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This is great, Decade Warrior! And as spectre said try to keep chatting to a minimum unless necessary. Besides Bobby, I too could not advance much in Kero Ep2. But if it's okay for you, I would like to add something in between pt 13 and 14 13. Genbu crashes into a dumpster and makes a body-sized indent. 13.1. Ghoul: Mikoto! 13.2. Cosmos: Alright, I am very mad! That's no way to treat a lady! 14. Ghoul summons his Cross Buster and starts firing at Decade with the guns auto-salvo mode.
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Ok People I think we need some rules to regulate ourselves as we the authors post in this pic. I have posted the Rules in the first post.
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for 10. of Ep1, we all have to get our Riders to fight Decade with your weapons.
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Ok here goes 6. Ghoul: Your journey ends right here! 7. The Riders poised to attack 8. Decade takes out his Deca booker and changes it into a Sword. 9. The Riders attack all at once striking Decade with all their might. 10.<here Decade will attack each Rider individually.>
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Okay this is the topic where we will have all the plannings for the Decade Fanfic. Lets Begin! 1. If the situation allows, we can control each other's riders and decade's actions and words. 2. if any author is in disagreement with the way another author is controlling his rider, please try to be civilised and not flame him like in HJU. Just tell him in a PM or in a reply and try to get a good solution. 3. In most situations, We will all be in control of our Riders. but Decade, Diend and the storyline will be under my control.
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Kamen Raido...... Diend!
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Maybe you can name your ultimate form, Medulla: Cerebro Form? Or Grey Form? Grey for Grey matter in the brain.
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here's something for you http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Primary_motor_cortex http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Muscle#Nervous_control
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adrenaline comes from the kidneys not the brain... maybe you need more brain research.
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ok here it is
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That's cool! But which Medulla are you going to use? Mine or Decade Warrior's? The symbol has been done for you.
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Ok but how does the Rider look like? I think I forgot or something.
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New entry Sigh... I wonder whenever I go I seem to always bump into people from this forum whom I have offended in the past. Even in Japan Hero Access or HJU, I find no solace from them. So far they have left me alone which is good, but I can't help but feel uneasy.
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I think the Axe can have brainy patterns on the blade?
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Gimme a while to come up something.
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I will give you a hand if you need one okay?
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Name? Origin?
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hmm need a another brain or two to help?
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I think next you have to develop him and your villains more. Like say how the protagonist get to don the Rider identity. And also what is the goals of Villains.
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now this is getting dangerous for the victims I meant. I think you will have to come up with some sorta way Medulla's character can tell whether someone has a Psychosian on him/her. And also you have to vary the victim's symptoms like maybe he goes insane for a bit, err psychotic.etc Getting voices in your head can screw someone pretty badly.
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Yeah as long as the readers feel for the victims's injuries it should be fine. I believe your psychosians are a hundred times more dangerous than an Imagin? Right, Bobby? I think you can use paralysis, anything that is associated with brain damage.etc should be the results. But I think the monster should be out of the brain? I think the Rider can drive the fella out of the patient's body but Medulla has to vanquish him outside the patient's mind in reality.
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Hmm death or coma... sounds very serious indeed. But I think you can add that the patient ends up in a coma until the monster is defeated outside her mind.
