February 13, 200917 yr Here's where we can discuss ideas for my first original Rider. Here are the forms the Psychosians will be based on. Dragon - Main Villain who could use a wicked name. Mantis - The first to be destroyed by Ganglia Form Spider Scorpion Lobster Cactus Venus Fly Trap Tiger Chameleon - The first to be destroyed by Tectum Form Rhinoceros - The first to be destroyed by the unnamed Powerhouse Form Wolf - The first to be destroyed by Medulla's Rider Kick Rhino Beetle Stag Beetle Lion - Main Villain's Second-In-Command Perhaps. Pteranodon Rose Mole Bat Gecko Frog Pig Gorilla Turtle/Tortoise Penguin Cardinal Hawk Hammerhead Shark Moth Manta Ray Stingray Dragonfly Jellyfish Duck Grizzly Bear Armadillo Squid Rabbit Edited February 13, 200917 yr by Bobby
February 13, 200917 yr Hmm I think if you want to be unique you can use something else than the animals you have chosen. hmm lemme think
February 13, 200917 yr ah since your Kamen Rider is that of intelligence maybe you can focus on animals that exhibit intelligent behaviour... here's what I have. Big Bads Chimpanzee Gorilla Orang Utan Crows Dolphin elephant Dogs/wolf pig/hog rodents parrots.
February 15, 200917 yr er, dont ask. anyway, just inc ase you forgot'ill repsot my suggestion okay, here's my suggestion for your kaijin. Do you know of Personal Demons in psychology? Personal Devils Their orgin is ambigiuous, however, it is clear that they are a threat to humanity. They have no definite form.Their form is mainly based on the emotion the human mainly experiences and exhibits.Mainly, they are invisible to normal humans. The emotions are fear, doubt, worry, shame, guilt and rage.Mainly negative emotions. They prey on mainly humans with lots of those emotions. Attacking method When they manage to get to a human, they will stay inside their mind.They will influence the human, into experiencing more of the negative emotions,until, when they have eaten enough of the negative emotions, they will be able to jump out of the human and manifest in physical form. Mainly, after manifesting, they can choose kill the human afterwards. Edited February 15, 200917 yr by spectre555
February 15, 200917 yr But make sure the Psychosians are dangerous otherwise there is no use for the Rider to exist.
February 15, 200917 yr Author I'm gonna make them dangerous. Just no homicide type thing. Not even making the victims die.
February 16, 200917 yr Author The woman who finalized the inspiration for this series lost consciousness and was taken away on an ambulance. So imagine what could have happened to cause that.
February 16, 200917 yr Hmm death or coma... sounds very serious indeed. But I think you can add that the patient ends up in a coma until the monster is defeated outside her mind.
February 16, 200917 yr Author How about if they do enough damage, the person ends up comatose??? That way, they can be conscious on many occasions when Medulla drives the Psychosians out.
February 16, 200917 yr Yeah as long as the readers feel for the victims's injuries it should be fine. I believe your psychosians are a hundred times more dangerous than an Imagin? Right, Bobby? I think you can use paralysis, anything that is associated with brain damage.etc should be the results. But I think the monster should be out of the brain? I think the Rider can drive the fella out of the patient's body but Medulla has to vanquish him outside the patient's mind in reality. Edited February 16, 200917 yr by Tales
February 16, 200917 yr Author That's actually what I was thinking. Medulla uses his bike to enter a person's mind to try & drive them out. Once out in the open, people can see the creatures and watch Medulla destroy them.
February 17, 200917 yr now this is getting dangerous for the victims I meant. I think you will have to come up with some sorta way Medulla's character can tell whether someone has a Psychosian on him/her. And also you have to vary the victim's symptoms like maybe he goes insane for a bit, err psychotic.etc Getting voices in your head can screw someone pretty badly.
February 18, 200917 yr I think next you have to develop him and your villains more. Like say how the protagonist get to don the Rider identity. And also what is the goals of Villains.
February 18, 200917 yr Author I TRIED to think of Medulla's info but my brain just kept wandering. Plus, my left eye was acting weird.
February 18, 200917 yr Author Sure. I've also been trying to work on my fifth Power Rangers team Science Force. I just figured out the Morpher Activation Call.
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