Fan Fic Idea

[Guest]

I was recently discussing the idea of RP with TheGuyversWill the other day. Turns out what I remember of it is pretty much a distant memory. On that note, GuyversWill gave me an idea of starting my own Fan Fic about my exploits. If you've read The GSF page, Will's history makes mention of a group called Guyver Force Alpha or GFA. That was the group I was in.

The Fan Fic I plan to write is about the GFA but mainly around my character Grant Knight. The story will progress from the beginning, Grant’s reason for fighting the Guyver Elite and later, his betrayal. I plan on creating data files first. The files will be that of characters I created. The other characters in the story, I will not touch out of respect.

I’m going to try and right this story with none liner aspect in mind. What I mean is I will be going from different points in the past and present, basically flash backs and flash forwards. I’m thinking about writing almost in the same fashion as a movie script i.e. screen heading, action sequences, and character names with dialogue underneath. I’m curious to what you guys think about that.

[Guest]

I wrote this today, just jumped into it. Tell me what you guys think so far.

“I hear them coming...figments of the past meshing those of the present. In obscurity, I hide a coward...in the darkness I conceal myself. I have run away from who I am and who I once was. I am contempt with that...yet I yearn for a sort of death to bring me liberty from this cerebral chain fastening me to this world. I wish to brake free from the life I once led and the choices made... Living in a moment of pain and agony, betrayal has left me suffering, wanting to brake away from the shade and enter into the world I have forgotten, but, will I allow myself?”

Standing motionless, green eyes trembling to the sight they never wanted to witness. Radiant hues of amber and gold bouncing of tints of cobalt, a playful melody of flame uncontained, unbound to the building and the memories that they cinder away. His world destroyed, the only home he had known taken by the immense power of the one he called friend. Grant fell to his knees, the impact of which emulated the mental destruction of his psyche, his fist clinched, slamming into the ground causing a minor tremor to flow on the surface.

“I told you once... Hanging onto insignificant emotions would only make you frail, unstable and irrational. Letting yourself get close to those you knew were going to die was just...stupid. This is war Grant. It was bound to happen... You knew this, you just didn’t know it was gonna be me.”

Looking over his shoulder Grant saw the silhouette of a young man, his body overtaken by a blanket of pale blue energy: a form of Zoa-kinetic energy much like that of a Zoalord.

“Javan?” Grant spoke with a mix of anger and sadness.

“Why...why did you do this?”

Javan took a few step forwards, wanting to view his once comrade. Javan’s translucent like eyes soaking up everything, he could sense the growing animosity within Grant growing like a virus. A smile grew on his lips before answering.

“I perceived an influence Grant. It understood me as if apart of me. What I sought, what it required where both equal. He...he wanted to give me power...MORE POWER!”

Getting up to his feet, Grant pushed forwards Javan with frightening speeds. Grasping hold of Javan’s shirt collar, Grant lifted him up into air. Javan smiled, his faces some how twisted with a growing lunacy.

“All this for power? Power is nothing to those who have no need of it!”

“Clichéd words from those who have none. You, like me were offered his gift, yet you denied! You could have been the perfect being not unlike me Grant. The supremacy of The Creators, their true influence! Think about it...no more running, no more having to fight day after day for nothing but subsistence! Answer me honestly; what have you been doing these past two years Grant? You have become stronger; stronger than I gave you credit for...but the inevitability of this assimilation with Aaron was clear to happen...”

“Your right about one thing... I had the opportunity, I was asked, but... to become like him would mean becoming the thing I hate most Javan...never could I allow myself. Never will I allow myself to be taken...”

Javan’s laughter filled the air behind the cindering and cracking of the GFA base. Grabbing hold of the forearm that elevated him from ground, Javan’s hand burst with an energy, the current flowing into Grant causing his hand to let go while pushing him into air. Javan fell to his feet as he watched Grant crash into the ground, sliding then coming to rest.

“I was ordered to bring you in alive, honestly, I don’t see the point... Timothus has left you, do you understand? You are alone and yes, you have failed... Every unit with in the Guyver Force Alpha has been murdered or come to the Elite... I’m sorry Grant, dreams die and now angels lament. It’s just the way things go... You can’t change the fates; your hand cannot alter the tides as you are. You are neither demon nor divinity...all you are...all you could be is a mistake, a preposterous weapon that lacks the capacity to slaughter. You where never worth giving a Unit...you are nothing more than a child who thought it could change the world...accept this.”

Getting to his feet, Grant looked towards his former comrade with disgust. He knew now that who ever this was, it was no longer the ally that fought for the same aspiration as he. Curving around Grant’s body, a sputter of sallow energy seemed to mantle him ever so gently. Javan smile seemed to lessen, turning to that of a snarl as he knew what could transpire, but in this case, was going to happen. Wrapped in a vortex of clear energy, Grant’s eyes where shrouded by his black hair flowing violently with no coordination. The ground below Grant’s feet cracked as debris lifted into the air until finally his lips moved and formed the word...

“Guyver...”

[TheGuyversWill]

It freakin' rocks!

So does the rest of it!

Keep writing!

[Ultimate W'kar]

Good start I to am working on a story and a data file. which for it i have designed a new matrix only for w'kar the W'kar Matrix. for he what my stories character that it will revolve around.

Subject:W'kar Matrix Gigantic Warrior Enhanced W'kar Zoalord Guyver

CodeName: Serris

Host:Serris

Statues:Lord and master of the HTS.

i'll post the rest when i get done Writing it then typing it.