Guyver and the order of chronos

[The Crimson Guyver]

another one heres a part of it.

*Entering the scene to Chronos USA building* "Sir Chronos Japan was wrong there aren't just 3 units on earth!" as a chronos soldier runs up to Chronos USA's head officer Richard Dark. " We found a cavern with over 30 units" "hmmm good send men over to collect them for chronos research" Dark said while looking out the window. " Yes sir I'll tell them!" as the soldier ran back down the stairs. " Great the lord will be pleased mhehehehe". * Scene goes to a group of people about 13 people* " Heh can't wait until we set up camp" Gary said eagerly " Wheres the camp site again?" Kevin asked as he scratched his head. "Right by a cavern I found we could explore it when we're done setting up camp" Luke said looking back at the group grinning " Almost there guys". As the group came up to the cave where their camp site would be pt up they saw men running into the cavern with weird shaped suitcases. " Hold up!" Luke said putting up his hand as the group stopped " What is it?" Gary asked. " Group of some soldiers entering the cave" Luke answering the question. " Lets follow them" Brittany insisited " No they could have guns" Luke declined. " Hey I still have my six shooter with me man" Kevin said " Hey we're goin in" Gary said running in. " Wait ..... ahh crap ok" Luke said as the group all ran in. " Well why do you think they're down here Gary?"Josh asked " Oh you finally talk well anyways probably jewels or some thing they have some new suit I've never seen before Josh" Gary answered. " Plus they were jumping really high and far they must have been genetically enhanced or something" Josh said. As the group finally caught up with the strange soldiers one of them caught them. " Hey guys we've got some followers here what should we do with them" the soldier that found them said " we should play around with them hehehe" As the one talked he took off his helmet and transformed into a monster with one horn and very very muscular body. The girls screamed " Holy drenn!!!" Gary said scared " Hurry get you six shooter out Kevin!!!" Josh yelled. Kevin got out his six shooter and shot it 5 times the fastest he could shoot hitting the monster causing no damage " Oh boy now what!" Brittany implied. " We run!!!" Gary said while running past the soldiers and monster and then tripping into a small water hole in the cavern. " Ahh crap hes probably unconcious in the water now!!" Josh said with a annoyed voice then a light shined from the giant puddle. " What was that!" a soldier said looking back. " Nothing lets just take care of these imbosiles transmutation NOW!!!" the monster said as the other soldier transformed into other hideous monsters and some looked the same.Right as Josh was grabbed by the first transformed monster the water exploded and another creature came out yet looked more robotic. "What I thought chronos only created zoanoids!" One of the creatures yelled with a grumbly voice " hold on let gregole take care of this puny guy hes the strongest which gregoles up to it" one creature asked. " I will" one of the green horned zoanoids said walking up to the newcomer. As gregole grabbed the horn of the newcomer he tried to break it but insstread it cut his hands in half and the gregole screamed in pain. " Im-impossible that that that must be a guyver!!!" One of the zoanoids said taking a step back. As the guyver grabbed the horn of his opponent doing the same thing he tried and in 3 seconds the guyver broke the gregole's horn as it exploded. " aaaaah!! you ****ing puny thing you can't do that!!!" gregole yelled in pain and then grabbing him trying to squeeze him to death or in half but then the guyver's arms glowed and blade popped out and cut off gregole's arms. The guyver then grabbed gregoles head and then snapped his neck. " holy crap attack everyone!!!!" another gregole said. As they ran at him the unkown guyver opened up his chest and the chest started to glow very bright as all of the zoanoids jumped at him. " oh boy to the walls guys!" Elnea yelled and they all did as the guyver's chest did a large energy blast wiping out the zoanoids totally. As the guyver just stood there his eyes went to a normal pail pink. " uh guys is that you?" the guyver asked them. " Gary is that you!" " ya who else would it be?" as Elnea picked up one of the suitcase and Gary's reflection showed him he look like a monster. " what what I'm I'm a monster! NOOOOO!!!!!!!!" As he yelled the suit disappeared and he was back to normal. " Ok thats weird there must be something in the water" Kevin said walking over to the what was waterhole but now bloodpool and he reached in and grabbed a weird shaped object with a glowing orb in the middle. " hmmm whats this?" as the orb tangled with purple strings then lunged at him covering his face. " Holy drenn!!" Josh yelled " Dont hold on" Gary said " lets see what happens"..... to be continued

[largo]

It's ok but some geek didn't invent the enter key for nothing try using it it would make the readers job much easier.