Okay, guys and girls, I've been writing a little story showcasing what I think would happen if the Guyver-verse and the Marvel Universe were to cross over. I've gotten a prelude and six short chapters in the can so far, and I was wondering if anyone could take a look and tell me what you think. Here's what I've got thus far:

GUYVERMARVEL.doc

I think it's great. It definitely has promise. All you need to do now is flesh it out some more and it'll do wonders.

Thanks, Toku_Warrior. Still working on more chapters (and correcting a few typos here and there -- that's what happens when you work late nights).

Also planning on exploring Sho and Spidey's interactions a little more, and I'm trying to see how I can get the rest of the cast into the mix.

Edited December 31, 200817 yr by jerrygoodman

That was definately a good start to things. I look forward to seeing how it shapes up.

Thanks, Kenji. I'm in the process of putting together Chapter 8; trying to decide whether I should focus on Luke Cage or Wolverine next.

I have no idea who Luke Cage is, so I vote for Wolverine. :wink:

Elected, Kenji! And here's the rundown on Cage:

http://marvel.com/universe/Cage%2C_Luke

UPDATE: Got a few new chapters in, plus I smoothed out a couple of rough spots in the previous ones.

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Nice continuation. It's definately an intruiging story, and I find myself wondering where the other characters are going to end up.

It'd be interesting if Imakarum was in the goup that was blown out of their native universe, if only for the reactions of the Marvels to a person who'd been raised from the dead the way he was.

Well, I am definitely planning to bring the zoalords in, especially Imakarum and Archanfel. Just gotta figure out how, and when...

I look forward to reading your take on that, then.

Glad to hear it, Kenji. And thanks!

Very nicely done. Though, I wonder.....could the Gigantic Chrysalis cross the universal border to join with Sho? Are you even gonna add the Gigantic Armor?

Haven't thought that far ahead, Toku_Warrior, but I am considering it.

I think it might be possible for the Chrysalis to cross over, but due to the differing natures of the two universes, it may take a little longer for Sho to activate it. After all...different worlds, different rules.

True. I still like how it's coming along though.

I'm glad to hear it, TW. Working on the next batch of chapters as we speak...

UPDATE: Got four new chapters in the can, adjusted some more stuff in the previous ones. And I just brought Agito into the mix, along with...Doctor Doom!

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Very good. I can't wait to see how Wolverine would stand up to a Guyver.

Good continuation; it'll definately be interesting to see what the FF makes of Alkanphel, not to mention just how Agito and Dr. Doom "get along".

Oh, I imagine Victor and Agito will try to backstab one another the first chance they get...it's just a question of who's the more cunning :wink:

As for Wolverine fighting a Guyver, well...it's kinda hard for me to say, although I plan on having Logan go one on one with Agito.

And I'm thinking about throwing Deadpool into the mix too.

Cool. Makes me also wonder how Sho is gonna be able to deal with Spidey's wise-cracks.

Oh, don't worry, TW. I plan on having a field day with that

I really look forward to reading that. I hope Deadpool and Aptom get to have a go at each other, I bet they'd get along like a house on fire.

I'm thinking about that, Kenji. Even better -- true to Deadpool's nature, he'll be the only one to recognize that this is a fan-made story, and he's gonna be pretty bummed to know that he doesn't get to use his famous "little yellow boxes."

That's going to be fun, too.