Opinions For a Fan Fic: Aptom's Love Interest?

[*Chernaudi 242]

Hi everyone.

I sort of got a muse and a hair up my butt to write some new fan fic.  I was working on a Twilight Saga/Guyver cross over fan fic a long time ago that I never finished.  I'm considering writing a new story and going back to rework the stuff I've already written. 

Now, to the meat of this topic.  I was wondering, since he's more heroic now since he absorbed a dying Hayami, why not give Aptom a love interest?  I was thinking of doing this by giving Jennifer, a vampire hybrid from Twilight that only exists in text, an identity.  She was born between the union of an amoral vampire hybrid and an unsuspecting human woman who died as a result of her birth.  Though her father tried to raise her as a demigod and to look down on humans as a food source, she's got far more compassion and empathy for humans than her father would desire (though she hides this from him for a long time). 

She's actually by nature kinda like Shizu, as in extremely loving, kind and gentle, though she can be extremely dangerous when she needs to be to anyone who threatens her, and especially her loved ones and the innocent.  As far as any special talents or powers she has, she's an extremely gifted computer hacker, a skilled marksman (though she prefers not to use firearms), and very skilled in melee/hand to hand combat.  She can also manipulate gravity to levitate or use energy attacks, similar to the Guyver units.  

As to what she sort of looks like and what has inspired her creation in this way, look no further than my new profile pic.  Yep, I'm celebrating the fact that I've become a Victoria Justice fan girl.  And besides, I'd think that after what he's been though and what he's learned, I'd think that Aptom would have a thing for brainy brunettes who have both a sweet and fierce side.

Let me know what you think

[river_chaos 118]

It's an interesting idea.  Just gotta be careful in how you flesh out the OC and make sure they have actual chemistry.

[*Chernaudi 242]

How would Aptom get along with a girl who usually is a bit of a peppy, quirky hippie?  Maybe he'll appreciate her fierce/stand up for herself and others side.  I also see a bit of this in Natsuki, and I know that there's people who ship Aptom with Natsuki, except for the hippy part (VJ strikes me as a bit of a modern hippie, but in a good way).

I'd also like to create a character who's aura can be a morale booster in and of itself.  And I think that Agito needs a female foil, at least someone who's more of a foil than Shizu.

[*Chernaudi 242]

For those who are interested, I should be able to complete chapter 1 of this fan fic later today.

[*Chernaudi 242]

Hi Everyone.

I've decided to make a few changes to my character.  Not a ton will change about her personality-wise, but I've decided to re-name her Naomi and have her have no direct connection to any Twilight characters.  In other words, she's not a totally original character in her own right.  She's still heavily influenced by Victoria Justice and some of her TV and film characters.  Namely Tori from Victorious, Lola from Zoey 101, Lindy from Eye Candy and Naomi from Naomi and Ely's No Kiss List (all are good if you like teen sitcoms for Victorious and Zoey 101, teen/YA thrillers for Eye Candy, and rom-coms for No Kiss List).  She's also a bit influenced by Victoria's character Harmony from the new rom-com Summer Night. 

Being said that she's an original character and such is no longer connected to (or rather based on) a Twilight character, she is related to the character Joham as his biological daughter, and to Nauhel and his sisters as their youngest sister.  However, as she was actually raised by vampire or vampire hybrids that respect human life, she appreciates and loves people, much to her father's chagrin.  She also fosters a deep dislike of him for that reason. 

Naomi will still be Aptom's love interest.  She'll also be a vampire hybrid that's 3/4 vampire and 1/4 human, which oddly does make her more seemingly "human" than other hybrids, mostly because of her lower body temperature (comparable to a human's) and she doesn't sparkle like a Twilight vampire or glow like a hybrid in direct sunlight.  That being said, Naomi does produce vampire venom and is as strong or maybe stronger and just as resilient as a vampire.  She's also hyper intelligent.

As to the story I'm working on, it'll be a comedy/fantasy/thriller inspired by Twilight and Guyver.  If you have any questions, feel free to ask :)

[*Chernaudi 242]

Hi again.

This story in still in development and I haven't been able to write much because of work and such.  But I'm still thinking about what everyone thinks about such a story ark.  BTW, I do have to add that, like with some other things in the Guyver universe, names do mean something.  This character's full name is Naomi Ramona Vega.  The Vega part doesn't mean much aside from being a tribute/shout out to Tori Vega from Victorious and, like Tori and Victoria Justice (the actress who portrayed Tori), Naomi is part Puerto Rican. 

However, Naomi means pleasantness and Ramona means protector.  And both of those things apply to Naomi's personality. 

Hopefully I'll finally finish chapter 2 in the run up to Thanksgiving after getting through doctors appointments and a social event this week.