the Rewrite/update plan for the next while.

[Sully]

Awesome. I guess this will be no comment, but since he has the DNA of a full zoalord, his proto zoalord abilities will be less pronounced if does get them.

That might not happen this time. Zoa-crystal being the cause (didn't know that back then that Takaya would write in that a Zoalord can't be absorbed by Aptom). The likelyhood of the weekness being there then for the new generation of the Zoalords doesn't make sense.

[McAvoy]

Well in any event the new Aptom got a better deal the old Aptom.

It would be interesting though with a Omega Blast Aptom vs. a Bio Titan though.

[Zoaknight]

Assuming Bio Titans don't possess some manner of defense against Aptom like Neo-Zektole & Zoalords do, I imagine Omega Aptom would become even more powerful if he absorbed a Bio-Titan and gained its ability to conduct fusion & draw power from others of the same type.

Anywho, since Aptom won't be absorbing that Proto-Zoalord like before, will Natasha's hate for him be written out or will Aptom simply kill her lover rather than absorb him? Thus maintaining Natasha's hate for Aptom and her motivation for serving Chronos so fanatically?

[Sully]

Netasha already servered Chronos "fanatically", she was a lost number who actively worked on their projects. She never "had" too but wanted too. There's no place yet really to show it but this character never needed her lover to die to want stay in Chronos.

[Zoaknight]

Netasha already servered Chronos "fanatically", she was a lost number who actively worked on their projects. She never "had" too but wanted too. There's no place yet really to show it but this character never needed her lover to die to want stay in Chronos.

Sorry, i know she was a very loyal chronos agent from the start and her zoalord boyfriend's survival or death wouldn't change that, I just meant that if he doesn't die this time around Natasha will be different from the lonely, bitter figure we know from before right?

[Sully]

The re-write does have a large number of changes to it. But it's mostly to add detail, the only characters who will have their time in the fiction changed enough that they go on a new path altogether is the Guyver Mercs. They never fight Chronos after splitting from ACTF (well at least not yet) in All Things change part 4.

They will have their own story line efectively as it's clear the Gen have plans for them and it's not them sitting on their backsides doing nothing.

Netasha's path will not change majorly at all. She might get more story, show more than has happened to her in both the past and present stories. But yes her partner will die and Aptom will still be the cause.

Rescue will be a very different story to what it was before as it'll be purely a Grakken and ACTF story. Any other events will be moved into All Things cHange part 1 and that then worked into a proper story. But overall what happened to a character before will still happen to characters in the re-write. Just the timing of it will be changed.

Aptom might still get his new form in the fan-fiction, but it will have to follow a logical reason.

[McAvoy]

I was thinking about that with Aptom. Since you have said the divergence point between the manga the fanfic is the battle in Arizona where Agito loses and Gigantic XD fights with the Dragonlord but somehow Dragonlord survives. Maybe Aptom couldn't find him when Dragonlord goes to Little Man Mode and escapes.

I am looking forward to total rewrite of Rescue. It should be a totally new story.

[McAvoy]

Ok. The question I have fits within this topic.

Sully, you meantioned recently that you plan on rewriting Union next after Part 5 of Time War. I am I correct in assuming:

1. Time War

2. Union of the Guyvers

3. Revenge/WG2

4. Rescue

5. All Things.

The big question is when do you plan on writing a new original story? Granted Time War is practically a new new story and Rescue will probably be too. I am asking because of the rewrites for the above will take years.

[Sully]

Ok. The question I have fits within this topic.

Sully, you meantioned recently that you plan on rewriting Union next after Part 5 of Time War. I am I correct in assuming:

1. Time War

2. Union of the Guyvers

3. Revenge/WG2

4. Rescue

5. All Things.

The big question is when do you plan on writing a new original story? Granted Time War is practically a new new story and Rescue will probably be too. I am asking because of the rewrites for the above will take years.

that would be correct, though I'd probably do the first part of the Assassin fiction betore 5 and then the second part after it. Though I don't see them being huge work, the lore behind the Gen needs to be put into those two stories and corrected, the rest of it though won't see much if any change.

[McAvoy]

I agree. All Things doesn't really need it with just altering "Creator" to Gen or Uranus.

Revenge just needs to be reedited to story format as opposed to script and whatever new things that pop up.

Good to hear on Assassin story.

[Sully]

all Things will in fact get some major changes to it. on the level of Time War and what's planned for Rescue

[McAvoy]

Oh yeah I forgot about that. I seriously didn't think it needed that much beyond the new stuff you put in Time War and whatever you plan to add or take away in the later rewrites.

[Sully]

All things needs things like more story on the Mercs, their Units (that's almost a complete part in itself). Zeugma is another major character and so on including Cori and her story to become the Battle Guyver.

Then there is the Grakken and Chronos storyline and so on.... All Things needs a lot of work to fit in correctly and work as a nice story. IT introduces a lot of characters and Changes (hense the name). The Mercs story as pointed out by you guys and myself simply sucks... they get paid to kill themselves? Who in their right mind would attack Chronos after what Alknaphel does to Warrior Guyver? Nope Baxter has a plan, and it's not to go head strong against Chronos and gettings wiped out by Kron and Alkanphel.

Zeus is another major event of All Things that wasn't "cool" enough... so simply put I think All Things Change could do with the level or work I put into time War.

I've updated the list at the start of this topic too so show the current plan.

[McAvoy]

I forgot about all of that. Well for me it would be Part 4 that would need major rewriting and the first three just needs updating. I would probably break up Part 4 into two parts.

[Sully]

I forgot about all of that. Well for me it would be Part 4 that would need major rewriting and the first three just needs updating. I would probably break up Part 4 into two parts.

The problem is Rescue. The story as it is doesn't work and does not focus on the actual "Rescue" near enough. So basically once you cut everything out of the story just leaving Guyver US, Warrior Guyver and maybe also Warrior Guyver 2 filling in the gap from the Rapier Guyver (who's not going to be in the wrote story) that just leaves the Grakken. They need this story to properly intruduce them (namely the Sect) into the fan-fiction. 7 Days part 7 did a lot, but story wise the build up from Union, Time War and Revenge with their story line leads to Resuce.

The impact on that to All Things change is two fold. 1, events that take place in Resuce to with Chronos, XT9 and Zygote Guyver all need to flow into the first 2 parts of All Things Change. That will not flow natually so more will need to be added to the story to make it work. Next the Grakken story only really begins to hit All things Change at the point the Merc's show up (as you guys know their story will happen very differently to before too so again that's a lot of work).

You don't realise it yet, but will as the rewrite hits it, but All Things Change needs a lot of work. A lot of Merc characters were simply ignored and need development. They have to get a least starting development in this story as 7 Days doesn't feature them at and the next 2 are set in other Universes. They will mostly be in the same part of the story.

Next you have Zygote Guyver, her story is setup nicely in the Assasin Guyver and then 7 days. But her intoduction will be a little different than before but she still will attack Warrior Guyver in the early parts of All things Change.

Battle Guyver, doesn't happen until the end of All Things Change, so Cori's story needs to be handled differently.

Zeugma's introdction in part 4 sucks. So basically will happen differently to before and will have more focus on her being out of time. ACTF won't come involved in her story right away either giving her time to develop.

The events leading up to Dreadnought's return need to go differently too. Basically timing wise the story of the Lorcan / Jason "Warrior Guyver" will conclude without "real" Jason being involved.

Kron is the major villian in the first 3 parts of the story as before, but a lot of what he does to the leadership of Chronos this time isn't from him but by Alkanphel himself so when the other leaders of Chronos return their organisation is ready.

Zeus will be Kron's natual enemy in the story, so Agito's story in All things Change is more on the lines of the main hero for much of the story (in his own dark way that is).

Basically when you take all that above in account All things change does a lot, but the re-write really hits home in this story like it does in Time War. But what I've planned will work very nicely.

[Sully]

Part 2 of Union is already at 3 pages of newly wrote story. Much like part 1 though I don't think much of the orginal fiction will remain by the time the re-write is done.

I've being looking ahead of this too to see in terms of "heavy rewriting" which stories will get the same treatment as Union.

Warrior Guyver 2 Character story -> Will not get heavy editing, but will get some additonal story to explain why in this story Agito is more of a hero than he normally would be. It will also show a little more about the Gen. But

Revenge -> this story will get a lot of need added elements to it and basically is a "Chronos" story.

Rescue -> Very heavy rewrite. BAsically will be a new story. Any elemenets to do with Chronos, Kavzar or Guyver XT9 will move to All Things Change.

NOW heres the thing. I want to also get the story preogressing again. So Story 9 will also be wrote while I'm working on Union. This story will be called "The Illusion of Choice". The only thing I'll say about this story is that it's set a month after the events of 7 Days.

[jedi-guyver]

Excited is an undersatement. I love how complete of a story its becoming

[largo]

I wait with baited breath

[Sully]

What I'm about to write here ties into also why I've not updated the site the last weekend. For the next few weeks I'll be focused on working on Character profiles for the site. The reason being is while yes, it's a bit of a pain in the ass and doesn't progress the actual story much it makes it a lot easier to write in the future and help the story some much needed character development of lesser characters.

If you look at Illusion of choice's preview you see how the story gets better with a developed character that has back story giving you his point of view. It helps you understand the character more and it gets more fun to read when you see what will happen to other characters later based on his choices.

it also helps keep track of a mammoth cast, today for example I was looking at my Merc cast and wondering... "hmm Marian Selfridge, what type of woman is she..." I realised it's a completely blank slate at the moment. The character has never had any real development ideas in the past either. Her only story was an emotional wreak after the death of her husband (that event has since being erased story wise thanks to the re-write). So there's the one thing this character has, she loves her husband. That is it.

The problem is when you develop characters is keeping track of them all, so that is what I want out of the character profiles section. To be able to develop and keep track of the the characters in the story. It's good for me the writer, it's good for you the reader and its good for those slackers... aka fellow fan-fiction writers that sometimes... rarely write up some stuff.

Name: Alfrid Drano

Rank: One of the 12 Disciple Zoalords of Chronos

Age: 40

Family: Married to Marie Drano. One adopted child called Isis age 16.

Status: Alive

He is mild mannered, highly educated and very cleanly spoken. He generally does not get on well with people who use swearwords a lot and believes it to be a sign of low standing and a lack of respect in oneself.

Alfrid Drano has being a full member of Chronos since the age of 18 coming from a family with a multigenerational standing within the organisation. He rose through the ranks of Chronos Mexico quickly like his father before him. Alfrid established himself as a person quickly able to get a hold of any situation and turn it to the advantage of Chronos.

Alfrid came to the attention of Hamical Valkus sixteen years ago during the Isis incident. The Drano family was selected to adopt the child.

Originally selected to be a Hyper Zoanoid and having gone through the training process Alfrid was selected to be an Apprentice Zoalord of Chronos. He has since successfully managed Chronos forces in Texas against the threat of the Warrior Guyver during the sleep of the Elite Supreme Zoalords earning a promotion to the rank of a Disciple Zoalord.

The above is the character profile of Alfrid Drano. Basically all future profiles will be somewhat like that.

[largo]

Alrightso i was reading the rewrote time war and i noticed something is Elera krons decendant?

[Sully]

Yes indeed she is

[largo]

Then the actions of all things change or is it revenge make alot less sense,

[Weltall2]

hey nice to see things are moving along. i think i will contribute instead of luck for now.

Time war was nice I have yet to read union though. I like how krullnar is less of a jerk, in time war. the story behind Zuegma was nice too. all in all looking forward to reading more.

[Checap]

Hey guys this provably isn't the right post for this but since I have just registered I can't pm yet, any ways been a fan of this site and the stories portrayed here for a very long time, and I have enjoyed rereading them often enough.

I would have love to have those stories on the go so in that spirit I have a gift for brian (hopefully he won't take it the wrong way) I compiled his warriorguyver fan fiction into an ebook in ePub format ready for any device with all proper credit and disclaimers , but I don't have his email. So if anyone could help me out, thanks in advance

[Sully]

Hey guys this provably isn't the right post for this but since I have just registered I can't pm yet, any ways been a fan of this site and the stories portrayed here for a very long time, and I have enjoyed rereading them often enough.

I would have love to have those stories on the go so in that spirit I have a gift for brian (hopefully he won't take it the wrong way) I compiled his warriorguyver fan fiction into an ebook in ePub format ready for any device with all proper credit and disclaimers , but I don't have his email. So if anyone could help me out, thanks in advance

Wow I didn't see this until now, my email is lep@eircom.net (it hasn't changed in a long time).

This is something I've being thinking of too but don't want to do until after the stories have being rewritten.

Speaking of which, the rewrite will be pushing out to both Matt's and Andre's stories. To reflect this when the Character Profiles section is updated it will be based on the re-written character. Bare in mind this can be quite different e.g. the Mercs never attacked Chronos when they joined Baxter Banner.