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Kenji Murakami

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I'm reading this fic just now(was about time, ne?) It's soooo damn good and cute!

When Kenji thought uncle Balcus was Santa I almost fell off my chair :lol:

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Mmhh... I suck in constructive criticism -.-

I read both Dual Life Reflection and this one. I like your style too much, especially how you describe battles(reading about battles in a fict usually bores me, especially if the author is a man). POVs are well made, you slip into characters' minds very well.

I can't tell anything about grammar for obvious reasons.

But... why does it end like that??! >< it's so harsh!

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It ends like that becase that was how the story turned out; I don't plan my endings to any real extent, and I wanted to follow as close to the Manga as I could. That was how things turned out in the manga, ya know? :wink:

Chapters 71 - 80:

SOM_71.htm SOM_72.htm SOM_73.htm SOM_74.htm SOM_75.htm SOM_76.htm SOM_77.htm SOM_78.htm SOM_79.htm SOM_80.htm

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