Here's the first ten chapters of my first Guyver fanfic for your enjoyment. So, enjoy!

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Chapters 11 - 20:

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I'd like to get some comments on these. Thanks!

Chapters 21 - 30:

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Chapters 31 - 40:

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Chapters 41 - 50:

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Chapters 51 - 60:

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I'm reading this fic just now(was about time, ne?) It's soooo damn good and cute!

When Kenji thought uncle Balcus was Santa I almost fell off my chair

Thanks for reading; you're the first one to comment and I'm glad you liked it. Anything else you wanted to say?

Chapters 61 - 70:

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Mmhh... I suck in constructive criticism -.-

I read both Dual Life Reflection and this one. I like your style too much, especially how you describe battles(reading about battles in a fict usually bores me, especially if the author is a man). POVs are well made, you slip into characters' minds very well.

I can't tell anything about grammar for obvious reasons.

But... why does it end like that??! >< it's so harsh!

It ends like that becase that was how the story turned out; I don't plan my endings to any real extent, and I wanted to follow as close to the Manga as I could. That was how things turned out in the manga, ya know? :wink:

Chapters 71 - 80:

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Yes... but! >< I'm a poor fangirl who needs fics!

Yes, I can see that. :wink: I'm grateful that you took the time to read this story of mine, and I'm glad you liked it too.

Here's the last five chapters:

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