My fan fic character

[warrior reaper]

This is a character i've made up. I know it's bad so if you know a way to fix it let me in on it.

First it's a wizerd class unit

it is as strong as a proto zoalord

can control the darkness

has a scith

and a M shaped grav orb

has black armor and blue tubing in the joints

I know I can't spell and that's it

[Guest]

Ok, so what about the charactor himself?

Where does he come from? Who are his freinds? What does he want to do in life, and how does becoming a guyver change all that? Is he totally devoted to being a guyver now, or is he only doing it when he absolutly must?

[omegaling]

As YoungGuyver pointed out, developing a character is more than just being a Guyver. However, no one can *tell* you how to make a character; you just need to find a starting point and work from there. Begin with the questions Y.G. gave you.

Developing a character can take a long time before they're anywhere near perfection. Even when you think you might know one of your characters, something might happen later on when they pull a complete 180 for you. They begin to take a life of their own. It might sound weird, but you'll know when you get there.

Until then, start with the questions, then expand on that through fanfic and RPG writing. Anything can happen then. Good luck!

[warrior reaper]

right now all I have for the host is he is 15

when he first becomes a guyver he kills his parents in self def mode and hates the guyver

Thank you for the help