Unholy terror- Hell on earth.

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Okay so i recovered a little form my writers block and this is a little preview of the fic im working on. And as always and comments r welcomed.

A whip slashes through the air as it settles on the back of a young fat boy. The boy is screaming in agony, his back sore and bloody with whip marks. his hands locked with cuffs to a staircase. Blood oozing down his back like water rushing out of a lake. The boys face exruciated with pain, his mouth screaming for help, for mercy

"Stop it daddy," he screamed. "Stop it, i'll be good honest. I wont mess in your machines again daddy PLEASE STOP IT."

His father, Dr Priest a scientist who lost sanity when ever somebody messed with in his labarotary had been whipping his boys back as if he meant to skin him alive. Then suddenly he stopped and spoke his his hoarse voice.

"If i catch you around here Lee, i'll kill ya, you understand me i'll kill ya"

The boy nodded his head in relief. His dad uncuffed his hand told him to beat it before he changed his mind. Lee ran upto his room and locked himself in. He went to the bathroom and opened the shower and started to wash his back. The blood flowning down past his legs brought tears to the eyes of Lee. He started crying and didn't stop till the next day.

.......

Ever since his mom died Lee's father had become brutal with Lee, possible because he blamed Lee for her death, after all it was because of Lee she had that car accident. Since his wife died Dr Priest had stopped loving his son, instead he found another offspring in his inventions,his machines.

Lee had been banned to go out from the house since that death of his mom. He had no friends and his dad, his only family had turned against him. He was all alone, All he had to call his own was his computer and a couple of machines from his dad's lab. Infact he had gone once again to get some materials from the lab when his father caught him and whipped his hide off but he had managed to hide what he needed in his pocket and now he examined it. He like his father had a knack for inventing inventions. He was working on one such invention. A small helmet like machine with googles on the front which when worn could transport the wearer in a virtual world. Any place where the programmer programmed the machine to. The machine was almost completed. It had taken a gruelling 2 years to make the machine. He wanted his dad to be the first one to wear it and test it. So Lee could have revenge for all those years of torture. In his heart he hated his dad as much as he hated Lee. Now the time had come for judgement

Lee connecte the helmet to his machine with a few wires, then he opened a software he had desgined himself for this machine and loaded a disk labelled virtual hell. He started programming the helmet for its first use. The pogram asked for an intensity level and Lee took it to the 7th level, the highest level. His heart thumping wiht exceitment while his back throbbed with pain. He kept configuring the setting for nearly half and hour and when he thought it was perfect it, he unhooked it from his cpu and placed the machine beneath his

bed

" Just what till tommorow dad, just wait till tommorow " though Lee, a evil grin unveiling itself on Lee's face.

As night dawned, Lee heard a knock on his door. Then he heard his dad's voice.

"Dinner's ready"

lee opened the door and followed his dad downstairs. Dinner time was a subdued affiar with both them eating their meal with silence, unable to look at each other. Then his dad finished his dinner and left for bed.

"Now's the time" thought Lee.

He ran upstairs to his room, Took out the helmet and rechecked it settings on his computer. All was fine. Then he started to tip toe out of his room and into his dad's. Dr priests snores could be heard throught the house and it really wasnt necessary to tip toe since the noise his mouth made was a racket of it's own.

Lee entered the room and saw his dad sleepin lazily on his bed. Lee made a sudden movement by putting the helmet on his dad's face waking him up but the helmet was active and his dad woke up in a virtual Hell.

The effects were immediate. His body started writhring and curling in pain. His screams silenced by the helmet. And so it began. His slow death in a Hell desginer for him by his own offspring.