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Opinions For a Fan Fic: Aptom's Love Interest?

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Hi everyone.

I sort of got a muse and a hair up my butt to write some new fan fic.  I was working on a Twilight Saga/Guyver cross over fan fic a long time ago that I never finished.  I'm considering writing a new story and going back to rework the stuff I've already written. 

Now, to the meat of this topic.  I was wondering, since he's more heroic now since he absorbed a dying Hayami, why not give Aptom a love interest?  I was thinking of doing this by giving Jennifer, a vampire hybrid from Twilight that only exists in text, an identity.  She was born between the union of an amoral vampire hybrid and an unsuspecting human woman who died as a result of her birth.  Though her father tried to raise her as a demigod and to look down on humans as a food source, she's got far more compassion and empathy for humans than her father would desire (though she hides this from him for a long time). 

She's actually by nature kinda like Shizu, as in extremely loving, kind and gentle, though she can be extremely dangerous when she needs to be to anyone who threatens her, and especially her loved ones and the innocent.  As far as any special talents or powers she has, she's an extremely gifted computer hacker, a skilled marksman (though she prefers not to use firearms), and very skilled in melee/hand to hand combat.  She can also manipulate gravity to levitate or use energy attacks, similar to the Guyver units.  

As to what she sort of looks like and what has inspired her creation in this way, look no further than my new profile pic.  Yep, I'm celebrating the fact that I've become a Victoria Justice fan girl.  And besides, I'd think that after what he's been though and what he's learned, I'd think that Aptom would have a thing for brainy brunettes who have both a sweet and fierce side.

Let me know what you think :)

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It's an interesting idea.  Just gotta be careful in how you flesh out the OC and make sure they have actual chemistry.

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How would Aptom get along with a girl who usually is a bit of a peppy, quirky hippie?  Maybe he'll appreciate her fierce/stand up for herself and others side.  I also see a bit of this in Natsuki, and I know that there's people who ship Aptom with Natsuki, except for the hippy part (VJ strikes me as a bit of a modern hippie, but in a good way).

I'd also like to create a character who's aura can be a morale booster in and of itself.  And I think that Agito needs a female foil, at least someone who's more of a foil than Shizu.

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Hi Everyone.

I've decided to make a few changes to my character.  Not a ton will change about her personality-wise, but I've decided to re-name her Naomi and have her have no direct connection to any Twilight characters.  In other words, she's not a totally original character in her own right.  She's still heavily influenced by Victoria Justice and some of her TV and film characters.  Namely Tori from Victorious, Lola from Zoey 101, Lindy from Eye Candy and Naomi from Naomi and Ely's No Kiss List (all are good if you like teen sitcoms for Victorious and Zoey 101, teen/YA thrillers for Eye Candy, and rom-coms for No Kiss List).  She's also a bit influenced by Victoria's character Harmony from the new rom-com Summer Night. 

Being said that she's an original character and such is no longer connected to (or rather based on) a Twilight character, she is related to the character Joham as his biological daughter, and to Nauhel and his sisters as their youngest sister.  However, as she was actually raised by vampire or vampire hybrids that respect human life, she appreciates and loves people, much to her father's chagrin.  She also fosters a deep dislike of him for that reason. 

Naomi will still be Aptom's love interest.  She'll also be a vampire hybrid that's 3/4 vampire and 1/4 human, which oddly does make her more seemingly "human" than other hybrids, mostly because of her lower body temperature (comparable to a human's) and she doesn't sparkle like a Twilight vampire or glow like a hybrid in direct sunlight.  That being said, Naomi does produce vampire venom and is as strong or maybe stronger and just as resilient as a vampire.  She's also hyper intelligent.

As to the story I'm working on, it'll be a comedy/fantasy/thriller inspired by Twilight and Guyver.  If you have any questions, feel free to ask :)

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Hi again.

This story in still in development and I haven't been able to write much because of work and such.  But I'm still thinking about what everyone thinks about such a story ark.  BTW, I do have to add that, like with some other things in the Guyver universe, names do mean something.  This character's full name is Naomi Ramona Vega.  The Vega part doesn't mean much aside from being a tribute/shout out to Tori Vega from Victorious and, like Tori and Victoria Justice (the actress who portrayed Tori), Naomi is part Puerto Rican. 

However, Naomi means pleasantness and Ramona means protector.  And both of those things apply to Naomi's personality. 

Hopefully I'll finally finish chapter 2 in the run up to Thanksgiving after getting through doctors appointments and a social event this week.

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Hi everyone.  

One of the things that I was struggling with recently was pinning down a name for my fan fic character.  She's existed for a while, but I kept trying to change her name to something else.

I originally wanted her to be a tribute to Victoria Justice and some of her film and TV characters.  As a character, she is that, but that's where the hang up on the name began.  Originally I was going to make her name a composite of VJ's character names.   So for a while I settled on Naomi Ramona Vega.  I then decided that I wanted something a bit more original sounding.  That's where I finally settled on her name.

So now, allow me to introduce my little friend, Ashley Naomi Bonner.  

First, her appearance.  If you've seen any photo of Victoria Justice from 2010-present, or watch an episode of Victorious or the film Naomi and Ely's No Kiss List, that's basically what Ashley looks like.  She's moderately tall for a woman, slender yet toned and somewhat shapely, with high cheekbones, long dark brown hair and chocolate brown eyes.  

Ashley has an eclectic sense of style, like Victoria, Tori and Naomi.  She'll wear just about anything if she likes it or thinks it's comfortable.  She's very much a T-shirt/tanktop/jeans/sneakers/Vans/flip flops girl.  She likes getting dressy on occasion, and loves wearing nail polish and doing her hair.  

As for her most important aspect, personality, again, look at VJ, Tori or Naomi, especially Victoria and Tori.  However, she does have an edge.  She's normally overwhelmingly nice, courteous, generous, and has an infectious smile and brightens the morale of people around her easily.

This is actually where we slightly get into supernatural aspects.  Her creation was influenced by the Twilight Saga and the Japanese manga and anime series Bio-Booster Armor Guyver.  Which isn't much of a surprise, given that my fan fic are based on Twilight and Guyver.  

Ashley is part human, part vampire.  In specific, Ashley is 3/4 vampire, and 1/4 human.  Her biological father is fully vampire, her mother is a vampire hybrid.   Getting into that, her biological father is Joham from Twilight, an amoral "scientist" who breeds part vampire children.  Ash from the start developed (even in the womb) a disdain for her father.   She's on excellent terms with her mother and adoptive father, though, as well as her siblings, though she likes some better than others based on personality.

As far as special talents or abilities, Ash can influence the mood of people near her, and she can also read minds to an extent.  She also, even compared to vampires and other hybrids, does poses above average strength and agility.  She's also excellent with handling weapons like knives, swords and firearms.  

That said, she abhors violence, and will only resort to such actions only when necessary.  She also gravitates to people with similar thoughts and virtues.  She's an extremely peaceful and pleasant person.  That being said, don't threaten her, or especially her family or loved ones.  Or any innocent people, for that matter.  That side of her does intimate others, especially those who aspire to do evil to others.  Her physical beauty also intimidates others, even with her exceptionally kind and gentle nature.  Granted, once befriended, Ashley shows that no one under normal circumstances has any reason to fear her.

That all being written and said, don't do anything to make her extremely angry or upset.  She's got a very low tolerance for innocent people being victimized, and one way or another, you'll regret gaining her ire.  

That's Ashley's place in the canon of my stories and what led to her creation.  Also, as a lot of you know, I have this huge crush on Victoria Justice and have for over a year now.  And prior to that I was a casual fan of hers dating back to 2015.  I originally had an idea as kinda a tribute to her by making her and her characters into a composite named Jennifer, a character from Twilight that was mentioned in the text of Breaking Dawn.  But then I decided to make her an all original, stand alone character.  Basically a clean slate.

So that's what lead to the creation of this character.  I hope you like her :)

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