Decade Fanfic Discussion and Updates thread

[spectre555]

okay, its been a while, lets hear how's chapter 3 going?

[Toku Warrior]

Would the words, "It's finished so here it is", be the ones ya want to hear?

It's shorter than the first 2 previous chapters but....meh.

EP.2.doc

[spectre555]

Ive made some major to slight changes to chp 3, so.............

okay,basically, here's is what is happening.

Phase 1 of the Tartarus's Empire Plan.

The Ten Worlds are fusing with Natsumi's World as the the suction point.

The Tartarus Empire had found that the World Boundaries around the Nine Worlds were tough to break.

Thus, they made machines slightly around Natsumi's World World Boundary in the directions of the Nine Worlds to suck them in and weaken their protections around them at the same time.

After the Nine Worlds were close to Natsumi's World World Boundary, they would detonate those machines and begin the next step of their plan.

As Goro was not fully aware of the intention behind the suction of the Nine Worlds, he saw it as they were trying to fuse the worlds together although with some doubts.

[spectre555]

Jsut to ask,can anyone lend Diend some secondary riders and their weapons?

[Toku Warrior]

I thought I did when we talked on MSN.

Well, here's the revamp list for DiEnd's use of my 4 worlds:

Riders

Kamen Rider Saber (Shadow's World)

Kamen Rider Blood (Ghoul's World)

Kamen Rider Stratus (Magnus's World)

Kamen Rider Dreadnaught (Magnus's World)

Kaijin

Majin Overlord (Magnus's World)

MetaNeo (Neos's World)

Desmond / Deathmonger (Shadow's World)

Kuuyou / Kitsune Demon (Ghoul's World)

Backup

MetaTroopers (Neos's World) - these are the Neos World version of the Kabuto's RiotTroopers from the TV series

Edited October 4, 2009 by Toku Warrior

[spectre555]

hmm in theory Diend can use attack rides for other riders as well, but here one he would use often if he needs another weapon other than the Diendriver.

He would use attack rides for rider or kaijin weapons.

EG.Diend uses the card Attack Ride- Razorblader

Diend gets Astro's chainsaw sword.

[spectre555]

hmm here's the chapters edited.You guys can edit it if there is anything you need to.

EP 1 pt1.doc

EP.1 pt2.doc

EP.2.doc

[Toku Warrior]

example battle scene:

DiEnd, standing in front of one of the downed Tartarus Tanks, just eyes Decade as the megenta colored Rider stands opposite of him, brandishing his RideBooker in sword mode. Decade, not liking the results of DiEnds last attack on the young Kaijin he had befriended, stares at the teal blue colored Rider with intense hatred.

"He was just an innocent. A monster yes, but still innocent and someone who valued life as a prescious treasure." Decade said in an angered tone, growling lowly at his rivla Rider. "He trusted you and you betrayed him!"

"If he hadn't befriended you as well Tsukasa then he wouldn't have had to die. I warned him that the Tartarus Empire would not tolerate him being friends with you." DiEnd just lowered his Diendriver, holding it next to his side. He let out a sigh as he just stared up at the sky. "I told him that if you befriend the destroyer that you too would be destroyed. Yet he still befriended you anwyas, believing that you could save him."

"Enough!" Decade was completely fed up with DiEnds' lecture. All he wanted to do now was avenge the young Fukazai that he had earlier befriended. "It's time to end this. I came to this world to protect it. I did just that until you killed him."

DiEnd, anticipating what Decade's next move would be, reached for his card case on his belt, removing three cards. He then brought his gun to his hand holding the cards and pushed the muzzle forward.

"Ya know what Tsukasa? Maybe it's best if you never remember your past after all."

Decade, having heard enough, charged for DiEnd but the blue Rider had something else in mind than just fighting Decade.

"I told you to leave this world and I would plead to the council to forgive your previous transgressions. But now I think that the only way I can save you..." Placing two of the three cards on the inner side of the Diendriver, he slids the two cards into the muzzle reader.

"KamenRide." - Diendriver

"KamenRide." - Diendriver

"...is to kill you myself and put your tormented soul to rest. Sayonara, Tsukasa-kun." Aiming the gun right at Decade, he let out one last sigh and then pulled the trigger, activating the two cards. "But I won't be alone in my actions."

"Dreadnaught!" - Diendriver

"Saber" - Diendriver

The power of DiEnds' Diendriver brings forth two sets of multicolored images. The images scatter around for a moment before fully materializing into their respective forms. Decade, shocked at what DiEnd just did, stops in his tracks to see two more Riders before him. One was big with black armor with a draconic motif to its form while the other has more green in color with a slight robotic look and a bull motif.

"What the hell?! What's going on here?" Decade demanded. DiEnd, not wanting to leave him in the dark completely, decided to answer his demanding question as his gift for him into the afterlife.

"Remember when you were in Kamen Rider ANT's world? Remember that Rider that attacked you for no reason? The one that looked slightly like an astronaught gone Rider. I summoned him to stop you from continuing your journey. But now I see one Rider may not be enough. So maybe muself plus two more can end your journey." DiEnd informed him.

Decade was speechless. He could aslo use KamenRide cards like him but to an even greater extent than he could. What else could DiEnd do that he couldn't?

"So they're..." - Decade

"The first one was Kamen Rider Astro...Mark 1. He's from the world that was once protected by Kamen Rider Cosmos. Now allow me to introduce thses two. The big one is Kamen Rider Dreadnaught from Magnus's world while the other one is...well, you should recognize him. He was in the first world you went to."

He was right. Decade instantly recognized Saber. His mind then went to one thought. What was the third card that DiEnd drew?

"And I can also do this." DiEnd slid the muzzle forward again before loading the final card. He aimed the gun into the air and fired.

"AttackRide." - Diendriver

"Blood Rapier!" - Diendriver

The Diendriver instantly vanished to a storage space zone for later use. In its place the blood red, razor sharp weapon of Kamen Rider Blood appeared, held firmly in his hand.

'It can't be! He can also summon the weapons of other Riders without needing to summon them first?' Decade thought. He soon realized he was going to have a real fight on his hands. 'I think....I'm in trouble. Damn, where that Goro when ya really need him?!'

DiEnd just slowly moved into formation with Saber and Dreadnaught while the two Riders brought forth their own weapons. Saber seperated his Bull Shield into the Minotaur Bladers, attaching both blades to his arm gauntlets. Dreadnaught drew a card from his MajinDivider after pushing down on the cover panel of his right forearm gauntlet. Sliding the card into the slot he clsoed the panel and summoned his own weapon.

"MajinStrike." - Dragodriver

"Sledge Breaker!" - Dragodriver

Decade nearly doubled over as he sweatdropped. 'Oh boy....this is really gonna hurt.' he thought as Dreadnaughts' powerful and really big dragon shaped war hammer appeared out of thin air and into his hands.

"And now Tsukasa...it's time to die." - Diend

End exampel. This just a way to show how Decade can use summon the secondairy Riders and their weapons.

[spectre555]

well, the first fight between Diend and Decade is still far away(Ghoul's world), we think about it later, for now just check up on the edited chapters.

Edited October 4, 2009 by spectre555

[Toku Warrior]

alas, as i put int he beginning and ending of that post, it was a battle example. It was to help the others see how a battle between the two could start out and to show them how DiEnd would use those cadrs in battle.

Anywho, I'll be going ot bed in a few so I'll be working on the Battle Chapter again tomorrow.

[spectre555]

okay, i was thinking could instead have a holster for the Diendriver.(like Garren's)

as far as i know,Goro could not save Tsukasa in the 2nd fight with Diend because he is occupied.That's why he got overwhelmed by Diend's summons.

[spectre555]

okay, just in anticipation to some complaints.

"Why doesn't Decade uses XXXX's Rider Cards more often?He would not get beaten if he used XXXX's Rider Cards!Decade did not use a certain card at all!We never saw him use a certain card again!"

While we try to provide more fanservice like this, sometimes the story does not have opportunities to such a thing.

Cases where Decade can turn Machine Decader into other Riders bikes are rare since thre isnt too much room for bike battles.

Decade in our fanfic prefers to use a card when he needs to.Besides, in essence,even one main rider has alot cards in essence for every form, weapon, technique and equipment.It would be impossible to use them all in the fanfic!

Decade uses his main Decade Form often since its the suit he is familiar with.He would only change into other riders when he needs or wants to.

Edited October 4, 2009 by spectre555

[Toku Warrior]

Good point. There are too many forms for our Riders and that means a hell of a lot of cards. We will only use other Rider forms for either battle related purposes or if Tsukasa just wants to test those forms out for a few.

[spectre555]

after Shadow world arc is done,we need to discuss Why and When Decade would use our rider's cards.In short,We should all come up with reasons why Decade would want to use a particular rider for.

[spectre555]

Okay,rather than be slient about it, erm, Tales has been busy for a while, so im taking a break too.

[Toku Warrior]

Ok guys, the battle chapter is now half way done. I'm already at 11 pages so far and I'm stopping for the night. I just finished the detailed description of Extinction Form as I just had Magnus transform into it. I let Decade actually get a good beating on Magnus but now it's gonna be complete and utter hell. I should hopefully have it done within the week. At least I hope so.

The fight won't be as drawn out as I first wanted it to be as drawn out fights can tend to get boring fast. I am also making the chapter shift between the actual dream (the fight between Decade and Magnus) and the real world were Natsumi and Ejirou are watching over Tsukasa as he twist and turns in his sleep.

This chapter should be anywhere from 13-18 pages long by the time I'm done with it. And this is just a chapter dedicated to a fight and not much else.

I'm definetely moving at a much faster pace with the side chapters than the basic story chapters.....probably because I don't have to make plans for them, lol.

[spectre555]

i figured it wont be too drawn out, that why i left out much of Decade's Divine invoke powers

[Toku Warrior]

I haven't really had him use those powers yet. Just his enhanced invoke speed and strength to give Magnus a Divine beat down of a life time beofre Extinction Form appears. Slamming him into a tractor trailer, through a wall and into a light pole sounds good enough. That and kneeing Magnus right in the face.

Can we say ouchies for Magnus?

[spectre555]

wow...........

Decade:i beat him up over and over again, but he wont die!

[Toku Warrior]

[spectre555]

So erm,since Tales is still busy,lets discuss a minor thing.

Tsukasa's curse on photography

Does Tsukasa take a photo in each world he visits?

[Toku Warrior]

I say we keep the photography aspect. If we didn't then we wouldn't really have a need for Hikari Studio's.

Plus, let's say, if Tsukasa somewhere down the road starts to waver or forget what he has learner he can just lok at the photo's he's taken and get that feeling back from the nastalgia of seeing the images.

[spectre555]

Okay, rather than keep it a secret.Here's some detail on the Divine Implants Operation.

This Operation involves implanting divine flesh or blood(Dont ask what higher existence it is from,not thought of yet) into the person.

However,most results end up with rejection to the divine flesh or blood,mostly causing ugly results.

[Toku Warrior]

reminds me of the philosiphers stone injection that King Bradely was given in FMA - Brotherhood and in the manga. It was that injection that made him a humunculus. Everyone before him had died during the process. But since he withstood it he was dubbed as the humunculus Wrath.

That reminds me of it.

[spectre555]

though it is similar, but the ugly results are more of deformed/mutated humans.