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Ok, Spectre, once I finish the chapter I'll post it so you can add that part then Tales can do the usual edits from there.

Tales, just make that stuff into a side chapter that can be placed between World Arc 1 and World Arc 2. This way, people can read the Prologue, Arc 1 and Side Chapter 1 before we get to Arc 2. You already know the basic jist on how Shadow, Ghoul and Magnus act by having read their stories. Use them in that side story as needed. Let me know if ya need any info for Neos to help ya with it.

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No problem....

But one thing is I might need help is how each Rider might react in some circumstances. Like say Kero will not tolerate Wataru for he said he cannot fight without Kivat.

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just for fun...........

If i were to think of the Decade Fanfic as a videogame..........

Cosmos would be the Assassin/Commando.

Why use Cosmos?

-Cosmos can be quite agile and fast in combat.He can be used to make quick kills out of weak enemies.

-He is capable of wall running and other stunts.

-He can also cloak himself from sight.

-Can perform silent stealth kills.

-Can use a stasis attack to slow enemies.

-Algorithm acceleration increases your reaction time.

-Nova Burst speeds up your movements.

-Motion perception can allow you to dodge attacks that too fast for you.You would be able to do bullet time!

Why not to use Cosmos?

-Cosmos is not good in long drawn out battles.

-His Damage resistance,Knockback resistance,Endurance is weak compared to the rest of the Nine.He would be easy to knock down.

-His physical damage is punches and kicks isn't very good.

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OK.... so I suppose Kero and Neos might not tolerate Wataru's timidness or Ryotaro's split personalities at first. Maybe they are in the same cell? Ha ha ha

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Kero gets pissed off more with Ryotaros than Wataru[despite my personal displeasure]. Ryotaro's imagin personalities can drive anyone crazy.

Okay we also need like say what does Daishocker want with our Riders. If they had nothing to do with them why do they keep them alive or torture them?

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Let's see:

  • To try and copy their Rider powers
  • To possibly brainwash them and make them serve Daishocker
  • Torture them just because they resisted Daishockers rule
  • Keep them alive as possible food sources for their Kaijin army or as test dummies for new Kaijin forms

Something like that.

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just for fun...........

If i were to think of the Decade Fanfic as a videogame..........

Cosmos would be the Assassin/Commando.

Why use Cosmos?

-Cosmos can be quite agile and fast in combat.He can be used to make quick kills out of weak enemies.

-He is capable of wall running and other stunts.

-He can also cloak himself from sight.

-Can perform silent stealth kills.

-Can use a stasis attack to slow enemies.

-Algorithm acceleration increases your reaction time.

-Nova Burst speeds up your movements.

-Motion perception can allow you to dodge attacks that too fast for you.You would be able to do bullet time!

Why not to use Cosmos?

-Cosmos is not good in long drawn out battles.

-His Damage resistance,Knockback resistance,Endurance is weak compared to the rest of the Nine.He would be easy to knock down.

-His physical damage is punches and kicks isn't very good.

for fun, lets list reason why and not does decade transform into our riders from time to time like this.

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Well I know that while he's in Shadow's world he will learn 1 or 2 Shadow Craft techniques to help him along in his journey. To sorta make up for him not having the AttackRide - Invisible card.

For those wondering, I put CH.3 aside for today as I had gotten a good idea for one of my other fanfics so I had to draw it out. All this talk about Kamen Rider, Decade, Double/W and how powerful Riders are currently got me to thinking of a 5th and hopefully final Emergency Form for Ben in my Ben 10 Forever series. I'm basing that form off of Ultimate Kuuga.

So as not to get completely off topic from this thread, if you wish to know more about this form from that fanfic just PM me or keep an eye out for my Ben 10 image thread in the Imagery section.

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okay, basically why i have not come up that time line before the events of ep 1 is because i need to know who created/how the Decadriver was created.

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Ok becos the World did not execute Diend too well. I suggest we come up maybe with our own villain for Diend.

Perhaps Diend was tricked into joining Daishocker, thinking that his world's villain can be deal with with Daishocker.

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Here's another concept of Diend/Kaito i had.

Diend's world, was a world with no Kamen riders and had kaijin.

The kaijin of Diend's world were powerful,there was no one with the power to stop them from attaining their goal.

The Kaijin overran humanity in Diend's world.

Alas, there was a small resistance against the Kaijin.

Kaito Daiki was the head of this resistance.A determined but futile resistance.

One day, the kaijin launched a full all out attack on the resistance's last base.The attack left many resistance members dead,literally leaving only 30 members of the resistance left.Much of the members decided to quit or give away information of the resistance,in short betraying them.

In his despair,Kaito wished for power.Power strong enough to defeat the Kaijin and eradicate them.

Then, a strange man (Narutaki) appeared behind him and offered him what he wanted.

Kaito:"Who are you?"

Narutaki:"You may call me Narutaki."

Kaito:"Why are you here?"

Narutaki:"We are Daishocker,an organization who wants to bridge a way to many worlds that exist in the multiverse."

Narutaki:"This is just another trick! i wont be fooled!"*grabs a modified shotgun*

Narutaki:"..........Your world happens to be in a bad state.Not very lucrative for us,and in fact detrimental to our plans if we are to carry on and leave it as it is."

Kaito:"What do you mean?"

Narutaki then took Kaito to their temporary daishocker establishment and showed him the situation and explained their motives.

Narutaki:"We would like to get someone from this world to defeat those Kaijin.If we are to try bridge the world near yours,there is a risk of the time space continuum near yours would be distorted as well since your world is quite close to the one we are trying to gain access to."

Daishocker World Researcher:"Our Technology at this point is still needing of some refinements,when we try to open a small temporary gate to the world we want, it is okay."

Daishocker World Researcher:"But here's the problem.When we want to make a big permanent gateway to that world we want,there seems to be a problem."

Narutaki:"Due to your world being very near to the one we want to travel,the gateway would cause an anomaly if it were to form."

Kaito:"So its like trying to get two metal circles which are like stuck together,but you find that they are almost inseparable and you want to seperate them without damaging the one you want right?"

Narutaki:"Yes.Our World Transversing Technology is not perfect.If we try to make the gateway to the world we want,it would cause a distortion of time and space near in your world."

Kaito:"What's so dangerous about that?To you that is."

Narutaki:"As i said, our world transversing technology is not perfect."

Daishocker World Researcher:"We want to reduce the amount of damage done to the World Boundary in this Multiverse in our goal.Its like the Ozone Layer, it is essential, but if it keeps getting broken down without a chance to regenerate, it will have consequences."

Narutaki:"The World Boundary is big, but if we keep drilling through it repeatedly,its bound to fall.A crisis will happen if it does."

Narutaki then leads Kaito out of the daishocker establishment.

Narutaki:"So,are you willing to work for us?"

Kaito:"How will i know you arent one of them?"*points gun at Narutaki*

Narutaki:"Do we look like any of those savage beasts out there?"

Narutaki:"............Fine, all of this must have been too much for you in one day.We will come again.By that time,tell me what your decision is."

Narutaki:"Here's a sign of goodwill, we did some analysis of the kaijin here.Hope it helps."

Narutaki then walks away after giving Kaito a disk.

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this also shows Daishocker isnt your usual purely evil organisation.They have their own goals like Chronos like Guyver and also are like a business.

I was thinking of changing his taste for treasures really.

Daiki wants the powerful treasures from worlds,is because he knows that Daishocker isnt fully trustable.He knows they only see him as an employee or a mere tool.

Daishocker's intention of Daiki's world actually to get the Zeolite Stones(Remember the illustration?) from the Kaijin for the Decadriver.

The Zeolite Stones were very rare stones(almost impossible to find anywhere else) which had the power of creation.This was necessary to actually create a material that could not be made by even their technology.

Daishocker needed a Zeolite stone of a certain size, and the ones they found in Diend's world mostly were too small and too little.They had only found 2 small fragments.

These Small Fragments were easily broken after a few uses.What they were used to create is a mystery.

The Zeolite Stones were embedded on the body of leader of the Kaijin in Diend's world.

This material was known later as the Divine Ore(Remember the illustration?).

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These Kaijin were extremely powerful because of the Zeolite Stones their leader possesses in its body.Whatever army Daishocker called forth to try defeat the kaijin on their own was useless against them.

The higher kaijin had small fragments of zeolite stones in their body after all.Even a small fragment contains a large amount of power.

(But not enough for Daishocker's Decadriver.These fragments would break just by trying to materialize the Divine Ore.)

There were few in Daishocker who would and could defeat a higher kaijin.Even if a high daishocker executive from Daishocker like Narutaki went personally against one,it would be a long drawn out exhausting battle.

Daishocker still knew too little about the kaijin even with their research on the kaijin and technology.They dont know about Diend's World history or the history of the kaijin and much other information.

Kaito's resistance probably knew at least something about that, being the denizens of Diend's world after all.

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How does Kaito fit in the deal then?

i could illustrate further, and it involves how Tsukasa met Daiki,but i need to see if its in green light to go.

People have been saying Diend is unrelated to the story, so there, i made him relevant.

Kaito becomes something he wanted to destroy,a destroyer.By helping Daishocker conquer worlds and killing/absorbing powers of their heroes/villains for power to save his own,he is literally the same as the kaijin leader that wrecked his world.

As for why Tsukasa is a world destroyer i dont know why he decided to do so yet.I cant think of one yet.

I can explain why he has trouble with photography and why he gets new clothes every time he enters a world.

Or why the symbols of the Nine Riders are on the Decadriver and stuff like that.

Btw,i also have a reason why Decade and Diend can only be used by the respective owners.(Or maybe why some Tom,Dick or Harry cant simply use them)

ps.Ive decided to approve of Diend summoning kaijin and the main riders, but first i need to fix stuff up.

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