form, proving that power alone is nothing without courage, heart and teamwork to back it up. The staff is then taken back to Oa , the palnet of the Guardians of the Universe, by Green Lantern for safe keeping until it can be decided on what to do with it.

[spectre555]

well, if your are dealing with a full true god/demon whose wounds would recover within seconds,and can die many many times over before being really killed,you would want that effect so you can kill them eventually once they are down to their "last" life.

then again, i should rework this into a better theory when ive got time,it just a test sample how it works.

Edited November 1, 2009 by spectre555

[spectre555]

i will do up the Damocles sword in the illustration later.

[Toku Warrior]

Okay, so that no one thinks this topic is dying. I know a lot of us have busy lives to lead and a lot of things to take care of.

So let's clear some stuff up on what's taking place so far with the ideas and what is taking us so long to get stuff done here.

Bobby - Busy with his Jungle Fury and KR Medulla stories plus working on his video blogs, his job and running his own forums.

Tiga - N/A as I don't talk with him. Tales and/or Spectre will have to elaborate his condition.

Toku Warrior - Busy with work, writing side chapters for the collab, doing the main writing and writing for his Rider's worlds. Also busy with his other fanfics and drawing requests.

Tales - Busy planning ANT and writing Kero while working on ANT's and Cosmos's design concepts. Also busy with running his new site, Beyond Words.

Spectre 555 - Busy with being in charge of the main story planning, planing out Cosmos and doing weapon designs. Also in charge of the main editing of the story.

Story-wise - Currently we are 3 chapters in with Tsukasa now arriving in Shadow's world. We also have the first side chapter, Decade VS. Magnus, nearly done. So far we are still planning out a lot of Decades, DiEnds and Dark Decade's powers and abilities as well as more planning on the Tartarus Empire. Once more of the major planning is done and we get at least the 1st world done with we can easily move along with getting everything set in stone.

[Bobby]

And I've been flipping out at the fact that my favorite baseball team is the World Series Champions!!!!!! And I've been dealing with my job too. My dad's birthday is this weekend. Akiza & MediGirl of PUAO are coming over to hangout.

[spectre555]

ok, just an update, we will put a copy of all of the neccessary info in Tales's form.

The original premise has been changed, so i have to retype it all....For illustrations bits, i wont really do that just yet.

[Tales]

Yeah put what we have in my forum... just make a new topic

[spectre555]

What should the source of power in the Multiverse be called?

Edited November 12, 2009 by spectre555

[Toku Warrior]

Battle Chap COMPLETE. I leave it to you two for editing. Let me know how it is and please post the finalized version in the new thread I made.

1 - Decade VS Magnus.doc

[Toku Warrior]

I would like to know what everyone thought of it. Make suggestions about anything else you'd like to see happen and any possible slight changes you would probably liked made and I'll see if I can do that.

This is still the finished rough. I won't post the final edited version until I get some replies on the battle chap.

[spectre555]

still 2 more days till my exam is over, so wait.

[Toku Warrior]

Oh, I can wait. I'm just putting it out there that I need reviews before it's finalized.

[spectre555]

The final bit cant be really like this, it would make it look too friendly a fight.Just cut out the unnecessary dialogue,make a bit like they were really wanted to give it their all at themselves and delete the verbal agreement to end it with their most powerful blows.

Decade and Magnus both can tell that each other were at their limits anyway.

In short,

-Make the fight more of all out brawl of fists and wills or something like that.

-Then end it with them charging at each other and they hit each other with their finisher punch attacks.

Magnus's punch really hit Decade hard that Decade fell to the ground with his helmet slightly caved in where Magnus hit him.

other than that, nothing else i guess for now.

Edited November 24, 2009 by spectre555

[spectre555]

oh yeah, about what Magnus felt about Decade's Divine Invoke.

He could feel it was some pure familiar and yet unknown power with no particular alignment at first, but it quickly became "Decaded".

Since the Omnipotent Force is the source of power that literally gives life, it is not strange to feel familiar with it, but in its pure nonaligned form will make any lifeform feel strange.

[Toku Warrior]

Some things to take into account. Thanks for the pointers. I look through it and maybe keep the brawl as it is but I'll change the last part of the battle to make it more of it being thought instead of said. This way, it's not set in friendly terms but they find a mutal respect for one another due to eachothers strengths.

As they are powerful destroyers, powers and weapons are good but you're right in that there should probbaly be more punching. I'll see if I can add a few bouts within the structure.

I'll also go back and add a sentence where Magnus refers Decade's Divine Invoke to it feeling similar to the 1st's True Power (the 1st being the original Magnus, Alex's ancestor. He'll be the final boss in the Magnus fanfic).

[Bobby]

I figured out Neuron's real name. It's in my thread.