Guest Posted April 28, 2004 Posted April 28, 2004 Okay i've been working on a different fic that's purely fantasy but use's mythological and religical figures. This fic is part humour, part action and part adventure with no main character. I hope you enjoy the starting of the fic as i work on the further parts of the fic and as usual and comments and criticism are appericiated. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- A universe that only most human can think about and see after death is on the verge of destruction. The afterworld is in despair and it's ruler the Grim Reaper is on the verge of loosing his control over the dead. The river of soul is being drained of souls by an unknown source and every soul lost weakens Grim. The ruler of hell Satan and his dark minions are desperatly trying to save Grim but to no avail. Now they might have to summon the 5 unholy creatures more dangerous and more evil then Satan himself, those creatures might be the only hope for Grim's survival as only those 5 Unholy can save his bony hide. Deep within the skeletal caverns of the underworld Grim sit's on his throne. The area around his throne icy as his dead minions surrond the main chamber of the underworld. Neither of the skeletons are speaking as they are much too scared of Grim. He is the ruler of the dead and the soul of river. Two one eyed giants enter the chamber as the skeltons move to make way for them. "Come Gog, Magog." Grim spoke in a chilling voice, "Have you figured out what the hell is wrong." "Not yet" replied Gog in his deep coarse voice. "Fool's, i gave you ample time to figure out the root of the problem and still you dissapoint me." shouted Grim. "Master, we think it's Armageddon who has damaged your river but unfortunately we cant find him anywhere." replied Magog. "Then look harder you worthless pile of maggots" screamed Grim. "Now get the hell outta here. I have to visit that damned ruler of yours." With that the 2 giants left the cavern each havving to tussle with cerebrus the 3 headed dog guarding the enterance to the afterworld. Grim's scythe glowed a chilly blue color as he transported to the very place that scares the drenn out of any living or dead creature. A huge planet that seem's to burn with a black reddish fire and seem's to have a eyes and mouth roars with anger. The fire apparently is connceted to it's ruler's thoughts and moods and clearly shows his feeling. 7 level's of pure torture, level of pure agony and pain, 7 types of people burning in the fire but only one ruler to forsee it all. Above the 7th level of hell sat the ruler of hell himself, Satan. His dark throne resembling a deadly creatures mouth. Countless demons stood around him, all discussing the latest threat to Satan. Satan himself was a hideous beast built on the lines of a professional weight lfiter, only more bulkier. 2 curving horns extended from his upper head and next to his ears protruded 2 ram like horns. A bright light shone in the burning room and Grim appeared. The area around him icy cold. "Will you keep a distance. You know that damn tempreature of yours gives me the shivers." yelled Satan. Quote
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